Kabhi Kabhi....( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on April 24, 2009, 06:23:20 AM
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Achcha lage hain rooth_na, tera kabhi kabhi
Taro ke jaise tootna, tera kabhi kabhi

Uska shehar uski gali aur uska dar
Lage hain apna shehar apni gali apna dar, kabhi kabhi

Na rehmat khuda ki thi, na kamaal mere amal ka
Mehakne lagi kabr, jo woh aane lage kabhi kabhi

Achche bhale the hum, jo teri aarzoo na thi
Bewaqt bewajah lage sochne tujhe kabhi kabhi

Na mausamo ka ilm, na baharo ka hosh tha
Q nazare ab yeh humko, satane lage kabhi kabhi

Jabse hui hain jaana, tumse dosti hamari
Dushman bhi humko dost, bulane lage kabhi kabhi

Na urdu ki samajh na pechaan kafiye ki
Miya GHAYEL bhi aajkal, karne lage Shayri kabhi kabhi

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2009, 06:24:46 AM »
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WAAH GHAYEL JEE...
BAHUT HE ACCHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2009, 06:45:52 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2009, 07:19:04 AM »
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Achca lage hai aapka kalam, kabhi kabhi ? ji nahin humesha  icon_thumleft

Bohot khoob Sajid Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2009, 05:59:39 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 24, 2009, 06:24:46 AM
WAAH GHAYEL JEE...
BAHUT HE ACCHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE.....


Bohat bohat shukriyaan Pandit....
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2009, 07:24:38 PM »
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Bahut Umda Lekh Hai Aap Ka Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2009, 02:38:18 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2009, 06:45:52 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai.. Applause Applause Applause

Thank You Khwaish......
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 03:26:13 PM »
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bohot acha likha hai sajid ji.. yunhi likhte rahiye..kabhi kabhi nahi always !xD
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2009, 07:33:13 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 24, 2009, 07:19:04 AM
Achca lage hai aapka kalam, kabhi kabhi ? ji nahin humesha  icon_thumleft

Bohot khoob Sajid Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Is it SO! Kabhi kabhi  DOH chalo achcha hua hamesha keh diya warna jhagda ho jata  DOH. Thank you Talat for always giving your time and comment to my work...
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2009, 08:08:28 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 24, 2009, 06:23:20 AM
Achcha lage hain rooth_na, tera kabhi kabhi
Taro ke jaise tootna, tera kabhi kabhi

Uska shehar uski gali aur uska dar
Lage hain apna shehar apni gali apna dar, kabhi kabhi

Na rehmat khuda ki thi, na kamaal mere amal ka
Mehakne lagi kabr, jo woh aane lage kabhi kabhi

Achche bhale the hum, jo teri aarzoo na thi
Bewaqt bewajah lage sochne tujhe kabhi kabhi

Na mausamo ka ilm, na baharo ka hosh tha
Q nazare ab yeh humko, satane lage kabhi kabhi

Jabse hui hain jaana, tumse dosti hamari
Dushman bhi humko dost, bulane lage kabhi kabhi

Na urdu ki samajh na pechaan kafiye ki
Miya GHAYEL bhi aajkal, karne lage Shayri kabhi kabhi

-Sajid Ghayel-


sajid sahab kya baat hai bhut achi ghazl kahi hai aapne daad qubool keejiye............
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2009, 08:17:51 AM »
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Wah Wah ustaad Wah maan gaye kya kahene maqte ke aur matle ke waise shayari ki samajh janab se ziyada yahan kiss ko hogi subhan allah apki ye mahenath jald hi rang laa -a- gi janab sajid sahab !! Allah apko khush o khurram rakhe !!

JQ
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2009, 08:52:06 AM »
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Bahoot acha likha hai apne sajid ji... hamesha ki tarah !
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2009, 07:25:32 AM »
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very nice sajid ji,too good.keep it up.
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2009, 07:52:08 AM »
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bohut khoob sajid ji Applause
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