Kabhi kajal kabhi bindiya............(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on December 25, 2008, 04:57:12 AM
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Kabhi kajal kabhi bindiya kabhi chudi kabhi gajra
Muje zakhmi kiya zalim tere inhi hathyaro ne

Kabhi khushboo kabhi aasoo kabhi tere khule gesu
Muje banaya apna kaidi tere inhi pehredaro ne

Kabhi payel kabhi tika kabhi woh tera kamarbandh
Muje jakad ke rakha hain teri inhi zanjeero ne

Kabhi yadein kabhi wadein kabhi woh haseen ratein
Zinda GHAYEL ko rak_kha hain tere inhi saharo ne  

                                                   -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2008, 05:23:59 AM »
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wah kya baat hain....gayelji.

teri har cheez mujhe gayel kar deti hain,
teri chahat hi mujhe zinda rahkhti hain.
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2008, 06:39:02 AM »
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Kabhi kajal kabhi bindiya kabhi chudi kabhi gajra
Muje zakhmi kiya zalim tere inhi hathyaro ne

Kabhi khushboo kabhi aasoo kabhi tere khule gesu
Muje banaya apna kaidi tere inhi pehredaro ne

Kabhi payel kabhi tika kabhi woh tera kamarbandh
Muje jakad ke rakha hain teri inhi zanjeero ne

Kabhi yadein kabhi wadein kabhi woh haseen ratein
Zinda GHAYEL ko rak_kha hain tere inhi saharo ne                                                    -Sajid Ghayel-

Wah! Bhaagya ho to aisaa hi ho!!
Achchhaa hai, ghaayal huye ho meyrey priya mitra!
Sukhee raho, jeewan jiyo, rati hai mitra wichitra!!
                                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2008, 06:40:39 AM »
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Kabhi kajal kabhi bindiya kabhi chudi kabhi gajra
Muje zakhmi kiya zalim tere inhi hathyaro ne

Kabhi khushboo kabhi aasoo kabhi tere khule gesu
Muje banaya apna kaidi tere inhi pehredaro ne

Kabhi payel kabhi tika kabhi woh tera kamarbandh
Muje jakad ke rakha hain teri inhi zanjeero ne

Kabhi yadein kabhi wadein kabhi woh haseen ratein
Zinda GHAYEL ko rak_kha hain tere inhi saharo ne 

                                                   -Sajid Ghayel-



Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bohat khoob sajid ji.
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2008, 10:11:38 AM »
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Kabhi kajal kabhi bindiya kabhi chudi kabhi gajra
Muje zakhmi kiya zalim tere inhi hathyaro ne

Kabhi khushboo kabhi aasoo kabhi tere khule gesu
Muje banaya apna kaidi tere inhi pehredaro ne

Kabhi payel kabhi tika kabhi woh tera kamarbandh
Muje jakad ke rakha hain teri inhi zanjeero ne

Kabhi yadein kabhi wadein kabhi woh haseen ratein
Zinda GHAYEL ko rak_kha hain tere inhi saharo ne 

                                                   -Sajid Ghayel-


Its sach mein so Beautiful... Usual Smile Applause
Bahut achha likha hai Sajid Ji..

And.. Good Replies Cara Ji.. and Abd Ji..
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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2008, 12:56:05 PM »
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Its sach mein so Beautiful... Usual Smile Applause
Bahut achha likha hai Sajid Ji..

And.. Good Replies Cara Ji.. and Abd Ji..
Thanks Mahiya ji!
          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2008, 02:01:22 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai SG ji, bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hi apne!! bahoot khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nice lines cara and Abd ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2008, 02:06:43 PM »
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Kabhi kajal kabhi bindiya kabhi chudi kabhi gajra
Muje zakhmi kiya zalim tere inhi hathyaro ne

Kabhi khushboo kabhi aasoo kabhi tere khule gesu
Muje banaya apna kaidi tere inhi pehredaro ne

Kabhi payel kabhi tika kabhi woh tera kamarbandh
Muje jakad ke rakha hain teri inhi zanjeero ne

Kabhi yadein kabhi wadein kabhi woh haseen ratein
Zinda GHAYEL ko rak_kha hain tere inhi saharo ne 

                                                   -Sajid Ghayel-


Bahut Bahut Khoob!!
sajid saheb aapne aakhir Mein jo baat kahi,dil ko chu gayi
"Zinda 'Ghayel' ko rakha hain tere inhi saharo ne" bahut ache Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2008, 04:40:49 AM »
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wah kya baat hain....gayelji.

teri har cheez mujhe gayel kar deti hain,
teri chahat hi mujhe zinda rahkhti hain.


Tareef aur Khoobsurat sher ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaan Cara
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2008, 04:46:22 AM »
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Wah! Bhaagya ho to aisaa hi ho!!
Achchhaa hai, ghaayal huye ho meyrey priya mitra!
Sukhee raho, jeewan jiyo, rati hai mitra wichitra!!
                                 - abd bundeli


Itni khoobsurat dua ke liye bohat shukriyaa bade bhai


Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bohat khoob sajid ji.


Thank You honey

Its sach mein so Beautiful... Usual Smile Applause
Bahut achha likha hai Sajid Ji..

And.. Good Replies Cara Ji.. and Abd Ji..

Bohat shukriyaan Mahi..

wah wah kaya baat hai SG ji, bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hi apne!! bahoot khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nice lines cara and Abd ji

Nawazish Karam Pooja..

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!
sajid saheb aapne aakhir Mein jo baat kahi,dil ko chu gayi
"Zinda 'Ghayel' ko rakha hain tere inhi saharo ne" bahut ache Applause Applause Applause


Thank You khwaish...

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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2008, 01:51:28 PM »
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Very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2008, 02:22:05 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai SG ji, bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hi apne!! bahoot khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nice lines cara and Abd ji
Pooja ji dhanyawaad!
               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2008, 12:19:10 PM »
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Very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice Applause

Thank you very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much angel
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