Kabhi sochte hain

by klaskar on April 11, 2010, 06:33:27 AM
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Kabhi sochte hain ki kaash aap hamari zindagi me aaye na hote,
To shayad aapki yaadon ko seene se lagake jeene ki aadat na hoti,
Kabhi sochte hain ki kaash aapse mohabbat na hui hoti,
Sach kahen tab shayad ye zindagi zindagi na hoti....
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 07:22:40 AM »
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Bahaut sahi baat kehdi apne inn 4 lines main..ager woh na aye hote toh yeh zindagi zindagi na hoti...Bahaut khoob... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 07:24:34 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
Lagta hai ki chot kaye hue ho
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 09:24:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil ji.very touching and lovely creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2010, 11:22:47 AM »
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very nice lines kapil ji.aap sochate rahiye. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2010, 02:26:43 PM »
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Gud one Kapil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2010, 06:33:27 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 11, 2010, 07:22:40 AM
Bahaut sahi baat kehdi apne inn 4 lines main..ager woh na aye hote toh yeh zindagi zindagi na hoti...Bahaut khoob... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2010, 06:34:31 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... ji bikul sahi kaha aapne... par ye sher maine chot khaane se pehle likha tha...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 11, 2010, 07:24:34 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
Lagta hai ki chot kaye hue ho
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2010, 06:35:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji in feelings ki depth ko samajhne k liye...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 11, 2010, 09:24:01 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil ji.very touching and lovely creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Thanx a lot Suresh ji. Aur sochenge nahi to shayad likh bhi nahi payenge....!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 11, 2010, 11:22:47 AM
very nice lines kapil ji.aap sochate rahiye. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Thanx a lot Neel...!!!

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Gud one Kapil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2010, 11:37:09 PM »
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kam lafzao'n main bayaan achha hai.....bahot khoob
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2010, 02:49:12 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji...!!!

Quote from: nazar ghouri on April 11, 2010, 11:37:09 PM
kam lafzao'n main bayaan achha hai.....bahot khoob
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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2010, 10:08:23 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 11, 2010, 06:36:58 PM
Thanx a lot Neel...!!!

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