-----/// Kabhi to /// ------ Hriday

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jaane  kitne  hi  baar  hamaaraa   naam   likh   ke mitaaye  honge
kabhi  to   hum  aapko  hadd  se bhi  zyaadaa  yaad  aaye honge

dekh    chidiyon  ke jode   ko  kabhi to aap  muskuraaye  honge
kabhi  to  aap  lehron  ke  sang  beh  jaane ko   lalchaaye honge

takiye   ko  seene  se  lagaake  jaane  kitni  baar  aap soye honge
yaad me hamaare aap hazaaron baar band kamre me roye honge

hamaare  poochhne pe  kehte  hain ki  mohabbat nahi  karte aap
aur  humse milne ki ummed   me jaane   kitne  diye jalaaye honge

kabhi   na kabhi  jarur aapke  haseen  khwaabon  me aaye honge
aake  khwaab  me aapko hum apne  seene  se tab  lagaaye honge

kabhi  to  aap  mere  geeton  ko apne  hothon  pe sajaaye  honge
jaanaa,   kabhi  to hum  hadd se  bhi  zyaadaa   yaad   aaye honge

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2012, 10:53:54 AM »
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Nice thoughts!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2012, 11:29:38 AM »
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Bahut Khub Hriday Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2012, 12:12:42 PM »
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Sach likha hai aapne Kapil jee,
Ek ek ehsaas, dil ko choote hua gujarta hai.
Ek baar padh kar man hi nahee bharta..baar baar padhne ko jee chaahta hai.
Bahut umda likha hai aapne.
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ek choti si koshish kee hai..
Na chaah kar bhi hamaari yaad meN vo roye honge
Ro ro kar Jaane kitne roomal aansuo se bhigoye honge
Din me bhi nazar aati hogi muskarati hui surat unko
haqeekat jaanne ko khud ko nakhoon chubhoye honge
jis gulaab ke kaantoN se hamare haath laal hue the
hame yakeen hai vo aaj bhi use apne paas sanjoye honge
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2012, 04:15:25 PM »
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Hriday ji, kamaal , bahot bahot achcha...jab bhi aap is tarah ka koi geet likhte hai...jaise lagta hai bas kya keh du, kya karu...kaise aap ekdam dil baat likh dete hai...

itna achcha itna achcha...mai bata hi nahi sakti....bahot bahot bahot achcha....aur bilkul sachcha!!

shayad aise hi geeton k liye log kehte hai "maar hi daloge!!"

Aur mkv ji aapki poem bhi itni khubsoorat hai ki bas....mai bahot lucky hu jo maine Yoindia join kia aur aap jaise bade bade shayro ke saamne apni kuch choti koshishe , kavitaye rakh pai.....shayad aapke suggestions se mai aur achcha likhpau

Thank u Yoindia, Thank u all of u!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2012, 04:22:50 PM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi khub bahut hi zabardast tareef ke liye alfaz kam........

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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2012, 06:03:04 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 21, 2012, 09:42:47 AM
jaane  kitne  hi  baar  hamaaraa   naam   likh   ke mitaaye  honge
kabhi  to   hum  aapko  hadd  se bhi  zyaadaa  yaad  aaye honge

dekh    chidiyon  ke jode   ko  kabhi to aap  muskuraaye  honge
kabhi  to  aap  lehron  ke  sang  beh  jaane ko   lalchaaye honge

takiye   ko  seene  se  lagaake  jaane  kitni  baar  aap soye honge
yaad me hamaare aap hazaaron baar band kamre me roye honge

hamaare  poochhne pe  kehte  hain ki  mohabbat nahi  karte aap
aur  humse milne ki ummed   me jaane   kitne  diye jalaaye honge

kabhi   na kabhi  jarur aapke  haseen  khwaabon  me aaye honge
aake  khwaab  me aapko hum apne  seene  se tab  lagaaye honge

kabhi  to  aap  mere  geeton  ko apne  hothon  pe sajaaye  honge
jaanaa,   kabhi  to hum  hadd se  bhi  zyaadaa   yaad   aaye honge

*****HRIDAY*****



       abb to bahaar bhii geet teraa gungunaaney lagaa.!
       koi chhup-chhup ke jaaney kyon muskuraaney lagaa.!
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 09:57:35 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 21, 2012, 09:42:47 AM
jaane  kitne  hi  baar  hamaaraa   naam   likh   ke mitaaye  honge
kabhi  to   hum  aapko  hadd  se bhi  zyaadaa  yaad  aaye honge
yaad to roz aate ho. ab itni bhi diwangi nahin ke naam likh-likh ke mitoo.n Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
dekh    chidiyon  ke jode   ko  kabhi to aap  muskuraaye  honge
kabhi  to  aap  lehron  ke  sang  beh  jaane ko   lalchaaye honge
bilkul nahin. main to phoolo.n sung muskuraati rahi.bahaar sung gungunaati rahi. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

takiye   ko  seene  se  lagaake  jaane  kitni  baar  aap soye honge
yaad me hamaare aap hazaaron baar band kamre me roye honge
tere chehre ko yaad kar hans deti. tuhe saath na paa kar ro deti crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2
hamaare  poochhne pe  kehte  hain ki  mohabbat nahi  karte aap
aur  humse milne ki ummed   me jaane   kitne  diye jalaaye honge
raah to takti hoon tere aane ki. zarurat nahin shamaa jalaane ki icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
kabhi   na kabhi  jarur aapke  haseen  khwaabon  me aaye honge
aake  khwaab  me aapko hum apne  seene  se tab  lagaaye honge
aisa to abhi tak kuch hua nahin.kyon ki itni masrufiyat hai ki thak ke aise soti hoon ki subah bai jagaati hai drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
kabhi  to  aap  mere  geeton  ko apne  hothon  pe sajaaye  honge
jaanaa,   kabhi  to hum  hadd se  bhi  zyaadaa   yaad   aaye honge
 
  haan ek baar yaad aaye the per wo geet kaun sa hai jo tumne likha hai Laughing hard Laughing hard



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bahut khoob hriday..............!mere comments ka bura mat lena . kidding yaar
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 02:30:25 PM »
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Thank you so much Shireen ji...!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on August 21, 2012, 10:53:54 AM
Nice thoughts!!! Applause Applause Applause
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bahut khoob hriday  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

nice lines Mkv jee and K_A jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 03:41:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sanjeev ji...!!!

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Bahut Khub Hriday Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2012, 06:27:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...Usual Smile

Quote from: mkv on August 21, 2012, 12:12:42 PM
Sach likha hai aapne Kapil jee,
Ek ek ehsaas, dil ko choote hua gujarta hai.
Ek baar padh kar man hi nahee bharta..baar baar padhne ko jee chaahta hai.
Bahut umda likha hai aapne.
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ek choti si koshish kee hai..
Na chaah kar bhi hamaari yaad meN vo roye honge
Ro ro kar Jaane kitne roomal aansuo se bhigoye honge
Din me bhi nazar aati hogi muskarati hui surat unko
haqeekat jaanne ko khud ko nakhoon chubhoye honge
jis gulaab ke kaantoN se hamare haath laal hue the
hame yakeen hai vo aaj bhi use apne paas sanjoye honge
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2012, 07:36:16 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriyaa Sps ji... aapke taarif se mere har koshish ki khobsurti ko chaar chaand lag jaate hain... main likhte waqt sochta hoon ki shayad ye utni achchi nahi bani jaisi banni chahiye thi... shayad waisi nahi hai... par aapke compliments padh ke lagta hai shayad kuch baat thi ... sach me aapke comments se dil khush ho jaataa hai... thank you soooo much....!!!

Quote from: Sps on August 21, 2012, 04:15:25 PM
Hriday ji, kamaal , bahot bahot achcha...jab bhi aap is tarah ka koi geet likhte hai...jaise lagta hai bas kya keh du, kya karu...kaise aap ekdam dil baat likh dete hai...

itna achcha itna achcha...mai bata hi nahi sakti....bahot bahot bahot achcha....aur bilkul sachcha!!

shayad aise hi geeton k liye log kehte hai "maar hi daloge!!"

Aur mkv ji aapki poem bhi itni khubsoorat hai ki bas....mai bahot lucky hu jo maine Yoindia join kia aur aap jaise bade bade shayro ke saamne apni kuch choti koshishe , kavitaye rakh pai.....shayad aapke suggestions se mai aur achcha likhpau

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji....!!!

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wah wah wah bahut hi khub bahut hi zabardast tareef ke liye alfaz kam........

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very very nice
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