"" kah do zarron deewaron se"" 'nirala'

by nirala on January 05, 2011, 06:53:23 AM
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inn zarro.n deewaro.n se kah do
haseen nazaro.n se kah do

chaand taaro.n sitaaro.n aasmaano se kah do
gul gulshan bahaaro.n se kah do

khuwabo.n ki tabeeron se kah do
haqeekato.n ki zanzeero.n se kah do

tadapte hai.n kitna unki khaatir
machalte hai.n kitna deedar e yaar ko
koi mere dildaar e pyaar se kah do

bharosa kar le dil pr mere bas zara sa
yakeen kar le ab dil ka paimaana bhi hai tre mohabbat se bhra bhra sa

laut kr aunga mai
use le jaunga mai

apne ashko se kh do aye sanam"
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2011, 07:44:11 AM »
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bahut bashiya niralaji...khoob kahi hai
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2011, 07:58:18 AM »
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mubarak ho Manju ji mubarak ho.
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2011, 08:06:13 AM »
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ye kis baat ki mubarakbad hai ji...
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2011, 08:10:28 AM »
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badhiya hai nirala ji..aur badhiya ho sakta tha.thoda sa edit karte to...
par aapke andaz me mast hai ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2011, 08:14:58 AM »
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thanku Kmam--
haan aur badhiya ho sakta tha..
pr maine nahi kiya--
hehehe
aadha adhura likhne ki aadat jo pad gai hai:)
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2011, 08:15:26 AM »
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thanku Kmam--
haan aur badhiya ho sakta tha..
pr maine nahi kiya--
hehehe
aadha adhura likhne ki aadat jo pad gai hai:)
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thanx
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2011, 08:43:16 AM »
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nice one..

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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2011, 09:27:16 AM »
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Nice Nirala JI
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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2011, 09:36:28 AM »
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thanx
Abhi and Rishi
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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2011, 10:51:17 AM »
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inn zarro.n deewaro.n se kah do
haseen nazaro.n se kah do

chaand taaro.n sitaaro.n aasmaano se kah do
gul gulshan bahaaro.n se kah do

khuwabo.n ki tabeeron se kah do
haqeekato.n ki zanzeero.n se kah do

tadapte hai.n kitna unki khaatir
machalte hai.n kitna deedar e yaar ko
koi mere dildaar e pyaar se kah do

bharosa kar le dil pr mere bas zara sa
yakeen kar le ab dil ka paimaana bhi hai tre mohabbat se bhra bhra sa

laut kr aunga mai
use le jaunga mai

apne ashko se kh do aye sanam"

bhut badhiya kuch nayapan hai aap ki kalam me bas likhty rahiye isi tarah apne aap diwane ho jayenge ghayal kalam se


kisi se kahne ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe
mere dil ki baten to aakhon se bayan ho jati hai
bhala kaise samjhega dilbar mera
usko aankhon se pine ki adaa bhi nahi aati hai
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«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2011, 10:58:11 AM »
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wah wah bahut khub Raahi ji.
sukriya aapka.
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aankho se peene ke aadaab hum sikha dete unhe bhi
         bas wo ek nazar dekh to len
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thanx
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«Reply #12 on: January 05, 2011, 11:13:05 AM »
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wah wah bahut khub Raahi ji.
sukriya aapka.
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aankho se peene ke aadaab hum sikha dete unhe bhi
         bas wo ek nazar dekh to len
""
thanx

ji aap gour farmaty rahen wo b ek baar dekh hin lengy

jara hosh me raho aankhon se pine walon
palat kar mahboob ka didar jaroor hoga
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«Reply #13 on: January 05, 2011, 11:21:05 AM »
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wah bahut khoob Janaab.
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hum koi chaatak nahi aye sanam
   deedar ko taktaki na lagayenge
palat kar dekh lo to thik
   warna tumse tumhari nazar hi chura jayenge
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thanx
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2011, 11:24:57 AM »
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wah bahut khoob Janaab.
""
hum koi chaatak nahi aye sanam
   deedar ko taktaki na lagayenge
palat kar dekh lo to thik
   warna tumse tumhari nazar hi chura jayenge
""
thanx
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bhut dekhen hai najron se najar churane wale
aaj kal badnaam hai jamane me dil lagane wale
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