**~** Kaha Do Ek Baar **~**

by _Vicky_ on October 03, 2009, 08:49:28 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 14, 2009, 11:35:49 PM »
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Wah wah Mann ji bahut bahut khoob,sach mein dil ko chu gayee aapke kavita .
marvelous creation,Cara ji,AD ji,Sophi ji,aap sabne bhi kamaal ke likha.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Mann ji sorry for late comments aaj hi dheki aapke kavita.


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«Reply #16 on: October 20, 2009, 02:25:44 PM »
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haan, humko tumse beshumaar pyaar hai...
nazron hee nazron me tuhjse iqraar hai

tuhjse takraane ko khwaabon me, "mann" beqaraar hai..
tu hi tho chaen, tu hi tho karaar hai






MA bhaijaan, kya khoob ehsaas hai!

Thank U Sweet sis.. tumne bhi bahut Pyaare Lafz likhe hain.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #17 on: October 20, 2009, 03:02:12 PM »
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Thank U Sweet sis.. tumne bhi bahut Pyaare Lafz likhe hain.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



**~** Mann **~**

thank u bhaijaan
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«Reply #18 on: October 20, 2009, 03:33:29 PM »
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Kaha Do Ek Baar Bas, Ki Tumhe Mujhse Mohabbat Hai,
Zindgi Ke Har Ek Lamhe Me, Tumhe Meri Zaroorat Hai…..

Nazren Jhuka Inkaar Karo, Palken Jhuka Izraar Karo,
Ya Chaand Pe Likh Ke Naam Mera, Tum Yeh Iqraar Karo….

Wah kya khoobsurat khayal hai ji... Aajkal bahut romantic nazar aa rahe ho kya baat hai ?  tongue3

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«Reply #19 on: October 20, 2009, 03:34:42 PM »
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kya baat hai    mann ji......

KAHETI HUN EK NAHIN HAZAAR BAR,
MUJHKO SIRF TUMSE HI HAI PYAAR.

TU HAI MERA DILBAR,TU HI MERA YAAR,
TU HAI PEHELA,TU HI HAI AAKHRI PYAAR.

TUJHSE HI TOH HAI MERA YEH SANSAAR.
TU HI DETA HAI MUJHE KHUSHIYAN HAZAAR,

TERI BAHON MEIN HAIN BESHUMAAR PYAAR.
TU HI MERI TADAF,TU HI MERI ANGAAR.

TU HI MERI CHAHAT,TU HI MERI TALWAR,
AA CHEERLE MUJHKO SANAM,KARLE MUJHPE WAR.

JEE BAR KE APNI AANKHON SE DEKHLE YAAR,
MERE SEENE MEIN TERE LIYE KITNA HAI PYAAR.

      .......KAHO NA KABHI AATE HO......



Wah cara sb aap ka bi jawab nahi... Ati sundar  Applause
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«Reply #20 on: October 20, 2009, 03:36:36 PM »
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Waah Waah Vicky kya baat hai , Bahoot Bahoot khoobsoorat alfZo se saja ak bahoot hi behatreen peshkash hamesha ki tarah Usual Smile


Itna pyaar! kin khyalo mea doobe hue ho
kis se ikraar ki umeed lagaye beite ho  Winking


Ak koshis meri taraf se bhi:_


Chahte hai hum bhi tume iskadar
tumse door ak pal bhi raha nahi jata

Paas aate ho jaise jaise tum mere
Teri ankho mea doob kuch kaha nahi jata

Dar lagta hai , Kahi kataaye na ho jaaye
Dil ki mohabbat ko hothon tak laaya nahi jata

Hum Nahi jaante ki kya yea pyaar hai
Par ab tumare bina ak pal raha nahi jata


! Divya !

Wowww dear tum ne bi kamal ka lika hai. Sabhash  Thumbs UP  Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: October 20, 2009, 03:58:03 PM »
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kaha do ek baar, k umr bhar nibhaaoge tum saath humaara...
k sada k liye sompo ge khudse, mere haath me haath tumhaara

kaha do ek baar, k na hatne doge mere kadmon se kadm tum,
sahoge sung mere sub sdamon k situm  tum

kaha do ek baar, k naam mera tumhaare dil me chaap liya hai tumne
kaha do na k bekaraar ho tum b, jitna muhjko betaab kiya hai tumne~
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«Reply #22 on: October 25, 2009, 05:09:36 AM »
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Bahut hi PYaara Likha hai Sidraah Sis.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #23 on: October 25, 2009, 05:33:27 AM »
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Bahut hi PYaara Likha hai Sidraah Sis.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**

thx bhaijaan
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«Reply #24 on: November 07, 2009, 08:51:17 AM »
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Waah Waah Vicky kya baat hai , Bahoot Bahoot khoobsoorat alfZo se saja ak bahoot hi behatreen peshkash hamesha ki tarah Usual Smile


Itna pyaar! kin khyalo mea doobe hue ho
kis se ikraar ki umeed lagaye beite ho  Winking


Ak koshis meri taraf se bhi:_


Chahte hai hum bhi tume iskadar
tumse door ak pal bhi raha nahi jata

Paas aate ho jaise jaise tum mere
Teri ankho mea doob kuch kaha nahi jata

Dar lagta hai , Kahi kataaye na ho jaaye
Dil ki mohabbat ko hothon tak laaya nahi jata

Hum Nahi jaante ki kya yea pyaar hai
Par ab tumare bina ak pal raha nahi jata


! Divya !

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Divya.. Itni Khubsoorat Taareef Ke Liye..!!

Aur Bahut Hi Pyaar Bhara Likha hai aapne Bhi.. Har ek Lafz Behad Romantic aur Ehasaason se Bhara likha hai aapne.. iska Jawab bhi Jaldi hi Doonga.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #25 on: November 07, 2009, 08:58:33 AM »
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bohot khooob.........
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«Reply #26 on: January 17, 2010, 04:08:19 PM »
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oye hoye ki gal hai mann ji tusi te chha gye..verry nic ji...ApplauseApplause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geet Ji.. Ki aap Waqt nikaal kar Yahan aayen.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #27 on: January 17, 2010, 08:01:46 PM »
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«Reply #28 on: January 30, 2010, 06:13:15 AM »
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Vicky bhaa'ii:

namaste!

pyaar bhare ehsaasoN ko aapne itnii baareeqeeyoN se bayaa.n kiyaa hai ki kyaa kahuuN! ik Shaayar ki koShiSh kaamyaab tab hotee hai jab paRhne waala uss koShiSh ke KhayaaloN meiN doob jaaye! aur maiN aapke iN KhayaaloN meiN Doob saa gayaa paRhte paRhte! bahot hi Khoob liKhaa hay! daad!

yuuNhi liKhate rahiye.ngaa! KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #29 on: January 31, 2010, 05:59:24 AM »
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Waah Waah bahoot hi khoooooooob Mann ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur behtrin jwaab Cara ji aur Sophi ji,ad ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kya khoob mohabbat bhari lines likhi aap sabne....bahoot vadhiya


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile



**~** Mann **~**
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