kahaani intezaar ki

by sahreyaarahmad on September 04, 2010, 09:24:47 AM
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Intezaar unka karte karte sham ho chali,
Par us haseen mulakat ka pal aaya nahi abi,

Ham bhi to apni zid pe yu hi ade rahe,
Aankein bicha ke rah me yu hi khade rahe,
Dil tha khushi me jhoomta aur ham sochte rahe,
Aayenge is yakeen se ham khud ko rokte rahe,
Is kasmakash me dekhte hi shaam dhal gayi,
Par us haseen mulakat ka pal aaya abhi nahi,

Shabb jo shuru hui to dil bhi doobne laga,
mushibat me na ho ye soch kar khud ko kosne laga,
Tanhaiya thi har taraf wo seyaah raat thi,
Bijli bhi tadak rahi thi aur barish bi sath thi,
Hawaaye daraa rahi thi shard mausham bhi ho gaya,
Kartaa tha pyar unko is liye har sitam ko seh gaya,
Sikwe ham khud se karte rahe aur saher aagayi,
Par us haseen mulakat ka pal aaya nahi abi,

Raftaa raftaa subah ka jalwa afroz hua,
fir haule se didaar aftab ka us roz hua,
milne ki chahat unki dil me liye tadapta raha murad,
Aana nahi tha unko aur aye nahi fir aaj,
Sitamgar kahu ye mai unko bewafa kahu,
Aata nahi samajh me ki mai unko kya kahu,
Tanhaa akele fir se ek aur sham dhal gayi,
Par us haseen mulakat ka pal aya nahi kabhi
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 09:39:45 AM »
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wah.......
its awesome.....aesa hi likhte rahiyega.....

 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 09:59:52 AM »
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aap logo ka sath aur duayein rahi to ham zaroor kamyab honge,aur sukriya ap ki hausla afzai ka
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 10:04:05 AM »
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bht hi khubb kaha hai aapne sahreyaarahmed ji....
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 10:10:49 AM »
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sukriya kasak ji..
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 02:34:52 PM »
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kya baat hai bhut achi kaawish hai........khoob daad qubool keejiye likhte rahiye



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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 06:13:58 PM »
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kia samaa bandha hai Janab...... till start to last ek se badhkar ek khayaal aur waise hi aage badhta aapka kalaam.... is achchi koshish per dili daad janab....

So imressive... Very nice creation..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2010, 07:06:46 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Ahmad ji... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... bahut pyaara...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2011, 01:26:48 AM »
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Ahmed ji bahut pasand aayi aapke peshkash humein,great,heart touching n lovely creation,hats off. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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