kahna hai....(nam)

by poonamA on July 21, 2012, 04:35:46 AM
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dilbar, jana, priyatam mere
aaj mujhe bas itna hai kahna

chahu na mai dhan daulat ya ghar
sang tere bas mujhe hai rahna

saha hai tujhse dur rahne ka gam
nahi ab mujhe kuch aur hai sahna

nain bichaye bathe hai raah me teri
jari hai aansoo ka raat din bahna

saaj shingar na bhahe mujhko
tu he to hai mera sacha gahna

aaj mujhe bas itna hai kahna.....



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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2012, 04:40:34 AM »
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aap ne bahut badhiya tarike se judayi k dadr ko likha hai ....aap ko hamari bahut sari shubnkamnayain....
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2012, 04:42:33 AM »
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thank u so much gaytri
aap ne bahut badhiya tarike se judayi k dadr ko likha hai ....aap ko hamari bahut sari shubnkamnayain....
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2012, 05:37:48 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai poonam jee
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2012, 06:10:57 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2012, 06:39:28 AM »
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bahut khoob poonam ji... Usual Smile

keep it up..  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2012, 07:01:45 AM »
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mkvji, reshma & touhidji thanx
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2012, 01:21:27 PM »
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bahut khoob waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2012, 07:05:10 PM »
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Poonam Jee Aadaab!

Waah jee kia baat hai bahut khoob, bade hi khoob
lafzoN meiN aapne apne ahsaasoN ko sametaa hai...

Sabhi khayaal khoob rahe... Humari dheroN daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2012, 05:25:50 AM »
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thax sainiji
bahut khoob waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2012, 05:27:17 AM »
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aadaab parwaazji aur bahot bahot shukriya
Poonam Jee Aadaab!

Waah jee kia baat hai bahut khoob, bade hi khoob
lafzoN meiN aapne apne ahsaasoN ko sametaa hai...

Sabhi khayaal khoob rahe... Humari dheroN daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2012, 05:30:49 AM »
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dilbar, jana, priyatam mere
aaj mujhe bas itna hai kahna

chahu na mai dhan daulat ya ghar
sang tere bas mujhe hai rahna

saha hai tujhse dur rahne ka gam
nahi ab mujhe kuch aur hai sahna

nain bichaye bathe hai raah me teri
jari hai aansoo ka raat din bahna

saaj shingar na bhahe mujhko
tu he to hai mera sacha gahna

aaj mujhe bas itna hai kahna.....





Bohat Achchi Kavita Hai,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2012, 05:38:39 AM »
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dhanyawad azeemji

Bohat Achchi Kavita Hai,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #13 on: July 23, 2012, 05:47:37 AM »
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very Nice. Poonam Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 23, 2012, 06:04:58 AM »
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thx sanjeevji
very Nice. Poonam Ji Applause Applause
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