Kaiku Aese Kaama Kar Raen???

by Iqtedar on June 02, 2013, 03:46:04 PM
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Asalamalaekum - Kuch linen apne andaaz yaani hyderabadi style may kahne ki koshish ki hai - aur ye main shuru se hi apni poetry Khumar-e-Ishq par send karta hoon so usi par sab rang ki poetry send karne ki ghalti ki muafi chahte huwe aage badhta hoon...

Kaiku aese kaama kar raen
Chup chup ke kyon aahan bhar raen

Pyar huwa kya kis se to bhi
Aondhe chitte kaiku pad raen

Pahle jumma kuch nhate they
Din may ab do baar sanwar raen

Sadkhe may shaetan na linga
Aesi shakal pu horan tak raen

Dekh ke wo kya hans dalain ki
Khud ku tum Salman samajh raen

Taoba tilla karlo pasha
Ghar may bhaena hai so bhul raen

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2013, 04:40:11 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2013, 04:44:49 PM »
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 wwah waaah , bht khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2013, 05:45:54 PM »
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Thank you iAdmin, appreciated... aapki nazron may ham bhi hain ye bahot badi baat hai Usual Smile behad shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2013, 06:11:36 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on June 02, 2013, 03:46:04 PM
Asalamalaekum - Kuch linen apne andaaz yaani hyderabadi style may kahne ki koshish ki hai - aur ye main shuru se hi apni poetry Khumar-e-Ishq par send karta hoon so usi par sab rang ki poetry send karne ki ghalti ki muafi chahte huwe aage badhta hoon...

Kaiku aese kaama kar raen
Chup chup ke kyon aahan bhar raen

Pyar huwa kya kis se to bhi
Aondhe chitte kaiku pad raen

Pahle jumma kuch nhate they
Din may ab do baar sanwar raen

Sadkhe may shaetan na linga
Aesi shakal pu horan tak raen

Dekh ke wo kya hans dalain ki
Khud ku tum Salman samajh raen

Taoba tilla karlo pasha
Ghar may bhaena hai so bhul raen

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.

ha ha ha nice,sir
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2013, 03:06:20 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on June 02, 2013, 03:46:04 PM
Asalamalaekum - Kuch linen apne andaaz yaani hyderabadi style may kahne ki koshish ki hai - aur ye main shuru se hi apni poetry Khumar-e-Ishq par send karta hoon so usi par sab rang ki poetry send karne ki ghalti ki muafi chahte huwe aage badhta hoon...

Kaiku aese kaama kar raen
Chup chup ke kyon aahan bhar raen

Pyar huwa kya kis se to bhi
Aondhe chitte kaiku pad raen
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Pahle jumma kuch nhate they
Din may ab do baar sanwar raen

Sadkhe may shaetan na linga
Aesi shakal pu horan tak raen
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Dekh ke wo kya hans dalain ki
Khud ku tum Salman samajh raen

Taoba tilla karlo pasha
Ghar may bhaena hai so bhul raen

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
kya hai iqtedar bhai aisa kaiku taney marrain kisi ko bhi
dil pe chhuriyan chale waisa hota na
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2013, 05:49:29 PM »
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Allah maaf kare, bhai kisku bi tane nai mar'raon, aaine may khud ko dekh ke likh liya  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2013, 06:46:53 PM »
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Allah maaf kare, bhai kisku bi tane nai mar'raon, aaine may khud ko dekh ke likh liya  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
achha tabhi main sochraun itti zabardast shayeri kaisa likh liye ap bolke ...Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2013, 07:50:59 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on August 06, 2013, 06:46:53 PM
achha tabhi main sochraun itti zabardast shayeri kaisa likh liye ap bolke ...Laughing hard Laughing hard
Usual Smile agar shayeri zabardast hai to wo aapki sohbat ka asar hai bhai - aapse bahot kuch sikha hai aur inshaAllah aage bhi seekhonga Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2013, 01:45:08 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 06, 2013, 07:50:59 PM
Usual Smile agar shayeri zabardast hai to wo aapki sohbat ka asar hai bhai - aapse bahot kuch sikha hai aur inshaAllah aage bhi seekhonga Usual Smile
bhai kaiku behchare ko towel me lapaet ke marre,tarif karke, Huh?
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Sahal bhai jo sach hai so hai, aapki guidance se hi to fonts ko sanwarna (colors waghaera dena) seekha hai main ne Usual Smile
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