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Dosto..Bade din huye pyaar ki baat kiyee, aaj karne ko ek bahana mil gaya..hua yun ki Sunday Bhopal se Jabalpur aate huye Train me ek badi khoobsurat pari se nazare chaar huyi..kehene ko kuchh tha nahi so bas ankhon ankhon me baat huyii..
sach keheta hun poori raat nahi soya Upper birth par aamne samne the so use hi dekhta raha or jaisa ki aap jante hain "dil ek shayar" so ye panktiyan usi samay likh li apne cell par...ab apko nazar kar raha hun...shayad pasand aaye~ kaise keh dun e dost kya haadsaa ho gaya
toote mere dil ka ik tukda kisike dil ka badshaah ho gaya..
man me na raha chain na jagah kisi karaar ki rahi
Zaalim bas ek or deedaar ko itna bekaraar saa ho gaya..
tirchhi nazar se usne jo palko ka chilman utha kar dekha
seedhe dil me laga teer or cheer kar paar saa ho gaya..
mere shabdo me yaaron ab talak jo samandar si wajah thi
samandar raha pyaasa us roop ke aage or har shabda barbad saa ho gaya..
saari raat bas ankhon me kat gayi bataun kaise
fir subah ka aana haay dushman ke izraar saa ho gaya..
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 10:02:32 AM » |
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bahut khoob ...waah bhai waah:)
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2010, 10:21:34 AM » |
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abhi ji bahut khoobsoorat...
kya baat hai... !
Intezar
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2010, 10:40:55 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2010, 11:24:17 AM » |
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shukriya killbill ji hosla afjai ke liye isi tarh sath rahiye..likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: November 15, 2010, 09:41:58 PM » |
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Haayeeeeeee mere bhai kya baat hai.. yaar hum dono kafi milte jhulte lagte hai.. apki kalamon main main khud kay dil ki awaaz sunta hoon.. Apne us'se kuch bhi nahin kaha??? mere saath bhi aisa ho chuka hai..mager lavz na nikle uss waqt us'se kehne kay liye mager baad main dil bahaut kuch kehgaya.. Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob mere bhai..  |
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2010, 09:43:44 PM » |
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ufff Koyal di, us'se kuch keh sake is'se pehle hi usse train se uttar wa diya.. abhi toh Abhi bhai yeh sunder kavita usse sunane wale the aur usse uttar wa diya.. bahaut acha likha hai..  |
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2010, 09:44:14 PM » |
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Bahut Khoobsurat Jazbat Hai Abhi Bhai...
Na Koi Teer , Na Koi Talwaar , Dil Ke Paar Gaya
Hume To Bas Uski Nazron Ka Ishara Maar Gaya.!
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
Bahaut bahaut khoob mere bhai.. Khush rahiye.! |
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«Reply #9 on: November 16, 2010, 05:50:27 AM » |
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abhi ji bahut khoobsoorat...
kya baat hai... !
Intezar
waqt dene ka shukriya intezar ji...sath rahiye yunhi hosla badhate rahiye... |
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«Reply #10 on: November 16, 2010, 05:52:35 AM » |
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bas yahin gadbad hoti hai.. mujhe khush nahi dekhna chahte ye dost mere...abhi me kuchh bolu usse phle hi station a agaya.. thnks koyaliya ~ |
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«Reply #11 on: November 16, 2010, 05:54:20 AM » |
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Bahut Khoobsurat Jazbat Hai Abhi Bhai...
Na Koi Teer , Na Koi Talwaar , Dil Ke Paar Gaya
Hume To Bas Uski Nazron Ka Ishara Maar Gaya.!
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
bilkul yahi hua tha shihab sahab solah aane sach kaha aapne.. ab kya bataye haal e dil us waqt kya tha...hosla afjai ke liye bahut shukriya aapka~ |
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«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2010, 06:09:24 AM » |
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:clap:wah bahoot hi khoob dhanyawad yassmeen ji... |
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«Reply #14 on: November 16, 2010, 11:25:09 AM » |
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Haayeeeeeee mere bhai kya baat hai.. yaar hum dono kafi milte jhulte lagte hai.. apki kalamon main main khud kay dil ki awaaz sunta hoon.. Apne us'se kuch bhi nahin kaha??? mere saath bhi aisa ho chuka hai..mager lavz na nikle uss waqt us'se kehne kay liye mager baad main dil bahaut kuch kehgaya.. Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob mere bhai.. Rahim bhai ye bat to he..milte julte to he... maine usse bahut kuchh kaha yaar ye bhi "u looks beautiful bahut sare propose pade hoge apko to" or baki sab padhai ki bate "she's a student of final year in engg" to puchhti rahi or me gyan deta raha.. or fir jaise hi gud nite huyi maine do min light jale rakhne ki request ki or jo kuchh dil me aya apne cell par notes me likh dala...hahahaha |
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