Kaise Main So Jaau

by Pooja on February 15, 2008, 09:11:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 22, 2008, 11:56:27 PM »
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Bahoot hi payara likha hai khwaish ji!!

Bahar tere ane se yaha gulsita khil gaya
Naseeb wala hai wo, jise tu mil gaya

Sochna hai kay abaat bani ya nahi
Tere muskurane se gul ek naya khil gaya

Aai thi nind bahoot yatan se na jaane kis tarah
Jhonka yah teri baato ka phir nind le gaya

Bin wajah ke pyar ki ab wajah kaya kahe
Dil le gaya jo wo chain bhi le gaya

Likhte raho jo bhi kalam kahti rahe tumhe
Apne aise shabdo se koi jaadu hai kar gaya
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«Reply #16 on: February 23, 2008, 02:50:26 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 15, 2008, 09:11:47 PM
Meri sochon mai ho tum ayye, kaise mai so jaau
Agan lagi jo tere khayal se, kaise mai so jaau

Dhadkane bulane lagi tujhe, kaise mai so jaau
Khayalo ne li agrdai , kaise mai so jaau

Ankhon mai teri surat muskaai, kaise mai so jaau
Chanda ne chandini failai, kaise mai so jaau

Beheke yah tan-man, kaise mai so jaau
Kareeb bahoot kareeb tu lage, kaise mai so jaau

Meri sochon mai ho tum ayye, kaise mai so jaau
Agan lagi jo tere khayal se, kaise mai so jaau


superb...and romantic creation.... wah
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2008, 03:01:03 AM »
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shukaria dear!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: February 25, 2008, 10:00:33 PM »
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shabdo ke sath sath lines se bhi cheating karne lage.. mujhko laga ki app likh kar gaye hai kavita.. parda to msg mila!!! Koi baat nahi jab man ho app akar likh jaaye... kuch likha ho to agge likhne ko sahara mil jaata hai!!
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«Reply #19 on: February 26, 2008, 06:50:40 PM »
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yaani hum apni sahi feelings apki kavita ke baare na likha  kare.. app shabdo ka kheil na kheile .. waiting for your reply with poetry!!
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«Reply #20 on: February 27, 2008, 12:38:20 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 22, 2008, 11:37:57 PM
KISI KI SAADGI SE MERI KISMAT BHI
NAYE RANG PAA GAYI
SIRF UNKE BAAT KARNE SE
"KHWAISH" KI ZINDAGI MEIN BAHAAR AA GAYI

AB WOH YEH NA SOCHE  KE UNKE  HISAAB SE KUCH BAAT BANI
SHAYAD PHIR JAL NA JAAYE WOH CHIRAAG JO WOH ABHI BHUJA GAYI

TASVEER DEKHNE SE YAHA KIS KA DIL BHARTA HAI
NA UTAR SAKEGI WOH QAYAMAT TAK
JO NASHA APNE BAATON SE
WOH PILA GAYI...

HAR BAAT KI WAJEH DHOONDTE REHTE HAI WOH
BINA KOI WAJEH KE PYAAR BHI HOTA HAI
YEH BAATE SHAYAD UNHE BHI KUCH SEEKHLA GAYI...

AAJ APNE RAAHO PAR PHIR NAZAR DAALO
KISI NE YEH BAAT BHI KUCH AISE DHANG SE KAHI
KE WOH BAAT AB DIL-O-JAAN PE CHA GAYI...

MAIN NAHI JAANTA KE AB AGLA KADAM KYA HOGA MERA
BAS...LIKH RAHA HOON JO KUCH BHI
YUH SAMAJLO KI KALAM MUJHSE LIKHWA GAYI....



Bahut khoob khwaish ji...
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«Reply #21 on: February 27, 2008, 10:24:33 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Majid ji!!! bahoot khoob...

Mil jaaye tera kandha phir kaya chahiye
In gesuo ko teri unglio ka sprash chahiye

Dhadkane bula rahi hai tera naam
dhadkano ko tera hi sath chahiye

Aise na dekhon mujhe ki kuch kah hi na sake
Band ankhon mai bhi tera hi deedar chahiye

Nind ko Kaise ajj mai ane du in ankhon mai
Roop tere ki ajj inko barsaat chahiye
 
Chand se kah do chupa le ajj chandni apni
Hume apne sajan ke lubo se singaar chahiye

Her sukh her dukh tujh sung hi banta hai
Umarbhar ke liye bas tera ek sath chahiye!!
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«Reply #22 on: February 28, 2008, 02:23:01 AM »
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Quote from: majid on February 27, 2008, 12:32:36 PM
Nahi Ji Aap Likh Sakte Hain
Hum To Yunhi Keh Rahe The
Pooja Ji Hum Koi Shayar Nahi Hai
Bus Kuch Banta Hai To Likh Dete Hai
Par Harbaar Nahi Banta Hai Ji
Aur Waise Bhi Abhi To Sikh Rahe Hai
Kher Ab Aapki Baat Bhi To Nahi Taal Sakte
Chalo Kosis Karte Hain Ji....

Aaj Dil Ke Saare Ehsaason Ko Jaga Do.
Is Kadar Shabnami Honto Se Mera Naam Lo.

Ho Jaaye Chand Bhi Mehroon Apni Roshni Se
Zara Sa Rukh.e.Rosahn Ka Use Deeaar Do.

Tum Raho Saamne Mere Main Tumhe Dekhta rahun..
Tere Sang Guzar Jaaye Ye Zindagi Aise Lamhaat Do

Humne To Likh Di Hai Apne Aanshuon Se Ye Gazal
Ab Tum Bhi Hume Mohabbat Main Aisa Koi Paigaam Do.

.....
Dedo Mujhe Apne Dil Ka Saara Dard Aur Aankhon Ki Nami.
Aey HumDum Mere Kandhe Pe Sar Rakh Kar Khud Ko Sula Do

wah kya baat hai... bahut khoob Majid ji..
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«Reply #23 on: February 28, 2008, 02:24:12 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 27, 2008, 10:24:33 PM
wah kaya baat hai Majid ji!!! bahoot khoob...

Mil jaaye tera kandha phir kaya chahiye
In gesuo ko teri unglio ka sprash chahiye

Dhadkane bula rahi hai tera naam
dhadkano ko tera hi sath chahiye

Aise na dekhon mujhe ki kuch kah hi na sake
Band ankhon mai bhi tera hi deedar chahiye

Nind ko Kaise ajj mai ane du in ankhon mai
Roop tere ki ajj inko barsaat chahiye
 
Chand se kah do chupa le ajj chandni apni
Hume apne sajan ke lubo se singaar chahiye

Her sukh her dukh tujh sung hi banta hai
Umarbhar ke liye bas tera ek sath chahiye!!


sab ka mast jugalbandi bani huyi hai. bahut khoob likha
aapne b pooja di... maza aa raha hai reply counter reply....
keep up.
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«Reply #24 on: February 28, 2008, 03:55:06 PM »
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Roja dear sath milna chahiye.. reply to hum dete hi rahte hai Usual Smile

Bahoot bahoot shukaria apko likha hua pasand ayya!!!
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«Reply #25 on: March 03, 2008, 05:19:01 PM »
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wah wah wah... kaya baat hai majid ji~!~~ bahoot khoob likha hai apne!!!


Sath tere se zindagi muskurane lagi hai
Teri muskurahat main sharart ki ada phir aane lagi hai

Dabe hue her armaan ne ajj sataya hai mujhko
Khamosh lubo ko, yah khwaish bahot tadpane lagi hai

Nigah teri se yah nigah kaya mil gai meri
Teri socho main her raat ab jaane lagi hai

Ajeeb baat hai,
Sochu tujhe to nind bhul jaati hu sari
Aor tere hi khwabo main nind anne lagi hai!!
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«Reply #26 on: March 04, 2008, 04:58:42 PM »
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woow Too good!! app aise hi try karte rahe Majid ji!!! such mai bahoot he pyara likha hai apne!!! full of khumar-e-Ishaq!!!

Teri issi ada per to hum jaan dete hai
Muskurate ho jab tum, hum apni saanso ko tham lete hai

Sari dunia ke naam per ek tujhko apnaya hai
Ro deti hai ankhia yah dekh kar, ki app hum per jaan dete hai

Lag kar tere seene se her ek gum bhula dete hai
Dekhati hai jab teri nigahein mujhe, yah sara jahan bhula dete hai

Dil-e-armaan per jara kaabu rakhna Pooja
Wo to tere her ek armaan per jaan vaar dete hai!!
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«Reply #27 on: March 06, 2008, 02:10:37 PM »
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Quote from: majid on March 06, 2008, 11:32:48 AM
Thnaks For Thi Appreciation Pooja Ji.
But Thoda Bohat Credit Aap Bhi Liya Kare Ji
Kyun Ki Humto Aapke Pichhe Picche Hi Likhte Hai
Kher  Thanks Again Ji. Aapne Bhi Achha Likah Hai

Lage Raho....


Teri Hi Yaad Main Ab Deen Guzarta Hai Mera.
Aur Raaton Ko Rangeen Karta Hai Khwab Tera.

Haskar Gale Laga Leta Hoon  Har Kisi Ko Main
Har Jagah Mujhe Nazar Aata Hai Chehra Tera.

Waqt Guzarte Ab Maloom Nahi Hota.e.Dilbar
Is Kadar Mujhse Baate Karta Hai Ehsas Tera.

Aey HumDum Mere Bus Itni Si Izajat De De Mujhe
Ki Meri Har Gazal Main Likhta Rahu Naam Tera.

Tu Hi Tu Ban Gayi Hai Meri Zindagi Ki Jarurat.
Waada Hai Kabhi Nahi Chhodunga Main Saath Tera.


Wah majid ji... bahut khoob...
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«Reply #28 on: March 06, 2008, 04:33:24 PM »
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MAjid ji yakin kare is kavita ki ek ek line bahoot hi pyari likhi hai apne... yah lines to bas kamal ki likh gay ehai app:

Haskar Gale Laga Leta Hoon  Har Kisi Ko Main
Har Jagah Mujhe Nazar Aata Hai Chehra Tera.

Waqt Guzarte Ab Maloom Nahi Hota.e.Dilbar
Is Kadar Mujhse Baate Karta Hai Ehsas Tera.

bahoot khoob Majid ji!! bahoot hi acha likha hai.. full of khumar-e-Ishaq!!!!
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«Reply #29 on: March 06, 2008, 04:36:47 PM »
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Her pal teri hi yaad atti hai
Kab ho mulkaat, bas yahi baat satati hai

Muskura kar milte ho her ek se sara din
Yaha teri ek muskuraht dekhne ko rooh tadpati rah jaati hai

Waqat gujrate nahi gujrata saara din
Teri ek jhalak ko, ankh taras jaati hai

Zindagi jaise ban gai hi ek intzaar
Her pal teri yaad main bit.ti jaati hai

Her pal teri hi yaad atti hai
Kab ho mulkaat, bas yahi baat satati hai!!!
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