Kaise Main So Jaau

by Pooja on February 15, 2008, 09:11:47 PM
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«Reply #45 on: June 20, 2008, 07:23:53 PM »
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Quote from: sagar_0777 on February 16, 2008, 04:59:32 AM
hi pooja ji bahut accha likha hai aapne,aour aaj hi kya aap to hamesha good likhti hai.
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AA ITNA PYAR KRU TUJHE
TU MUJH ME KAHIN KHO JAYE
AAGOSH ME KUCH YUN LU MAI
K TU CHUPKE SE SO JAYE
TERI RAHON K KANTO KO
PALKO SI APNI CHUN LUNGA
AA DARD TERE SAARE LE LU
YA RUB TU MERI HO JAYE
HAI DUNIYA ME YE DARD BADE
PAR IN DARDO SE DARNA KYA
AA DONO MILKAR SATH CHALE
YE DARD KAHIN PAR KHO JAYE
HAI TANHA-TANHA KYA JEENA
YE B KOI JEENA HAI JEE
MIL K DONO HUM SATH JIYE
HAR LAMHA APNA HO JAYE
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Bahoot khoob Sagar jee... ek ek shabd bahoot he apnepan se aor pyar se bhara hua hai apki is kavita main.. Good creation!!
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«Reply #46 on: June 20, 2008, 09:46:06 PM »
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Pooja jee aap ka jawab to misl-e-talvaar hai...
Buhat shaandar aur umda rachna ki prastuti...

Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 01:40:21 PM

Her ghadi, har pal, ek tu he tu najar ayye
Kyun humare chitwan ko itna bhatkaana chahhte ho
Kis liye, nindein chura kar, humko behakana chahte ho
Ab itna bhi katthor na likhiye... Ki,,, Khumar-e-Ishq Khumar-e-shamshaan ban jaaye...

Shukriya
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«Reply #47 on: June 21, 2008, 02:56:23 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 01:40:21 PM
Nindein humari chura kar, khud ko jagana chahte ho
Kis nirdayta se, humare armaano ko satana chahte ho

Kasak teri hi ban jaati hai meri angdaia,
angdaio main sansein bhi chuarana chahte ho
E-sanam, kyun humko itna tadpana chahte ho

Her ghadi, har pal, ek tu he tu najar ayye
Kyun humare chitwan ko itna bhatkaana chahhte ho
Kis liye, nindein chura kar, humko behakana chahte ho

Nindein humari chura kar, khud ko jagana chahte ho
Kis nirdayta se, humare armaano ko satana chahte ho


Simply superb  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #48 on: June 21, 2008, 02:57:07 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 20, 2008, 09:46:06 PM
Pooja jee aap ka jawab to misl-e-talvaar hai...
Buhat shaandar aur umda rachna ki prastuti...
Ab itna bhi katthor na likhiye... Ki,,, Khumar-e-Ishq Khumar-e-shamshaan ban jaaye...

Shukriya

 Giggle Giggle

Khamoshi ki bhi apni zuban hoti hai
unkahe lafsein aankhon se bayan hoti hai

Chod jaati hai yaadein mujhe jis veeraniyon mein
Un yaadon ko bayan karna mushkil hoti hai

Zindagi ke kuch haseen din guzare they hum saat-saat
Guzre Mohabbat ki gadiyan hamari pehchan hoti hai..
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syednaami
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«Reply #49 on: June 21, 2008, 12:16:56 PM »
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So cute Sonia01 baba... simply wonderful...
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Pooja
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«Reply #50 on: June 30, 2008, 05:19:19 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 01:40:21 PM

Her ghadi, har pal, ek tu he tu najar ayye
Kyun humare chitwan ko itna bhatkaana chahhte ho
Kis liye, nindein chura kar, humko behakana chahte ho



Quote from: syednaami on June 20, 2008, 09:46:06 PM
Pooja jee aap ka jawab to misl-e-talvaar hai...
Buhat shaandar aur umda rachna ki prastuti...
Ab itna bhi katthor na likhiye... Ki,,, Khumar-e-Ishq Khumar-e-shamshaan ban jaaye...

Shukriya

Kyun humare chitwan ko itna bhatkaana chahhte ho>>> kis liye humare (chitwan) dil/man ko bhatkana chahte hai.

Ab is line mai apko shamshaan kaha se najar aa gaya..  wo apka, bekarar jee ka aor Prateek ji ka asar ho rahahai to shudh hindi aor urdu likhne ki koshish karati hu..
magar yah to kaya se kaya ho gaya  BangHead
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«Reply #51 on: June 30, 2008, 05:20:06 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on June 21, 2008, 02:57:07 AM
Giggle Giggle

Khamoshi ki bhi apni zuban hoti hai
unkahe lafsein aankhon se bayan hoti hai

Chod jaati hai yaadein mujhe jis veeraniyon mein
Un yaadon ko bayan karna mushkil hoti hai

Zindagi ke kuch haseen din guzare they hum saat-saat
Guzre Mohabbat ki gadiyan hamari pehchan hoti hai..



bahoot khoob Sonia!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #52 on: July 02, 2008, 01:55:31 PM »
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Haan Chita aur Chitwan dono ko bhatkaao ya bhadkaao...
Result,,, Nil...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #53 on: July 04, 2008, 01:59:55 AM »
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Thank you Pooja didi and Syed bhaiya
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Sonia01
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«Reply #54 on: July 04, 2008, 02:12:18 AM »
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Kaise mai so jaau?
Dil tujhe yad karta rehta hai
Dil hai pagal kaise samjau
Kitna samjau? Kaise behlau?
Pyar main is kadar pagal kiya hai
Bhool na paya is dilne tere pyar ko
Geet jo sang sang gaye wo nagme kaise bhul jau?
Kaise so jaau is chandni raat raat mein tongue3
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«Reply #55 on: July 04, 2008, 11:58:14 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on July 04, 2008, 02:12:18 AM
Kaise mai so jaau?
Dil tujhe yad karta rehta hai
Dil hai pagal kaise samjau
Kitna samjau? Kaise behlau?
Pyar main is kadar pagal kiya hai
Bhool na paya is dilne tere pyar ko
Geet jo sang sang gaye wo nagme kaise bhul jau?
Kaise so jaau is chandni raat raat mein tongue3





Interesting... so true...
Ab Valium 10 lo aur so jao...
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«Reply #56 on: July 06, 2008, 09:52:26 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 04, 2008, 11:58:14 AM

Interesting... so true...
Ab Valium 10 lo aur so jao...

hehehe..
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Pooja
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«Reply #57 on: July 07, 2008, 03:15:09 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on July 04, 2008, 02:12:18 AM
Kaise mai so jaau?
Dil tujhe yad karta rehta hai
Dil hai pagal kaise samjau
Kitna samjau? Kaise behlau?
Pyar main is kadar pagal kiya hai
Bhool na paya is dilne tere pyar ko
Geet jo sang sang gaye wo nagme kaise bhul jau?
Kaise so jaau is chandni raat raat mein tongue3


Good one sonia
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«Reply #58 on: April 29, 2009, 09:50:36 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai, Pooja Didi, Majid Bhai, Sanya Sis,.

Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #59 on: April 29, 2009, 11:36:17 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 15, 2008, 09:11:47 PM
Meri sochon mai ho tum ayye, kaise mai so jaau
Agan lagi jo tere khayal se, kaise mai so jaau

Dhadkane bulane lagi tujhe, kaise mai so jaau
Khayalo ne li agrdai , kaise mai so jaau

Ankhon mai teri surat muskaai, kaise mai so jaau
Chanda ne chandini failai, kaise mai so jaau

Beheke yah tan-man, kaise mai so jaau
Kareeb bahoot kareeb tu lage, kaise mai so jaau

Meri sochon mai ho tum ayye, kaise mai so jaau
Agan lagi jo tere khayal se, kaise mai so jaau


waah waah pooja ji kya baat hai mashallah bhut hi achi paish kash......
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