-----/// Kal ki wo shaam /// ------ Hriday

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bitaayi ek shaam fir se tumhaare sangh humne,
to un beete huye kai shaamon ki yaad aa gayi,
liya haathon me jo tumhaaraa haath maine kal,
to yaadon me mere wo pehli mulaquaat aa gayi,

pyaar kabhi kam nahi hota, ye ehsaas huwa,
kal kee shaam kuch to mere saath khaas huwa,
doob ke dekha fir se gehri aankhon me maine,
koi to hai mera jo mere dil ke aur paas huwa,

tohfe me jab tumhe maine wo laal gulaab diya,
tumne sharmaake use aanchal me chhipa liya,
ek gulaab hi to tha, koi keemti samaan nahi,
jaane tumpe us gulaab ne asar kya khaas kiya,

kal shaam jheel ke kinaare baithna achcha lagaa,
kandhe pe mere tumhaaraa sar rakhna achcha lagaa,
yun laga jaise hum barso se nahi mile tumse, kal
tumse shaam mera milna mujhe bahut achcha lagaa....

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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 11:37:26 AM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB HRIDAY JI DAAD HEE DAAD
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 02:07:08 PM »
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beautiful as always!
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 03:50:36 PM »
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Tumse shaam mera milna bahut accha laga..
wah wah wah kya baat hai
umda kalaam..
bahut bahut kareeb dil ke..
dili mubaarakbaad kubool kare.
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 05:00:47 PM »
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bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam hriday ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 06:37:56 PM »
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aaj dil se ek baat keh doon Hriday ji... Usual Smile

romantis ghazal likhne me aap jaise bahut kam log hai... wah wah wah.. kya kamal ka likha hai aapne... har ek lafz ehsas aur mohabbat me dubi hui... beshumaar daad ish ghazal ke liye kubul kare.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 07:33:40 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 06, 2012, 11:34:21 AM
bitaayi ek shaam fir se tumhaare sangh humne,
to un beete huye kai shaamon ki yaad aa gayi,
liya haathon me jo tumhaaraa haath maine kal,
to yaadon me mere wo pehli mulaquaat aa gayi,

pyaar kabhi kam nahi hota, ye ehsaas huwa,
kal kee shaam kuch to mere saath khaas huwa,
doob ke dekha fir se gehri aankhon me maine,
koi to hai mera jo mere dil ke aur paas huwa,

tohfe me jab tumhe maine wo laal gulaab diya,
tumne sharmaake use aanchal me chhipa liya,
ek gulaab hi to tha, koi keemti samaan nahi,
jaane tumpe us gulaab ne asar kya khaas kiya,

kal shaam jheel ke kinaare baithna achcha lagaa,
kandhe pe mere tumhaaraa sar rakhna achcha lagaa,
yun laga jaise hum barso se nahi mile tumse, kal
tumse shaam mera milna mujhe bahut achcha lagaa....

*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 11:21:51 PM »
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Bahut umda, dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2012, 12:37:46 PM »
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Very Nice.
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2012, 12:56:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on August 06, 2012, 11:37:26 AM
WAAH WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB HRIDAY JI DAAD HEE DAAD
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2012, 12:14:32 PM »
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thanks a lot Sps ji....!!!

Quote from: Sps on August 06, 2012, 02:07:08 PM
beautiful as always!
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2012, 10:20:52 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.... !!!

Quote from: mkv on August 06, 2012, 03:50:36 PM
Tumse shaam mera milna bahut accha laga..
wah wah wah kya baat hai
umda kalaam..
bahut bahut kareeb dil ke..
dili mubaarakbaad kubool kare.
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2012, 02:46:20 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Soudagar ji....!!!

Quote from: soudagar on August 06, 2012, 05:00:47 PM
bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam hriday ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2012, 12:44:57 PM »
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aapne itne khoobsurat comments de diye mere is rachna ko ki iski sundarta bahut badh gayi.... aapka main tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon.... bahut bahut shukriyaa Touhid ji....!!!

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aaj dil se ek baat keh doon Hriday ji... Usual Smile

romantis ghazal likhne me aap jaise bahut kam log hai... wah wah wah.. kya kamal ka likha hai aapne... har ek lafz ehsas aur mohabbat me dubi hui... beshumaar daad ish ghazal ke liye kubul kare.. Usual Smile

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thanks a lot K_A ji....!!!

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