kal raat ki khamoshi............

by ranjana on April 26, 2006, 04:14:34 PM
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kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi.........
teri sanso ki sargam ko meri sanso se mila gayi.......
tere dil ka dharkana suna maine , apne dil ki dharkano se.....
tere adharo ki mohar, mere badan par laga gayi........
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi..........

tut kar payaar karte hue tujhe dekha maine.............
shama ki treah khud ko pighalte hue dekha maine.........
kal raat ki tanaahi yeh kya kahani suna gayi..........
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi............

subah uth kar jab dekha jab aaeina............
apni ankho mein tera hi chalkata payaar dikha.........
thee meri ankho mein gujari raat ki chamak........
yeh dekh kar main khud hi sharma gayi............
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gajab dha gayi
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2006, 04:24:17 PM »
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awwwwwwwww sooooooooooo cute..........iss padh kar toh main bhi sharmaa gayi.......bahut pyaaraa likha hai
" subah uth kar jab dekha aaina
apni aakho main tera hee jhalakta pyaar dikha
thee meri aankho main gujarti raat ki chamak
yeh dekh kar main khud hee sharmaa gayi"

wat a lines nice lines
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2006, 07:06:54 PM »
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Beatiful ranjana.. keep on & on & on

khuda kare tujhe aise hi har raat ho...
zindagi mein kuch khaas baat ho...
zuban ke baaton ko jatana hai mushkil...
jab tu jataya toh sharm se suna e bhari mehfil...
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2006, 07:11:59 PM »
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mind blowing ranju.. kamaal karditta kudiye!! Winking
good one mrkotians.. :D
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2006, 07:23:55 PM »
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Ranju

Bahut khoobsurat !

mrkotians--->nice reply

Pyar ki Mehek--->Phir punjabi  :wink:

Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2006, 10:41:56 PM »
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main us raat ke intezar mein hoon...
jis raat tujhse chumban ke barish ho...
gale hue hain laal...
sambhalo mujhe us haal...

is aankhon mein chamak hain...
bikhri zulfon mein saajish..
saanse hue hain garam...
tere liye hain yeh badan naram...

yeh mera mann tera ghar hain...
si ghar mein base ho, khush hoon main
pyar ka koi shuru nahin ya koi anth
is pyas aur moh ki nahin koi hadh...
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2006, 11:36:53 PM »
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mrkotians.....and rajana.....beautiful....

tumhari woh bahein jin me ghoom ho jaithi hoon
tumhari woh pyar bhari baatien jisme behak jaithi hoon
tumhari woh adhaiyen jinh me ghayal ho jaithi hoon
tera pyar ka ikraar jisme umaar guzar dehti hoon
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2006, 04:24:23 AM »
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wah kay abaat hai Ranjana bahoot khoob!! Nice MK AND ANJANI
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2006, 09:50:48 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai RANJANA JI  aapne... umda shayari hai..... nice

majid bhai, anjaani ji aur mk ji aapne bhi kamaal ka likha hai....
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2006, 08:48:42 AM »
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shukriya .........aap sabka ..........

yun hi padte rahe ..............

vicky , majid. pooja, anjani

main us raat ke intezar mein hoon...
jis raat tujhse chumban ke barish ho...
gale hue hain laal...
sambhalo mujhe us haal...

is aankhon mein chamak hain...
bikhri zulfon mein saajish..
saanse hue hain garam...
tere liye hain yeh badan naram...

yeh mera mann tera ghar hain...
si ghar mein base ho, khush hoon main
pyar ka koi shuru nahin ya koi anth
is pyas aur moh ki nahin koi hadh...

bahut khub..................

isha and rajbeer aap ka bhi bahut shukriya............

with love
ranju
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2006, 08:54:02 AM »
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kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi.........
teri sanso ki sargam ko meri sanso se mila gayi.......
tere dil ka dharkana suna maine , apne dil ki dharkano se.....
tere adharo ki mohar, mere badan par laga gayi........
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi..........

tut kar payaar karte hue tujhe dekha maine.............
shama ki treah khud ko pighalte hue dekha maine.........
kal raat ki tanaahi yeh kya kahani suna gayi..........
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi............

subah uth kar jab dekha jab aaeina............
apni ankho mein tera hi chalkata payaar dikha.........
thee meri ankho mein gujari raat ki chamak........
yeh dekh kar main khud hi sharma gayi............
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gajab dha gayi



bahut hi sunder likha aapne... bahut khoob..keep writing and welcome to yoindia...
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2006, 09:00:43 AM »
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Kal raat ki khamoshi bahut kuch keh gayi,
Tumhari rooh mere jism mein bandh ke reh gayi,
Woh nazre tumhari har pal na jaane kya kya humse keh gayi,
Jaan-e-wafa yoon to aap ki seeratt hi dil ko bhaa gayi,
Per kal raat se to Kadr-e-manzil aur badh gayi,
Yeh dhadkan jo shor machati thi idhar
Aaj tumhare dil mein hulchul machane chali gayi...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2006, 11:40:07 AM »
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GESU JI...... kya baat hai bahut khoob likha hai...wah!
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2006, 11:58:15 AM »
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kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi.........
teri sanso ki sargam ko meri sanso se mila gayi.......
tere dil ka dharkana suna maine , apne dil ki dharkano se.....
tere adharo ki mohar, mere badan par laga gayi........
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi..........

tut kar payaar karte hue tujhe dekha maine.............
shama ki treah khud ko pighalte hue dekha maine.........
kal raat ki tanaahi yeh kya kahani suna gayi..........
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gazab dha gayi............

subah uth kar jab dekha jab aaeina............
apni ankho mein tera hi chalkata payaar dikha.........
thee meri ankho mein gujari raat ki chamak........
yeh dekh kar main khud hi sharma gayi............
kal raat ki khamoshi bhi kya gajab dha gayi


Kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai gazab dha gai,
jab laal jode ko odhe ghoongat me tu aa gai........
wo ghoongat ko utha kar, mere chand ko takna,
wo chandni nikal tujhse, mujhme hi sama gai.......
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai................................

tujhe bahon me bhar, jab lali hoton se churai,
saanse nikal ke tujhse, meri saanson me sama gai.......
phir dhadkane badhti rahi, tere husn ke nashe se,
teri badan ki aanch, mere jism ko sulga gai............
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai...............................

wo tera simat kar mere aagosh me aana,
aakhen teri paimana ban kar kuch pila gai...........
subah jab tune, husn me apne, mere ishq ko dekha,
to us aaine ka dil bhi tu dhak se dhadka gai..........
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai...............................

wo teri sadgi, wo teri masoomiyat, nazren jhukana,
wo naha kar tere, geele gesu ko jhatkana........
phir lipatke mujhse, thande jism se uthana,
aakhon me teri soorat, ek noor sa barsa gai.......
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai................................
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2006, 12:04:35 PM »
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shukriya vicky ji.. per aap sa nahi likha.. bahut khoob...
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