kal raat ki khamoshi............

by ranjana on April 26, 2006, 04:14:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 29, 2006, 03:46:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ..........

GESU ...........Kal raat ki khamoshi bahut kuch keh gayi,
Tumhari rooh mere jism mein bandh ke reh gayi,
Woh nazre tumhari har pal na jaane kya kya humse keh gayi,
Jaan-e-wafa yoon to aap ki seeratt hi dil ko bhaa gayi,
Per kal raat se to Kadr-e-manzil aur badh gayi,
Yeh dhadkan jo shor machati thi idhar
Aaj tumhare dil mein hulchul machane chali gayi...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!
 
 
BAHUT hi accha ......

with love

ranju
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«Reply #16 on: April 29, 2006, 03:51:31 AM »
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Kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai gazab dha gai,
jab laal jode ko odhe ghoongat me tu aa gai........
wo ghoongat ko utha kar, mere chand ko takna,
wo chandni nikal tujhse, mujhme hi sama gai.......
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai................................

tujhe bahon me bhar, jab lali hoton se churai,
saanse nikal ke tujhse, meri saanson me sama gai.......
phir dhadkane badhti rahi, tere husn ke nashe se,
teri badan ki aanch, mere jism ko sulga gai............
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai...............................

wo tera simat kar mere aagosh me aana,
aakhen teri paimana ban kar kuch pila gai...........
subah jab tune, husn me apne, mere ishq ko dekha,
to us aaine ka dil bhi tu dhak se dhadka gai..........
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai...............................

wo teri sadgi, wo teri masoomiyat, nazren jhukana,
wo naha kar tere, geele gesu ko jhatkana........
phir lipatke mujhse, thande jism se uthana,
aakhon me teri soorat, ek noor sa barsa gai.......
kal raat ki khamoshi, waqai................................
 
 
wow  Vicky ............wonderful......amazingi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so romantic ........

aapki yah lines meri kavitaa per chhaa gayi......
meri kavitaa ko aur is mahol ko aur romantic bana gayi......
waqai aapki yah koshishe  mujh per gajab dha gayi.........
 Usual Smile
with love

ranju
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«Reply #17 on: May 02, 2006, 08:51:59 AM »
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shukriya ranju ji....
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«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2006, 10:15:41 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya GESU JI aur RANJANA JI....
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«Reply #19 on: May 07, 2006, 01:48:17 PM »
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AAO KHUD KO DOOBO LE IS MAIN
RAAT GEHRI HAI BOHAT GEHRI.

AAO KHAMOSHIYO KI SUNLE HUM BAAT
GEHRI HAI BOHAT GEHRI

SHARD HAI RAAT TEZ HAI DHADKANE
MUJHKO KHUD MAIN SAMETLO JAANAM

KAAPTA HAI JO MAKHMAL KA BADAN
MERI BAHE LAPETLO JAANEMAN

FIR MUQIL NA HOGI MEEI MANZIL
JAB SHAATH HOGA TERA JAISA DILBAR.


mazid ji aaj isko dubara pada .......really it is very beautiful.........
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«Reply #20 on: May 08, 2006, 05:14:54 AM »
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raat ki khomshi me tere aane ki aahat
sunnen ki koshish karte rahi kal
man ki kaliya sajate rahi kal
khuda se ek ki gujarish rahi mera kal raat
hio sake to ek raat ki zindgi aur mil jaye
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«Reply #21 on: May 08, 2006, 05:35:52 AM »
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raat ki khomshi me tere aane ki aahat
sunnen ki koshish karte rahi kal
man ki kaliya sajate rahi kal
khuda se ek ki gujarish rahi mera kal raat
hio sake to ek raat ki zindgi aur mil jaye


nice

sharma rahi hai ghatayen
gesu bikhar se haye hain
badal bhi ghir kar chand se
pyar kar rahe hain......

tere badan ki kushboo
mujhe madhosh kar  rahi hai
dharkane dil mein bar kar
khamosh ho rahi hain.....
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«Reply #22 on: May 08, 2006, 07:21:35 AM »
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kya baat hai majid, vikas and ranju ji.... superbzzzzz
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«Reply #23 on: May 08, 2006, 07:25:33 AM »
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Kal raat baat karte karte jo kuch der ki khamoshi si hui,
Dhadkano ne tumhe bata diya ke jawaabon ke lavz sung mein simtii rahi,
Yoon baat jo puchi tumne mujhse saansein chalti rahi tez per yeh haya na gayi,
Kaise bataoon ke pyar karne ko tumhe hum bhi tadaptey hai,
Samajh liya karo tum in aankhon ki zuban, lavz to miltey nahi hamein,
Aur haan mere sanam isi haya per to aata hai tumhe bhi pyar....

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #24 on: May 08, 2006, 07:34:30 AM »
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Gesu ji woooow   bahut khoob...

na karo aise koshish ke dhadkan dhadkna bhul jaati hai
saanse chalte chalte rukne se lagta hai
tadpte to hum bhi payar mai kaya kare
jisse bhi payar karte hai woh hi dard dejate hai....
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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2006, 07:37:11 AM »
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bahut khoob janaab... but yeh gesu jiiiiiiiiii kyon?Huh???
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«Reply #26 on: May 08, 2006, 07:39:54 AM »
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bahut khoob janaab... but yeh gesu jiiiiiiiiii kyon?Huh???


oops Gesu without Ji.
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«Reply #27 on: May 08, 2006, 07:43:22 AM »
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Tjanks Majid Bahii..

app ka bhi swagat hai......
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«Reply #28 on: May 08, 2006, 07:46:12 AM »
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hmm ab theek hai ab dekhiye yeh majid ne ji laga diya...
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«Reply #29 on: May 08, 2006, 08:19:17 AM »
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qq Puzzled ! kyon?Huh?
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