kami si lagti hai....

by rita mal on June 25, 2013, 01:41:24 PM
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Sab kuch hai lekin phir bhi ek kami si lagti hai
Saans hai magar zindgi kuch thami si lagti hai

Kaun rah gaya akela bichad ke mere saaye se
Meri parchaai mein ik tasveer jami si lagti hai

Baadlon se nikal k ek chota tukda aasmaa ka
Gira jahaan wo ek anjaan zameen si lagti hai

Honth beshaq zaahir kar bhi den hansi teri
Aankhon mein magar ek ghami si lagti hai

Muddat hui abr aabshaar n hue ghar pe mere
Aaj uske aane pe hawaa me ek nami si lagti hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2013, 01:55:18 PM »
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WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob........................
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 02:07:40 PM »
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bahut khoob rita ji. likhte rahiye. yeh sher kaafi achcha hai

Kaun rah gaya akela bichad ke mere saaye se
Meri parchaai mein ik tasveer jami si lagti hai
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 02:37:55 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 02:54:07 PM »
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Quote from: rita mal on June 25, 2013, 01:41:24 PM
Sab kuch hai lekin phir bhi ek kami si lagti hai
Saans hai magar zindgi kuch thami si lagti hai

Kaun rah gaya akela bichad ke mere saaye se
Meri parchaai mein ik tasveer jami si lagti hai

Baadlon se nikal k ek chota tukda aasmaa ka
Gira jahaan wo ek anjaan zameen si lagti hai

Honth beshaq zaahir kar bhi den hansi teri
Aankhon mein magar ek ghami si lagti hai

Muddat hui abr aabshaar n hue ghar pe mere
Aaj uske aane pe hawaa me ek nami si lagti hai



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerboss!!!!!!!! one rau
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 02:56:18 PM »
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khoob nyc thoughts,..............
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 03:41:02 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB..........
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 06:53:41 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 08:28:20 PM »
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Kaun rah gaya akela bichad ke mere saaye se
Meri parchaai mein ik tasveer jami si lagti hai

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai rita jee..dhero daad..happy9
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley rita ji iss mukammal ghazal ke liye bahut bahut mubarakbad,,,keep it up
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waah Rita ji waah .. kyaa kehne ... bahut bahut khoobsoorat rachnaa.. bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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Bahut Khub Rita Sis


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