kareeb aakar dur chale gaye

by zabi. on September 19, 2008, 10:24:04 AM
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Tum Itnee Paas Hookar Bhi Kthni dur Hoo..
Mera Dil mein rahkar bhi lagatee koi dur tasvir hoo..
yeh meri khush nasabi hai yaa Badnasibi kya kahen..?
lage jaise honto pe hansi aur aankh mein paani hoo..
Chandnii raath par baadal kaa saayaa hoo..
manZil saamne aur andheri raat hoo..
jo kuch bhi hoo,
bass yahi duwa hai parvarjigaar se..,
mere jaisi kahaanii kisi aur kii naa hoo..
kisi aur kii naa hoo...
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2008, 11:55:27 AM »
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Quote from: zabi. on September 19, 2008, 10:24:04 AM
Tum Itnee Paas Hookar Bhi Kthni dur Hoo..
Mera Dil mein rahkar bhi lagatee koi dur tasvir hoo..
yeh meri khush nasabi hai yaa Badnasibi kya kahen..?
lage jaise honto pe hansi aur aankh mein paani hoo..
Chandnii raath par baadal kaa saayaa hoo..
manZil saamne aur andheri raat hoo..
jo kuch bhi hoo,
bass yahi duwa hai parvarjigaar se..,
mere jaisi kahaanii kisi aur kii naa hoo..
kisi aur kii naa hoo...
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2008, 01:24:44 PM »
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Quote from: zabi. on September 19, 2008, 10:24:04 AM
Tum Itnee Paas Hookar Bhi Kthni dur Hoo..
Mera Dil mein rahkar bhi lagatee koi dur tasvir hoo..
yeh meri khush nasabi hai yaa Badnasibi kya kahen..?
lage jaise honto pe hansi aur aankh mein paani hoo..
Chandnii raath par baadal kaa saayaa hoo..
manZil saamne aur andheri raat hoo..
jo kuch bhi hoo,
bass yahi duwa hai parvarjigaar se..,
mere jaisi kahaanii kisi aur kii naa hoo..
kisi aur kii naa hoo...


Bahut umda!!!
Ishq mein dard aur dard mein Ishq... Bahut khoobsoorti se dono ko milaaya hai aapne.. Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2008, 01:27:47 PM »
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Quote from: zabi. on September 19, 2008, 10:24:04 AM
Tum Itnee Paas Hookar Bhi Kthni dur Hoo..
Mera Dil mein rahkar bhi lagatee koi dur tasvir hoo..
yeh meri khush nasabi hai yaa Badnasibi kya kahen..?
lage jaise honto pe hansi aur aankh mein paani hoo..
Chandnii raath par baadal kaa saayaa hoo..
manZil saamne aur andheri raat hoo..
jo kuch bhi hoo,
bass yahi duwa hai parvarjigaar se..,
mere jaisi kahaanii kisi aur kii naa hoo..
kisi aur kii naa hoo...

Very beautiful...very nice Zabi... Applause Applause Keep writing
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2008, 03:14:57 PM »
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Nice One Zabi Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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