Kareeb

by Pooja on August 09, 2004, 07:04:00 PM
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #15 on: December 09, 2004, 02:55:13 PM »
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Shukriya Pooja ji N Waheed bhai!!!

Very Nice written Waheed Bhai!!!Waaah!
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«Reply #16 on: December 09, 2004, 03:00:03 PM »
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Pyas woh dil ki bujhane kabhi aayaa bhi nahin,
Kaisa Badal Hai Jiska Koi Saya Bhi Nahin!
Berukhee is se badi aur bhala kya hogi,
Ek Muddat se hamen usne Sataya bhi nahin
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Kya baat hai Arunji!! happy9
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: December 09, 2004, 03:01:27 PM »
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Aahista chaliye Aap Mere dil ke mod par,
Pyali na Toot Jaye Nazar ki Sharab ki!
Daaman mein Mujh ko Chhupaa lein mere Huzoor,
Bijliyan Gira rahi Hai Kiran Aaftaab ki!!
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Wah!! wah!!

Daaman hai mera sholon se bhara
jal  jaayega tu  zara door  hi rehna ;-)
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #18 on: December 09, 2004, 03:09:17 PM »
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Yeh Aankhon Key Jhapakney Mein Huwa Sard Yeh Bazaar
Yeh Shorat Key Khareedar Ko Shorat Sey Mila Kya….


na jaane ashk se ankhon mein kyun hai aye howay
guzar gayaa zamaanaa tujhe bhulaaye hue....................


Waaah very Nice waheed Bhai!!!

Aandhiyon Ke saath Kya manzar Suhane aaye hain!
Aaj Maidaanon mein Baghon ke Khazaane aaye hain!

Ab Mere talwon ke neeche ki Zameen Aazaad Hai,
Aasmaanon se mujhe Badal Bulaane aaye hain!

Reit se Dariya ate hain Khak se Jheelein pateen,
Yeh Parinde Khoon mein Shayad Nahane aaye hain!!

In mein Roshan hain abhi tak tere Boson ke Chiragh,
Isliye Hum Apni Aankhein Khud Sajaane aaye hain!

Khwab jis dil mein raha karte the kab ka mar chuka,
Kiska Darwaza yeh bachche Khatkhatane aaye hain!

(Dr.Basheer Badra)
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #19 on: December 09, 2004, 03:20:05 PM »
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Aahista chaliye Aap Mere dil ke mod par,
Pyali na Toot Jaye Nazar ki Sharab ki!
Daaman mein Mujh ko Chhupaa lein mere Huzoor,
Bijliyan Gira rahi Hai Kiran Aaftaab ki!!
(Not Known)


Wah!! wah!!

Daaman hai mera sholon se bhara
jal  jaayega tu  zara door  hi rehna ;-)


Waaah Ji Waah!! Kya Baat hai!! Very Nice Talat ji!!!!

Jalne ki Chahat Liye Ta Umr Jalta raha hoon main!
Hoon to patthar magar Mom sa pighalta raha hoon main!
Na sukoon Mila Mujhe Phoolon ki Thandak se bhi Kabhi,
Tabhi to har dum Sholon ke liye machalta raha hoon main!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #20 on: December 09, 2004, 03:21:16 PM »
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Pyas woh dil ki bujhane kabhi aayaa bhi nahin,
Kaisa Badal Hai Jiska Koi Saya Bhi Nahin!
Berukhee is se badi aur bhala kya hogi,
Ek Muddat se hamen usne Sataya bhi nahin
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Kya baat hai Arunji!! happy9


Shukriya Talat ji!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: December 09, 2004, 03:42:39 PM »
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Pyas woh dil ki bujhane kabhi aayaa bhi nahin,
Kaisa Badal Hai Jiska Koi Saya Bhi Nahin!
Berukhee is se badi aur bhala kya hogi,
Ek Muddat se hamen usne Sataya bhi nahin
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Kya baat hai Arunji!! happy9


wow talat....excellent..................too good arun bhai..............

Ab Unka Kya Bharosa Woh Aayen Na Aayen
Aa, Ai Gham-E-Mohabbat Tujhko Gale Laga Len.............
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immi
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«Reply #22 on: December 09, 2004, 03:52:18 PM »
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Bahot khoob All !!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #23 on: December 09, 2004, 05:48:36 PM »
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Thanks Waheed Bhai N immi ji!!! Usual Smile
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #24 on: December 11, 2004, 01:57:19 PM »
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shukriya  immi.................. Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: December 11, 2004, 02:11:07 PM »
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Waaah Ji Waah!! Kya Baat hai!! Very Nice Talat ji!!!!


Jalne ki Chahat Liye Ta Umr Jalta raha hoon main!
Hoon to patthar magar Mom sa pighalta raha hoon main!
Na sukoon Mila Mujhe Phoolon ki Thandak se bhi Kabhi,
Tabhi to har dum Sholon ke liye machalta raha hoon main!


Thanks Arunji..Immi.. Waheed
Kya baat hai Arunji!!!!
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lovebites
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«Reply #26 on: December 11, 2004, 03:16:47 PM »
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nice work allzz........................!


or tu kuch wada nahi tha tujh se
chahtoon ki wadian roshan thi tujhe se
yeh kya k pal mein taqdeer he badal gi
zamaney ne juda ker diya mujhe tujh se
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«Reply #27 on: December 11, 2004, 03:21:00 PM »
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Bicharh ke bhi tujh se juda nahin hoon main
Aknhain band karke dekho saamne hu main
Chahaton ki roshni bujhne na paayegi kabhi
Dunya teri yaadon se aabaad hardam rahegi
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #28 on: December 11, 2004, 03:27:52 PM »
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wow Talat! Really beautiful words ,rreally impressive......n gud work all! kepp it up! :twisted:
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Talat
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«Reply #29 on: December 11, 2004, 03:31:43 PM »
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Thanks Mansi...wrote after a long time!! happy9
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