-----/// Karte ho qatl ///----- Hriday

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aisaa  lagtaa  hai  gir   jaayenge hum   sambhalne  se pehle
thaam lo tum haath, yeh haseen   shaam   dhalne  se  pehle

chhune tumhe  badhtaa hoon jab, bheed me chhip jaate ho
jaanaa,  tum dil  tod   dete ho  armaan  machalne  se  pehle

haaye  yeh   shaitaaniyaan,  uuufff  teri  ye badmaashiyaan
kyun barsaat bulaa  lete  ho   tum  aag  ke  jalne  se  pehle

tadpaate  ho   hum  ko  tum , jaise  jal  bin  koi  machhli  ho
jalaate  ho  humein  tum ,   jism-o-jaan  pighalne   se  pehle

hamein dekhte  ho duur  se tum, chhip   chhip  ke  haste ho
jaanaa ,  karte  ho    yun  qatl mera, jaan  nikalne  se  pehle


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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2013, 04:38:03 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shireen ji....!!!

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haaye yeh shaitaaniyaan, uuufff teri ye badmaashiyaan
kyun barsaat bulaa lete ho tum aag ke jalne se pehle
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Heer ji....!!!

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haaye yeh shaitaaniyaan, uuufff teri ye badmaashiyaan
kyun barsaat bulaa lete ho tum aag ke jalne se pehle
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 Applause  kya baat hai Hriday ji...bade umda shararat bhare ehsaas haiN....bahut khoob janab, mubaarak ho !!
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woooooooooow! really a beautiful one bahut khoob likha hai dheron daad hriday jee
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Hriday Ji !!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ainy ji....!!!

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thank you sooo much Saini ji....!!!

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