"KARWAT DE ZINDAGI KO~~~~

by k.shael on May 12, 2008, 09:51:15 AM
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AEY MERE KHUDA AAJ TAK TUNE MUJHE
BAHUT KUCH HAI DIYA,AAJ EK REHMAT
MUJH PAR AUR KAR DE,

MERI JHOLI MERE YAAR KE PYAAR SE
BHARDE,SARI UMAR NA MANGOONGI TUJHSE
KUCH AUR BASS USS KI WAFA MERE NAAM
KAR DE,

JAB TAK HAI ZINDAGI WO MERE SAATH
RAHE,MARTE WAQT MERI SAANSEIN USKI
JHOOLI MEIN NIKLE,

HAR SUBAH DEKH PAO CHEHRA USKA,HAR RAAT
USE AANKHON MEIN BHAR SO JAO,ESI KISMAT
KI LAKEEREIN MERE HATHOON MEIN BHAR DE,

MEIN HASOO TO USKE LIYE RAO TO USKE LIYE,
AISE KUCH MERE HALAT KARDE,AISI KARWAT DE
ZINDAGI KO KI HAM DONO EK DUSRE KE NAAM
ZINDAGI KAR DE....

BY. K.SHAEL



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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2008, 09:58:54 AM »
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k.shael

wah! Bahut khoob !

KARWAT DE ZINDAGI KO~~~~ Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2008, 10:24:14 AM »
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THANX SO MUCH RAJBIR,
AAP HAR BAAR MERI LIKHI
KALAM KO PADHTE AUR SARAHTE HAI....
KABHI HAME BHI MOUKA DIZIYE,
AAPKA LIKHA PADNE KA.....
IT'S A REQUEST....
BY. K.SHAEL


JANTE HAI HAM AAP HAAL-E-DIL
BAYAAN NAHI KARTE,
PAR KUCH TO JAHIR KIJIYE HAM
DOST HAI AAPKE KOI PARAYE NAHI....
DARD BATANE SE KAM HOTE HAI CHUPANE
SE YE DIL PE RAAJ KARTE HAI....
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2008, 10:33:06 AM »
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Thanks for your kind words.

Aap achcha likhti hain, toh mumkin hai ki padhenge !

Kaash humein bhi likhna aata aur hum bhi apne jazbaat aap sab ki tarah zahir kar sakte sad5

Aap likhte rahiye...

Hum padhte rahenge aur sarahte rahenge !
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2008, 01:15:12 PM »
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k.shael..bohat acha likha hai aapne ..Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2008, 03:31:40 PM »
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bahut khoob shallyji...bahut acha likha hai aapne..

khaas kar yeh lines to bahut achi hai
"main hasoo to uske liye,
 main ro to uske liye,
aise kuch mere halaat karde.. Applause Applause  bahut ache..color]
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2008, 03:58:15 PM »
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AEY MERE KHUDA AAJ TAK TUNE
MUJHE BAHUT KUCH HAI DIYA....
AAJ EK REHMAT MUJH PAR AUR
KAR DE,
MERI JHOLI MERE YAAR KE
PYAAR SE BHARDE,
SARI UMAR NA MANGOONGI
TUJHSE KUCH AUR
BASS USS KI WAFA MERE NAAM
KAR DE....
JAB TAK HAI ZINDAGI WO MERE
SAATH RAHE,
MARTE WAQT MERI SAANSEIN USKI
JHOOLI MEIN NIKLE....
HAR SUBAH DEKH PAO CHEHRA USKA,
HAR RAAT USE AANKHON MEIN BHAR
SO JAO,
ESI KISMAT KI LAKEEREIN MERE
HATHOON MEIN BHAR DE....
MEIN HASOO TO USKE LIYE RAO TO
USKE LIYE....
AISE KUCH MERE HALAT KARDE,
AISI KARWAT DE ZINDAGI KO KI HAM
DONO EK DUSRE KE NAAM ZINDAGI KAR DE....
BY. K.SHAEL

Wah shael siso... bahut accha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2008, 05:55:15 AM »
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THANX SO MUCH,
HONEYROSE....
I JUST WRITE MY HEART FEELINGS,
U ALL LIKE THIS THING....
IT'S MY PLEASURE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2008, 05:57:24 AM »
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THANKS SO MUCH,
KHAWISH JI....
AAP NE MERA KALAM PADA AUR
USE PASAND KIYA YE MERE LIYE
KHUSHI KI BAAT HAI....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2008, 05:59:21 AM »
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THANK U SOOOOOO MUCH,
ROZA JI....
MEIN KHUDA SE YAHI DUA KAROONGI
KI AAB MEIN UHI LIKHTI RAHO....
AUR AAP SAB KE SAMNE LATI RAHO,
BY. K.SHAEL
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