kasak dil ki

by Rahi2001 on August 19, 2010, 10:15:06 AM
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kyon khamosh hai aaj ek kasak dil ki
kahin chup kar baithi hai ek kasak dil ki

kabhi na chup rehna janti hai wo hai badboli
aaj sahmi si sakuchai si hai ek kasak dil ki

na jane koun hai wo , kahan ka hai wo sahjada
ke jiske pyaar me tadapti hai ek kasak dil ki

kabhi mil jaye wo mujhko to bata dunga use b mai
ke kitni bholi hai masum hai ek kasak dil ki

use jab naaz hoga sar jhuka dega wo sanam par
ke phir chhod kar gussa lipat jayegi ek kasak dil ki

nahi pahunche use kabhi bhi ko dard ki tasveeren
badi kamjor hai dil se kahin ek kasak dil ki  
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 10:19:48 AM »
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hmm acchha likha he~ khush rahiye!~
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 10:26:06 AM »
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rahullllll........... love4

bht pyara likha hai ...... icon_thumleft

rula diya tumne..... Crying

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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2010, 10:28:54 AM »
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wah wah Rahul ji bahot hi pyar aur dard bayan kiya hai aapne...
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2010, 10:33:06 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahul Ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2010, 10:39:02 AM »
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hmm acchha likha he~ khush rahiye!~

shukriyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

4 both (acha likha hai , khush rahiye)

buttttttt..............

khushi hamri taqdir se ojhal ho gayi
aaj kartehi unko yaad ye aankhen bojhal ho gayi
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 10:40:13 AM »
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rahullllll........... love4

bht pyara likha hai ...... icon_thumleft

rula diya tumne..... Crying



sry diiiiiiiiii.......... par kasam se mai aap ko rulana nahi chahta tha

ho sake to mujhe maf kar dijiyega
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2010, 10:42:13 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahul Ji
wah wah Rahul ji bahot hi pyar aur dard bayan kiya hai aapne...

aap dono ka shukriya meri rachana ko itna pasand karne ke liye

aap ka aabhariiiiiiiii
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2010, 08:51:33 PM »
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bahut khoob raahi ji..
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2010, 10:12:36 PM »
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Ahsaas dilfareb hai Janab......
Jee aapse kahe the Roman per dhayaan dijiye .. janab aapki roman achchi hai... Roman means kisi language ko aap agar english meiN likhate hai to use roman kahte hai...

Aap zarra word ko jara likhe isliye kaha tha yahaaN bhi aapne
"Kamzor" ko kamjor kiya hai... Shayad aapki "Z" se banti nahi hai..

Koi baat naih humari bhi nahi banti hai... Usual Smile

Khair likhate rahiye..
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez....
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2010, 01:47:20 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2010, 06:16:57 AM »
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Ahsaas dilfareb hai Janab......
Jee aapse kahe the Roman per dhayaan dijiye .. janab aapki roman achchi hai... Roman means kisi language ko aap agar english meiN likhate hai to use roman kahte hai...

Aap zarra word ko jara likhe isliye kaha tha yahaaN bhi aapne
"Kamzor" ko kamjor kiya hai... Shayad aapki "Z" se banti nahi hai..

Koi baat naih humari bhi nahi banti hai... Usual Smile

Khair likhate rahiye..
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez....




ehehehehehehehehhe 
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shukriya sarkaar hamen roman samjhane ka
ham janab "z" ko patayengy
use lakar apne shabdon me baithaengy
nahi manega wo hamare se gr pyaar me
kasam khuda ki! ham usko khub rulayengy

ehehehehehehehhe

aap ka bhut bhaut shukriya

aap ka aabhari
"Rahi"
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