kasam tumhari na main jee sakunga

by samir_bc on December 08, 2009, 06:42:14 PM
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teri chahat hai kitni bata nahi sakte
bus ho kar juda ek pal ko bhi tujhse
kasam tumhari na main jee sakunga

ho jaye khata ko kar dena maaf mujhe
rehna na kabhi hoker khafa tum mujhse
kasam tumhari na main reh sakunga


ho koi shikva to keh dena apna samjhker
bus karna na kabhi berukhi tum mujhse
kasam tumhari na main seh sakunga

chhoda jo tumne kabhi saath mera
puchegi duniya phir  hazaaro sawal
kasam tumhari na main kuch keh sakunga


teri chahat hai kitni bata nahi sakte
bus ho kar juda ek pal ko bhi tujhse
kasam tumhari na main jee sakunga



samir"dilse"
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2009, 06:44:37 PM »
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bahoot khoob sameer!! bahot dil se likha hai ek ek shabd apne... Good work!!
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2009, 06:55:53 PM »
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bahoot khoob sameer!! bahot dil se likha hai ek ek shabd apne... Good work!!

thanks a lot pooja ji...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2009, 08:14:23 PM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Samir Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2009, 09:42:36 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita hai Samir ji,really touched,excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2009, 01:30:52 PM »
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wah samir jee really bahut achha laga par kar.
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samir_bc
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2009, 05:23:01 AM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Samir Ji

baht bahot shukriya.. rajesh ji.
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2009, 05:24:58 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita hai Samir ji,really touched,excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanks madhu ji........
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2009, 05:26:06 AM »
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wah samir jee really bahut achha laga par kar.

thanks asha ji..... welcome to yoindia.
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2009, 12:13:56 PM »
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thanks asha ji..... welcome to yoindia.

welcome samir jee and thanks 4 welcoming me.
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lovable_guy006
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2009, 01:12:12 AM »
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Wah nice one !!!
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samir_bc
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2009, 04:42:24 AM »
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thanks lovable_guy006 ji.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2009, 03:35:35 PM »
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Nice creation samir ji
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2009, 04:34:52 PM »
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Nice creation samir ji


thanks rishi ji.....
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2009, 04:55:17 PM »
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