"" Kash ye sach ho jaaye "" 'nir'

by nirala on February 10, 2011, 03:50:26 PM
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kaash ye sach ho jaaye---
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baahon me lekar tujhe,jara sa mai jhoom lu---

gulaabi tere gaalon ko, aaj besabri se chuum lu---

ke na rokna aaj mujhe---

madbhari tere hotho ka,aaj jara sa jaam lu---

masti hai chhai aise---

ke aaja aaj tere daaman ko,mai ta-umra thaam lu---

hosh me na raha ab 'nir', dil hua beqaboo---

ke aa sanam saanson ko mai apni , ab tera hi naam du---
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 05:02:49 PM »
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Kya baat hai nirala ji bada hi madhoshi bhara kalam likha hai ji bahut khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2011, 04:56:35 AM »
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aapka thanx BBl ji.
kabhi kabhi  kisi ki bahut yaad aa jaati hai na Usual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 05:04:32 AM »
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wah wah niralaji... bahur khub hai aapka pyar uske lie jiski yaad kabhi nahin jati....
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2011, 05:25:07 AM »
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Usual Smile thanx Manju.
aur haan na to uski yaad kabhi jayegi
aur na hi wo kabhi zindgi me ayegi
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 06:29:30 AM »
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i wish ye khyal us tak pahunch jayen jise yaad karte huye aapne kahe hain

bhut acha hai Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2011, 02:24:21 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2011, 02:32:05 PM »
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nir .....aapki rachna bahut hi romantic laga
ek rhyme yaad aagayi
kagaz ki gudiya kagaz gudiya .....gudiya ki haath nahiN hai
gudiya kaise khayegi ........

ab kash koi do haath de de .........

mast likha aapne daad
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2011, 02:38:04 PM »
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ye kagaz ki gudia wala poora mile to plzz post kariyega kabhi.
i thnk ki ye bahut achhi kavita hogi.
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thanx aal
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2011, 12:58:13 AM »
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kaash ye sach ho jaaye---
""
baahon me lekar tujhe,jara sa mai jhoom lu---

gulaabi tere gaalon ko, aaj besabri se chuum lu---

ke na rokna aaj mujhe---

madbhari tere hotho ka,aaj jara sa jaam lu---

masti hai chhai aise---

ke aaja aaj tere daaman ko,mai ta-umra thaam lu---

hosh me na raha ab 'nir', dil hua beqaboo---

ke aa sanam saanson ko mai apni , ab tera hi naam du---
""

Very Romantic ....... Nirala ji !
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2011, 09:07:21 AM »
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Very Romantic ....... Nirala ji !
thanx
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2011, 09:09:30 AM »
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nir .....aapki rachna bahut hi romantic laga
ek rhyme yaad aagayi
kagaz ki gudiya kagaz gudiya .....gudiya ki haath nahiN hai
gudiya kaise khayegi ........

ab kash koi do haath de de .........

mast likha aapne daad
ye rhyme pura likho
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