Kashmakash

by thycreator on April 23, 2005, 09:51:44 AM
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sandhaya
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«Reply #90 on: April 30, 2005, 07:35:04 AM »
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Thanx a lot friends........jiske liye likha hai.....dekhe usko kaisa lagta hai.....;-)
Talat ji.....
Mera mehboob ki tareef mai kaise bayan karu,
Kudrat ki har ek seh bhi uske aage jhuk jaye,
Wo bat hai usme ki khuda bhi aah bharta hoga,
Wo hans de agar toh jane kitni saansein ruk jaye.



good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai
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«Reply #91 on: April 30, 2005, 07:48:10 AM »
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Thanx a lot friends........jiske liye likha hai.....dekhe usko kaisa lagta hai.....;-)
Talat ji.....
Mera mehboob ki tareef mai kaise bayan karu,
Kudrat ki har ek seh bhi uske aage jhuk jaye,
Wo bat hai usme ki khuda bhi aah bharta hoga,
Wo hans de agar toh jane kitni saansein ruk jaye.



good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai


oye hoye wah jee wah.. bahoot khoob..

isi ada par to kurbaan huye hai..
ab jaan  bhi jaaye to gum nahi..
bas yun hi chalta rahe apne pyaar ka safar..
saans ruk bhi jaye to gam nahi...
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sandhaya
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«Reply #92 on: April 30, 2005, 09:26:30 AM »
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Thanx a lot friends........jiske liye likha hai.....dekhe usko kaisa lagta hai.....;-)
Talat ji.....
Mera mehboob ki tareef mai kaise bayan karu,
Kudrat ki har ek seh bhi uske aage jhuk jaye,
Wo bat hai usme ki khuda bhi aah bharta hoga,
Wo hans de agar toh jane kitni saansein ruk jaye.



good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai


oye hoye wah jee wah.. bahoot khoob..

isi ada par to kurbaan huye hai..
ab jaan  bhi jaaye to gum nahi..
bas yun hi chalta rahe apne pyaar ka safar..
saans ruk bhi jaye to gam nahi...
sukhriya sandeep ji .......and nice reply

tere hi lafzo se chalti hai saanain
tu khudko mitane ki baat na kar
tu akela na hai teri manjil ki raah main
tu akele hi marne ki baaat na kar
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«Reply #93 on: April 30, 2005, 08:40:11 PM »
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Thanx a lot friends........jiske liye likha hai.....dekhe usko kaisa lagta hai.....;-)
Talat ji.....
Mera mehboob ki tareef mai kaise bayan karu,
Kudrat ki har ek seh bhi uske aage jhuk jaye,
Wo bat hai usme ki khuda bhi aah bharta hoga,
Wo hans de agar toh jane kitni saansein ruk jaye.



good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai


oye hoye wah jee wah.. bahoot khoob..

isi ada par to kurbaan huye hai..
ab jaan  bhi jaaye to gum nahi..
bas yun hi chalta rahe apne pyaar ka safar..
saans ruk bhi jaye to gam nahi...
sukhriya sandeep ji .......and nice reply

tere hi lafzo se chalti hai saanain
tu khudko mitane ki baat na kar
tu akela na hai teri manjil ki raah main
tu akele hi marne ki baaat na kar
wah sandhya.............................
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«Reply #94 on: May 01, 2005, 05:38:44 AM »
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Thanx a lot friends........jiske liye likha hai.....dekhe usko kaisa lagta hai.....;-)
Talat ji.....
Mera mehboob ki tareef mai kaise bayan karu,
Kudrat ki har ek seh bhi uske aage jhuk jaye,
Wo bat hai usme ki khuda bhi aah bharta hoga,
Wo hans de agar toh jane kitni saansein ruk jaye.



good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai


oye hoye wah jee wah.. bahoot khoob..

isi ada par to kurbaan huye hai..
ab jaan  bhi jaaye to gum nahi..
bas yun hi chalta rahe apne pyaar ka safar..
saans ruk bhi jaye to gam nahi...
sukhriya sandeep ji .......and nice reply

tere hi lafzo se chalti hai saanain
tu khudko mitane ki baat na kar
tu akela na hai teri manjil ki raah main
tu akele hi marne ki baaat na kar
wah sandhya.............................
sukhriya faree............
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thycreator
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«Reply #95 on: May 02, 2005, 06:46:29 PM »
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good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai


Thanx Sandhaya ji......n a real gud one...
Mere mehboob ki kashish mai kya kahu labzon mein,
Uska har ang ek kavita,ek ghazal ke kabil hai,
Uski nigahon ke nashe pe maikhane bhi dam bharte hai,
Kissi bhi shabdon mein nahi wo pura mukkammil hai...
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«Reply #96 on: May 02, 2005, 09:57:09 PM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
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sandhaya
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«Reply #97 on: May 03, 2005, 05:57:21 AM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai
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sandhaya
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«Reply #98 on: May 03, 2005, 06:03:20 AM »
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good Creator ji kya baat hai ............

log hosh ko badete hai kuch bemout mar jate hai
ada aisi hi hai unki jab bhi vo nazarein uthate hai
kya bataye kya aalam hota hai vo jab vo
angdai lete hue apna aanchal pehlate  hai


Thanx Sandhaya ji......n a real gud one...
Mere mehboob ki kashish mai kya kahu labzon mein,
Uska har ang ek kavita,ek ghazal ke kabil hai,
Uski nigahon ke nashe pe maikhane bhi dam bharte hai,
Kissi bhi shabdon mein nahi wo pura mukkammil hai...


thanks Creator Ji .......and good stuff

mehbub sabse tera hi nirala hai
kon hai jisne tujhpe ye jadu dala hai
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«Reply #99 on: May 03, 2005, 10:39:24 PM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai



chaha tha us ko ruh ki gahraioon kay sath ..
zinda hoon apni zat ki tanhaoon kay sath……
roka nahin tha us ko bicharny kay waqat bhi…..
apni wafa pa naz tha sachayoon kay sath
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«Reply #100 on: May 04, 2005, 04:41:06 AM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai



chaha tha us ko ruh ki gahraioon kay sath ..
zinda hoon apni zat ki tanhaoon kay sath……
roka nahin tha us ko bicharny kay waqat bhi…..
apni wafa pa naz tha sachayoon kay sath



wow Faree..... bahut acha laga really good

waafaein kiye ja tuh unse koi umeed na kar
ki mahobaat tuh naam hai bas diye jane ka humdum
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«Reply #101 on: May 04, 2005, 05:04:58 AM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai



chaha tha us ko ruh ki gahraioon kay sath ..
zinda hoon apni zat ki tanhaoon kay sath……
roka nahin tha us ko bicharny kay waqat bhi…..
apni wafa pa naz tha sachayoon kay sath



wow Faree..... bahut acha laga really good

waafaein kiye ja tuh unse koi umeed na kar
ki mahobaat tuh naam hai bas diye jane ka humdum


wow sandhaya  2  lines mein baho kuch  kah diya........wonderful.....nice  naveed.........
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«Reply #102 on: May 04, 2005, 05:15:22 AM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai



chaha tha us ko ruh ki gahraioon kay sath ..
zinda hoon apni zat ki tanhaoon kay sath……
roka nahin tha us ko bicharny kay waqat bhi…..
apni wafa pa naz tha sachayoon kay sath



wow Faree..... bahut acha laga really good

waafaein kiye ja tuh unse koi umeed na kar
ki mahobaat tuh naam hai bas diye jane ka humdum


wow sandhaya  2  lines mein baho kuch  kah diya........wonderful.....nice  naveed.........
sukhriya Waheed Ji ............Dua hai aapki
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«Reply #103 on: May 04, 2005, 06:31:02 AM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai



chaha tha us ko ruh ki gahraioon kay sath ..
zinda hoon apni zat ki tanhaoon kay sath……
roka nahin tha us ko bicharny kay waqat bhi…..
apni wafa pa naz tha sachayoon kay sath



wow Faree..... bahut acha laga really good

waafaein kiye ja tuh unse koi umeed na kar
ki mahobaat tuh naam hai bas diye jane ka humdum


hum wafa kr chukey hain
woh jafa kr rhaya hain
hum dua kr chukay hain
woh khfa ho rahay hain
hum dil de chukay hain
woh inkaar kr chukay hain
hum un ko jaan de chukay hain
woh humein duniya s juda kr chukay hain
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«Reply #104 on: May 04, 2005, 06:54:44 AM »
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har shaam ko guzarata hoon mein ajab kashmkash mein
k shayd aaj ki raat hi un ka deedar ho jaye hum ko
aahe bharata hai tu jiski chahat main
vo tuh tere hi palko ki chaon main rehte hai



chaha tha us ko ruh ki gahraioon kay sath ..
zinda hoon apni zat ki tanhaoon kay sath……
roka nahin tha us ko bicharny kay waqat bhi…..
apni wafa pa naz tha sachayoon kay sath



wow Faree..... bahut acha laga really good

waafaein kiye ja tuh unse koi umeed na kar
ki mahobaat tuh naam hai bas diye jane ka humdum


hum wafa kr chukey hain
woh jafa kr rhaya hain
hum dua kr chukay hain
woh khfa ho rahay hain
hum dil de chukay hain
woh inkaar kr chukay hain
hum un ko jaan de chukay hain
woh humein duniya s juda kr chukay hain
aaj tuh fariston ko bhi iljaam deti hai duniya
hum tum tuh phir mamuli insaan hai ..........
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