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hi frendz ye nazm meri nahi hai mein yaha isliye postt kar rahi hoon kyuki mujhe ye nazm behad pasand shayad apko bhi pasand aaye..
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Kya tha mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
Koi kahani logoo ko sunaate jaate
Maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
Jaan bhi liye jaa rahe ho jaate jaate
Kitne sapne dekhe humne jinki khatir
Chod gaye hame vo tanha jatte jaate
Vo to na aaye par yaadaain aati rahi
Kaise kahe kya haal hai jab unhone hi
Muh fer liya hamare saaamne se atte aate..
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2005, 02:56:59 PM » |
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hi frendz ye nazm meri nahi hai mein yaha isliye postt kar rahi hoon kyuki mujhe ye nazm behad pasand shayad apko bhi pasand aaye..
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Kya tha mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
Koi kahani logoo ko sunaate jaate
Maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
Jaan bhi liye jaa rahe ho jaate jaate
Kitne sapne dekhe humne jinki khatir
Chod gaye hame vo tanha jatte jaate
Vo to na aaye par yaadaain aati rahi
Kaise kahe kya haal hai jab unhone hi
Muh fer liya hamare saaamne se atte aate..
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------------ bahut badhiya hai very nice,.... |
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2005, 03:19:12 PM » |
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THANK YOU very much tushar for replying it and liking it................................
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2005, 03:40:32 PM » |
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hi frendz ye nazm meri nahi hai mein yaha isliye postt kar rahi hoon kyuki mujhe ye nazm behad pasand shayad apko bhi pasand aaye..
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Kya tha mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
Koi kahani logoo ko sunaate jaate
Maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
Jaan bhi liye jaa rahe ho jaate jaate
Kitne sapne dekhe humne jinki khatir
Chod gaye hame vo tanha jatte jaate
Vo to na aaye par yaadaain aati rahi
Kaise kahe kya haal hai jab unhone hi
Muh fer liya hamare saaamne se atte aate..
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------------ tere bare me mai kya kaho,.. mai tu khud hi bewafai ker gaya,... tujh per kaise ilzam lagao,... jab mai khud hi bewafai kar gaya,.... |
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2005, 09:52:39 PM » |
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hi frendz ye nazm meri nahi hai mein yaha isliye postt kar rahi hoon kyuki mujhe ye nazm behad pasand shayad apko bhi pasand aaye..
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Kya tha mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
Koi kahani logoo ko sunaate jaate
Maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
Jaan bhi liye jaa rahe ho jaate jaate
Kitne sapne dekhe humne jinki khatir
Chod gaye hame vo tanha jatte jaate
Vo to na aaye par yaadaain aati rahi
Kaise kahe kya haal hai jab unhone hi
Muh fer liya hamare saaamne se atte aate..
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------------ simran dear tahnx for sharing |
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2005, 12:53:25 PM » |
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thanx fakhar for replying and liking it and tushar apne buhut acha likha hai dost.....really good wordz...................
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2005, 05:10:36 PM » |
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hi frendz ye nazm meri nahi hai mein yaha isliye postt kar rahi hoon kyuki mujhe ye nazm behad pasand shayad apko bhi pasand aaye..
~*~*~*~*~*~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Kya tha mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
Koi kahani logoo ko sunaate jaate
Maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
Jaan bhi liye jaa rahe ho jaate jaate
Kitne sapne dekhe humne jinki khatir
Chod gaye hame vo tanha jatte jaate
Vo to na aaye par yaadaain aati rahi
Kaise kahe kya haal hai jab unhone hi
Muh fer liya hamare saaamne se atte aate..
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------------ hmmmmmmmmm wonderful simmi..................superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb |
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2005, 09:02:49 PM » |
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thanx..........................simran ji reply ka..................................
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2005, 08:39:57 AM » |
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thanx waheed for liking it and replying it buddy aur fakhar ab thanx kis baat ka aap jante hai dosti mein thanx and sorry nahi hota............ok
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2005, 10:08:16 AM » |
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ur awlays...........welcome simmi...............................
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2005, 11:38:14 AM » |
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"Chahe zindgi rahe na meri
Chahe koi na rahe mera apna
Bassti raho meri aankhon mei tum
Ban ke haseen ek sapna"
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2005, 03:07:10 PM » |
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wah buhut acha likha hai sem apne tu likhte rahiyega................
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2005, 09:11:45 PM » |
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yun to guzre hai her ek pal khushi ke saath
phir bhi koi kami si hai kyu zindagi ke saath
rishtey,wafayaan,dosti sab kuch to paas hai
kya baat hai pata nahi dil kyu uddaas hai
her lamha hai haseen nayi dilkashi ke saath
phir bhi koi kami si hai kyu zindagi ke saath
chahat bhi hai sakoon bhi dilbari bhi hai
aankhoon mein khuwaab bhi hai loboon par hansi bhi hai
dil ko nahi hai shikayat kisi ke saath
phir bhi koi kami se hai kyu zindagi ke saath
socha tha jaise waise ji jewan to hai magar
ab aur kisi ki talaash main bechain hai nazar
qudrat ki to meherbani hai darya dili ke saath
phir bhi koi kami se hai kyu zindagi je saath......
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2005, 06:20:02 AM » |
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Laut jaati hai duaye gum hamara dekh kar
Jaise laut jaati hai lahera kinara dekh kar
Tu kandha na dena mere janaze ko
Kahi phir zinda na ho jayun teri mohabbat dekhkar
[NM]
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2005, 08:02:29 PM » |
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Sumtimes when you are not close,
i need to hear your voice,
need to know that you are there for me,always
to listen to me, to share my joys and to understand me
when no one else can, for i know i can trust u ,
i can lean on you and open my heart onto u
because you'are not just sumone
but a part of me.
you are my love and always be.....!!
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