Katilana...

by Saman Firdaus on August 14, 2013, 11:18:52 PM
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Aapki nazar hai iss qadar kaatilana,
aap iss qadar na dekhe, aapki nazar hai iss qadar kaatilana,
aap iss qadar na dekhe..
 kahi ho na jar katilana aapk Dil k..
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2013, 11:39:25 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2013, 02:39:43 AM »
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nice
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GOOD ONE...........
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2013, 09:25:04 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2013, 11:46:02 AM »
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nice.. but always post in a proper section..
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2013, 12:55:05 PM »
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Good try but this far from a real poetry. You should learn some rules of poetry, if have any question then you can learn from Yoindia Shayariadab members and ask us here.
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