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Bahut Soch Ke
Der Tak
Chup Reh Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
Idhar-Udhar
Dekh Ke
Akele Me
Chhat Pe Bulaa Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
Ghar Ki
Dahaleej Pe
Baithii Paawon Samete
Maine Ruk Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
JanamDin Pe
Haath Me
Kangan Pehnaa Ke
Aur Jhumkiyon Ko
Ungli se Chhu Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
Chaar Saal Baad
Padhaai Puri Karke
Ghar Lautaa Hoon
Aur Tum Nahi Ho
Kisse Kahoon ...
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 12:34:04 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Janaab Naresh Ji
Dil Ke Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Ki
Shaql Mein Badi Khoobsurti Se
Pesh Kiya Hai Aapne Janaab.
Aapki Yeh Peshkash Mujhey
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Pasand Aayi.
Waqai Men Parhke Dil Bagh Bagh Ho Gaya
Dhero Dad. Kabul Kare...
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
Shihab Ji.....Aadaab ! aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya....aainda bhi aise hi apna saath banaye rakhiyega... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 03:29:00 AM » |
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Naresh Bhaiiiiii... Phir se ek umda Peshkash Hai Aapki.. Ehasaason Ko Lafzon Me behad Khubsoorati se Utara hai aapne.. Dil Khush Ho Gaya aapki Yeh nazm Padh kar.. 
**~** Mann **~**
Mann Ji.....bahut bahut shukriya......aapki pasandegi aur hausla afzaai ka....aainda bhi aap se aise hi saath miltaa rahega... khush rahen.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath... |
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2010, 04:18:39 AM » |
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anjan si baaton me
alhad si muskaan me
uchalte hue jhulon me
tumne kai bar kaha tha
k main tumhe pasand hun....!!!
school bus me seat rokte hue
canteen me masti karte hue
teri aankhon ne kai bar kaha
meri aankhon ne ye har bar suna
k main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
ghanton chhat par jab baithe rehte the
ek duje k sukh dukh sath sehte the
hath tham mera tab tumne kaha tha
uss chandni raat me dheere se k
haan main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
fir kisi ek din yunhi bina kuch kahe
chale gaye tum durr bht mujhse
ye bhi na kaha k intezar karma
main laut k aaunga meri hi rehna
kyunki main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
aaj itne saalon baad aaye ho tum
mujhe khoj rahe ho tum ghar k har kone me
par nahin hun main yahan k
tum mujhe bahon me apni bhar sako aur keh sako
k main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
jane k baad tere main bhi chali gai sanam
yaadon ko teri seene se lagaye banke teri priytam
iss ghar gali is duniya se durrr bht durr
ab bas khayalon me milungi tumse
tab kehna mujhe laga seene se....
k main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2010, 05:44:13 AM » |
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anjan si baaton me
alhad si muskaan me
uchalte hue jhulon me
tumne kai bar kaha tha
k main tumhe pasand hun....!!!
school bus me seat rokte hue
canteen me masti karte hue
teri aankhon ne kai bar kaha
meri aankhon ne ye har bar suna
k main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
ghanton chhat par jab baithe rehte the
ek duje k sukh dukh sath sehte the
hath tham mera tab tumne kaha tha
uss chandni raat me dheere se k
haan main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
fir kisi ek din yunhi bina kuch kahe
chale gaye tum durr bht mujhse
ye bhi na kaha k intezar karma
main laut k aaunga meri hi rehna
kyunki main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
aaj itne saalon baad aaye ho tum
mujhe khoj rahe ho tum ghar k har kone me
par nahin hun main yahan k
tum mujhe bahon me apni bhar sako aur keh sako
k main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
jane k baad tere main bhi chali gai sanam
yaadon ko teri seene se lagaye banke teri priytam
iss ghar gali is duniya se durrr bht durr
ab bas khayalon me milungi tumse
tab kehna mujhe laga seene se....
k main tumhe pasand hun...!!!
[/color] Wahaa ...Kasak Ji ! kya khoob nazm pesh ki hai aapne ....meri rachna toh isske aage thehar hi nahi paa rahi....Very Impressive creation......tahe dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2010, 04:06:58 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya .....aap sabke saath ka !
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2010, 06:35:00 AM » |
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Aik achchhi tehreer poore shabaab ke saath. Daad qubul kijiye. (Waquif Ansari) Bahut Soch Ke
Der Tak
Chup Reh Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
Idhar-Udhar
Dekh Ke
Akele Me
Chhat Pe Bulaa Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
Ghar Ki
Dahaleej Pe
Baithii Paawon Samete
Maine Ruk Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
JanamDin Pe
Haath Me
Kangan Pehnaa Ke
Aur Jhumkiyon Ko
Ungli se Chhu Ke
Tum Se Kaha Thaa
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
Chaar Saal Baad
Padhaai Puri Karke
Ghar Lautaa Hoon
Aur Tum Nahi Ho
Kisse Kahoon ...
Ke Tum Mujhe Pasand Ho... !
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2010, 06:38:00 AM » |
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shukriya Naresh ji k aapko ye jawab pasand aaya......
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2010, 12:14:09 PM » |
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Aik achchhi tehreer poore shabaab ke saath. Daad qubul kijiye.
(Waquif Ansari)
Ansari Sahab ! Aadaab ! aapka koshish ko saraahne aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya....aainda bhi aise hi saath nibhaate rahiyega... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath... |
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«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2010, 03:10:57 PM » |
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shukriya Naresh ji k aapko ye jawab pasand aaya......
bahut bahut shurkriya.........Kasak Ji ! |
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2010, 07:36:24 AM » |
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Dil ke samikaran hai
jazbaatoN se hal honge
MohabbatoN ke ganiit hai
AankhoN me sawal honge....
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2010, 07:39:21 AM » |
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aankhon k sawal sirf
aankhon se hal honge
jo dil k jazbaat hain
wo ehsaason se mukhar honge...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2010, 10:06:52 AM » |
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aankhon k sawal sirf
aankhon se hal honge
jo dil k jazbaat hain
wo ehsaason se mukhar honge...!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 24, 2010, 03:59:05 PM » |
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itna bhi asan na Hasti se guzar jana...!
Utra bhi samamdar main To Darya bhi buhat roya...!
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