keh chali kahaani..apni zubani phir se.. charan..

by lovely_charan on February 08, 2013, 03:35:01 PM
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mila kitab mein ek sookha hua gulab..
toh yaad aa gayi,baatein purani phir se..

pankhudi se uski bikharta ateet mila..
kehne chali main apni kahaani phir se..

kaise kahun woh makhmali si shaam thi..
us shaam mein barsa tha pani phir se..

subah thi kuch gulabi kuch pyari bhi thi..
parwaan kuch chadhi thi jawaani phir se..

mera dilbar.. thama gaya tha gulab ek..
dekha jo, toh beh gayi rawaani phir se..

jazbaat the purzor ya main hi betab thi..
keh chali kahaani..apni zubani phir se..

na ho manzoor toh chali jana mudhkar..
dekar woh chal diya apni nishani phir se..

nishani bhi paas hai.. dilbar bhi sath hai..
par aankhon mein aa gaya, pani phir se..
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2013, 03:50:50 PM »
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bahut bahut sunder dhero daad
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2013, 04:11:09 PM »
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jazbaat the purzor ya main hi betab thi..
keh chali kahaani..apni zubani phir se..

na ho manzoor toh chali jana mudhkar..
dekar woh chal diya apni nishani phir se..

nishani bhi paas hai.. dilbar bhi sath hai..
par aankhon mein aa gaya, pani phir se..

Wah..bahut khoob
ye ashaar to bahut hi ghazab ke hain
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2013, 05:02:40 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on February 08, 2013, 03:35:01 PM
mila kitab mein ek sookha hua gulab..
toh yaad aa gayi,baatein purani phir se..

pankhudi se uski bikharta ateet mila..
kehne chali main apni kahaani phir se..

kaise kahun woh makhmali si shaam thi..
us shaam mein barsa tha pani phir se..

subah thi kuch gulabi kuch pyari bhi thi..
parwaan kuch chadhi thi jawaani phir se..

mera dilbar.. thama gaya tha gulab ek..
dekha jo, toh beh gayi rawaani phir se..

jazbaat the purzor ya main hi betab thi..
keh chali kahaani..apni zubani phir se..

na ho manzoor toh chali jana mudhkar..
dekar woh chal diya apni nishani phir se..

nishani bhi paas hai.. dilbar bhi sath hai..
par aankhon mein aa gaya, pani phir se..
Dil ko bhai rachna tumhari phir
daad dena chahata hu tumme phir
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2013, 05:14:41 PM »
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bahut khooob..
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2013, 05:23:43 PM »
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thank you mukesh ji manoj ji and vimmi .. Usual Smile Usual Smile
thanks a lot Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2013, 05:31:51 PM »
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nice ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2013, 05:43:58 PM »
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thanks rajan ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2013, 05:53:25 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on February 08, 2013, 03:35:01 PM
mila kitab mein ek sookha hua gulab..
toh yaad aa gayi,baatein purani phir se..

pankhudi se uski bikharta ateet mila..
kehne chali main apni kahaani phir se..

kaise kahun woh makhmali si shaam thi..
us shaam mein barsa tha pani phir se..

subah thi kuch gulabi kuch pyari bhi thi..
parwaan kuch chadhi thi jawaani phir se..

mera dilbar.. thama gaya tha gulab ek..
dekha jo, toh beh gayi rawaani phir se..

jazbaat the purzor ya main hi betab thi..
keh chali kahaani..apni zubani phir se..

na ho manzoor toh chali jana mudhkar..
dekar woh chal diya apni nishani phir se..

nishani bhi paas hai.. dilbar bhi sath hai..
par aankhon mein aa gaya, pani phir se..
last ke 2 line to kamaal hain Usual Smile
iss kahani pe bht saari daad
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2013, 05:55:48 PM »
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Usual Smile bahut bahut shukriya aapka ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2013, 06:47:34 PM »
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Lovly Jee Aadaab... !


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... bade achche ashar kahe haiN
aaone.. waise toH sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Par hume khususan pahle do aur aakher ke do ashaar khoob lage
is khoob kalaam par dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2013, 06:51:05 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 08, 2013, 06:47:34 PM
Lovly Jee Aadaab... !


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... bade achche ashar kahe haiN
aaone.. waise toH sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Par hume khususan pahle do aur aakher ke do ashaar khoob lage
is khoob kalaam par dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 
thanks a lot sir Usual Smile Usual Smile
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waah waah waah bahut khoob
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thank you aqsh ji Usual Smile
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