keh na sake...

by mixie on November 22, 2013, 01:16:30 AM
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खुद से बस एक ही शिकायत है, हाल-ए-दिल केह न सके
पूछा तो सबने बहुत, बस लफ्ज़ ही निकल न सके
न जाने किसकी इनायत है ये, ज़िन्दगी एक ग़ज़ल बन गयी
काफियों को निभा भी दिया, बस गा कर सुना न सके

Khud se bas ek hi shikayat hai, haal-e-dil keh na sake

Poochha to sabne bahut, bas lafz hi nikal na sake

Na jaane kiski inaayat hai ye, zindagi ek ghazal ban gayi

Kaafiyon ko nibha bhi diya, bas gaa kar suna na sake
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2013, 02:13:57 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2013, 08:13:48 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2013, 01:34:35 PM »
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खुद से बस एक ही शिकायत है, हाल-ए-दिल केह न सके
पूछा तो सबने बहुत, बस लफ्ज़ ही निकल न सके
न जाने किसकी इनायत है ये, ज़िन्दगी एक ग़ज़ल बन गयी
काफियों को निभा भी दिया, बस गा कर सुना न सके

Khud se bas ek hi shikayat hai, haal-e-dil keh na sake

Poochha to sabne bahut, bas lafz hi nikal na sake

Na jaane kiski inaayat hai ye, zindagi ek ghazal ban gayi

Kaafiyon ko nibha bhi diya, bas gaa kar suna na sake

Applause ... buhat achha likha aap ne...
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2013, 02:37:51 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooooooooob....
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2013, 06:11:44 PM »
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Nice.. keep writing..
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2013, 07:48:09 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2013, 08:10:13 AM »
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न जाने किसकी इनायत है ये, ज़िन्दगी एक ग़ज़ल
बन गयी
काफियों को निभा भी दिया, बस गा कर सुना न
सक

Bahut khub !!
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