khaamosh ikraar -Panna 8:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #105 on: December 30, 2004, 06:47:21 AM »

Iam posting whole of my poem here as its complete now!Wud b easier 2 read it as a whole!Do make comments,i shall really b obliged.

I Know U Will B Standing There

Down d memory lane I luked
There I saw I had him always booked
Though I never was so sure
Thought some day his luv might turn sour
Coz deep down there,my heart I cudn’t cure

Cudn’t cure d broken pieces
Dat’s y now it always ceases
Ceases 2 grow fonder
& pleases my emotions not 2 surrender

D more it stops,d faster it beats
Carrying unconsciously on trembling feets
Dunno wat it wants,dunno goin where
Still deep down somewhere I know u’ll b standing there!

Down d memory lane I c
U were always my world’s key
Though I never was so sure
But I know its U whom it wants 2 lure

U gave my life a meaning…
A meaning ….dat I no longer stare
No longer at my life Istare
& no longer about d past I care

coz I got U & no more pain will now dare
Dare 2 touch my happiness I swear
Now on earth ,everything I can bear
coz I know u’ll always b standing there

Deep down d memory lane i luked,
Time told me'dis was d guy 2 whom u were 2 b hooked'
though it din't take yrs 4 my heart 2 realise
jus dat I was stunned 2 c such a beautiful sun-rise

mornings weren't meant 4 me
days jus flee not lettin even a blink
but as soon as i got him,time began 2 shrink
wishin 2 capture every moment ,nthn left now 2 think

deep down d memory lane i find
luck had never been so kind
jus in 2 months he got me blind
widout even havin met,now he’s always on my mind


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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #106 on: December 30, 2004, 08:14:09 AM »

wowwowo mansi...........excellent........ :lol:


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #107 on: December 30, 2004, 12:52:24 PM »

thanx 4 appreciatin Waheed!


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Snazzy

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #108 on: December 30, 2004, 01:06:48 PM »

wow,so beautiful it is!Great Mansi


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #109 on: December 30, 2004, 07:57:49 PM »

thanx Snazzy!


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lovebites

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #110 on: December 30, 2004, 08:01:45 PM »

Superb...........Mansi............2Gud........... ..........!


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #111 on: December 30, 2004, 08:07:36 PM »

thanx Lovebites!


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prannav

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #112 on: December 31, 2004, 03:47:47 PM »

wow wow wow ! Very nice creation ! :lol: tongue3


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #113 on: December 31, 2004, 04:34:38 PM »

oh thanx thanx thanx.......very flatterin!! lol


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Mansi_d_archi

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<<:|: All d while..... :|:>>

«Reply #114 on: January 14, 2005, 08:39:17 AM »

dis is my new poem...4got 2 put it as a new thread.Dis poem will have ev'thin dat went in my life....startin frm d beginnin.Do comment frns,dat way i'll get encouraged ! thanx.

All the while....

All d while I kept runnin behind d shadows
D shadows,which hovered my soul enterin life's windows
All d while i wished if i cud collect n throw out all d sorrows
but never cud find an envelope dat cud have 'em enclose


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #115 on: January 14, 2005, 02:18:54 PM »

All d while i was tortured by a dominating soul,
dominating soul which empowered my every desire,every goal
All d while wen i dreamt ,cudn't let my wishes roll,
Being hopeless I seized all hopes 2 have dreamy stroll.


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #116 on: January 15, 2005, 07:19:46 AM »

All d while in my heart
I had prayed 4 dis lovely start
All d while now I can't imagine to part
I need u 2 love me 4ever n teach me dis art


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #117 on: January 20, 2005, 12:10:53 PM »

All d while I saw u gettin wet in d rain
I felt so cold inside wen my heart overcame brain
There was a deep desire 2 love someone again
desire so strong which carried n buried enormous amount of pain.


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tanha dil tanha safar

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #118 on: January 20, 2005, 12:29:19 PM »

too great mansi ji!!!!!


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Mansi_d_archi

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khaamosh ikraar

«Reply #119 on: January 20, 2005, 12:36:06 PM »

thanx T anha, n no 'ji' 4 me plz.

All d while u were there in front of my eyes
It was only a dream,i came 2 know after d sun-rise
How on earth in so many y ears no1 heard of my cries
still it doesn't matter as I got d one 4 whom dis heart sighs!


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