Khaas hai..

by brokenbyluv on February 17, 2010, 09:05:49 PM
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«Reply #75 on: April 09, 2010, 04:39:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob Geet ji aur Mann ji... bahut khoobsurat sama bana rakha hai aap dono ne...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Behad Shukriya Kapil Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #76 on: April 09, 2010, 04:55:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mann ji..aur bahut khoob likha hai apne...


Terri chaht pe mujhe hamesha se aetbaar tha,
mujhe pata hai tu sirrf merra hi talabgar tha,
kuch zalimo ne hamare ishq ko khel samjha..
lekin hum dono k dilo mein tou bepanah pyar tha......

Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Aapka Koi Jawab nahi.. Behad Khubsoorati se lafzon Ko Piroti hain aap.. Applause


Hum To Aaj Bhi Teri Ek Yaad Pe Dam Tod Dete Hain,
Apni Dharkano Ko, Teri Saanson Se Jod Dete Hain....

Aetbaar Itna Hai Humen, Teri Chaahat Par E-Sanam,
Har Mehfil Me Tera Naam Apne Naam Se Jod Lete Hain...!!





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«Reply #77 on: April 09, 2010, 05:01:34 AM »
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Wah wah great lines Mann ji and Geet ji,bahut hi khoobsurti se likha aap dono ne.aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Har mahefil mein apne naam tere naam se jodd lete hai.bahut pasand aayi ye line.
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«Reply #78 on: April 10, 2010, 06:47:52 AM »
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Madhu Ji Aapka Behad Shukriya.. Ki Aapko Mera Likha Itna pasand aaya...  notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #79 on: April 10, 2010, 04:54:51 PM »
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Wah wah great lines Mann ji and Geet ji,bahut hi khoobsurti se likha aap dono ne.aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Har mahefil mein apne naam tere naam se jodd lete hai.bahut pasand aayi ye line.

shukriya madhu ji..aur yakinan ye line bahut hi khubsurat hai mujhe bhi bahut pasand aayi...bahut khoob mann ji...
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«Reply #80 on: April 10, 2010, 05:02:10 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Aapka Koi Jawab nahi.. Behad Khubsoorati se lafzon Ko Piroti hain aap.. Applause


Hum To Aaj Bhi Teri Ek Yaad Pe Dam Tod Dete Hain,
Apni Dharkano Ko, Teri Saanson Se Jod Dete Hain....

Aetbaar Itna Hai Humen, Teri Chaahat Par E-Sanam,
Har Mehfil Me Tera Naam Apne Naam Se Jod Lete Hain...!!





**~** Mann **~**


Arre waah ji waah mujhe kehte ho ki main lafzo ko khubsurati se piroti hu aur aap khud jo itna chaht bhara likhte hai uska kya...bahut khoob mann ji...bahut khoob...



Bhari mehfil mein jo tune merra naam liya,
merri chaht ko benakab sar-e-aam kar diya,
kasam khayi thi hamesha chup rehene ki maine..
terri is sadgi ne mujhe terra ghulaam kar diya......
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«Reply #81 on: May 01, 2010, 09:00:08 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aur Bahut Khoooooooob Geet Ji.. Beintehaan Khubsoorat Jawab diya Hai aapne.. Bahut Pyaara.. Applause Applause



Teri Khaamoshi Ne Is Mehfil Me Wo Kamaal Kar Diya,
Mujhe Ranjha Tujhe Heer Naam Se Badnaam Kar Diya....

Kuch Is Saadgi Se Liya Mera Naam Tune Is Mehfil Me,
Charcha-e-Ishq Behad Sanjeedgi Se Sar-e-Aam Kar Diya...!!




**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #82 on: May 05, 2010, 12:50:48 PM »
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Hmmmmmm shukriya ji..khuda ki meher hui ki aap aaye tou sahi...


Ab har nagma apna sar-e-aam hoga,
merre labo pe sirrf terra hi naam hoga,
har pehelu ab bitega terre saaye mein..
aur apni mhbt ka gawah ye asmaan hoga......
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«Reply #83 on: May 13, 2010, 03:18:32 PM »
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Aji Hum to aapki Qalam Ke Deewaane hain.. Kahan rok pate hain khud ko.. isliye Der se hi sahi par chale aate hain.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Beintehaan Khubsoorat Alfaaz Likhe hain aapne.. Dil tak utar gaye yeh lafz.. Applause Applause



Mat Pooch Ke Main Kya Chaahta Hoon Teri Mohabbat Me,
Khud Fanaa Hoke Tera Hona Chaahta Hoon Mohabbat Me.....

Kabhi Aankhon Se Qatl Hoke Teri, Kabhi Zulfon Ki Qaid Me,
Lipat Kuch Der Tujhse, Sona Chaahta Hoon Teri Mohabbat Me.....!!!





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«Reply #84 on: May 15, 2010, 03:09:58 PM »
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ohh shukriya ji aur apne bhi bahut hi khumar se bhare alfaz likhe hai bahut badhiiya...


Bicha k apni palko ka shamiyana,
aa main tujhe kuch pal udhar du,
apni chahto ki zanjiro mein kar k tujhe qaid..
aa main terra jivan sanwaar du......
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«Reply #85 on: May 17, 2010, 06:46:17 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Geet ji.. Bahut Pyaar Bhare Alfaaazon ko Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Bahut khooooob.. Applause Applause



Teri Palkon Pe Ek Din Apna Naam Likh Jaunga,
Labon Ko Tere Lab Se Mere Tamaam Kar Jaunga...

Mera Jism Mera Dil, Bas Tera Hi Talabgaar Hai,
Choone De Mujhe Tujhko, Warna Main Mar Jaunga....!!!





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«Reply #86 on: May 17, 2010, 07:39:02 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Mann ji ,Geet ji,fantastic lines.keep writting. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #87 on: May 20, 2010, 01:31:56 PM »
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shukriya madhu ji..
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«Reply #88 on: May 20, 2010, 01:38:52 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Geet ji.. Bahut Pyaar Bhare Alfaaazon ko Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Bahut khooooob.. Applause Applause



Teri Palkon Pe Ek Din Apna Naam Likh Jaunga,
Labon Ko Tere Lab Se Mere Tamaam Kar Jaunga...

Mera Jism Mera Dil, Bas Tera Hi Talabgaar Hai,
Choone De Mujhe Tujhko, Warna Main Mar Jaunga....!!!





**~** Mann **~**


shukriya mann ji...


Aaj bhi terre labo ka ehsas hai merre cheher per,
jis chaht se tune kaha tha mhbt k us paigaam ko,
terri har chhuan ko mehfuz rakha hai maine apne jism per..
jis tadap se tu lipta tha mujhse us shaam ko,......
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«Reply #89 on: June 20, 2010, 04:29:46 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Mann ji ,Geet ji,fantastic lines.keep writting. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Behad Shukriya Madhu Ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile



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