KHATA UNKI NAHI...........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on November 21, 2008, 02:49:02 PM
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Khata unki nahi yaro
Apni karni ka hi rona hai
Main kankar hu us dar-e-jana ka
Jo sar se paav tak sona hai

Shikwa nahi hai unse koi
Apne gunaho ka bhoj humko dhona hai
Main parwana hu shama pe mar mita
Ek na ek din to khaak hona hai

Usme koi aib nahi who insan hain farishto jaisa
Uske noor se roshan zamin ka har kona hain
Jis jagah kabhi pukara tha unhone nam mera
GHAYEL ko usi jagah dafan_e hona hai

                 -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2008, 03:08:17 PM »
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wow! mr sajid ghayal (sarkar) (haha) bahot hee khioobsurat lihka hai aapne!
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2008, 03:29:22 PM »
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BOHAT SHUKRIYAA ANJAAN
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2008, 06:04:11 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai, ek ek line khumar se bharpoor... bahoot khoob SG
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2008, 08:32:59 AM »
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Thanks Pooja itne kam reply dekh kar maine socha shayed kuch kami reh gayee hain chalo anjaan aur aapne saraha meri koshish zaya nahi gayee "something is better than nothing".
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2009, 06:17:22 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2009, 11:01:30 PM »
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khata unki nhi yaaro
apni karni ka hi rona hai
mai kankar hun us dar e jana ka
jo sar se paav tak sona hai

bhut khoob sajid sahab.............

kankar na samjh khud ko to acha hoga
jo tujhko chahega wo dil ka sacha hoga
tujh jaise kahan milte hain dewane "ghayal"
wo husn e jana hoga jo tujhpe marta hoga
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2009, 11:29:00 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2009, 01:32:52 PM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on February 14, 2009, 06:17:22 PM
nice


Thanks....

Quote from: aaina on February 14, 2009, 11:01:30 PM
khata unki nhi yaaro
apni karni ka hi rona hai
mai kankar hun us dar e jana ka
jo sar se paav tak sona hai

bhut khoob sajid sahab.............

kankar na samjh khud ko to acha hoga
jo tujhko chahega wo dil ka sacha hoga
tujh jaise kahan milte hain dewane "ghayal"
wo husn e jana hoga jo tujhpe marta hoga


Bohat shukriyaan Aslam izzat ke liye aur bohat khoobsurat likha hai tumne bhi  Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 14, 2009, 11:29:00 PM
Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji


Shukriyaa Dost.....
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2009, 04:57:30 AM »
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Wah wah Kya baat hai Sajid Ji. bahoot khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2009, 05:04:15 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Ghayel jee
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