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manzil-e-ishq
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mehki mehki sham ke khatir
wo aaye bas kaam ke khatir
jab se humne kahna choda
jud gaye humse baat ke khatir
ek ashq ki kayi kahani
ye kahani aap ke khatir
kab tak khud ko bahlaye rakhte
dil ko toda.. aap ke khatir
jab se judi hai 'manzil' thujse
tooti hai wo pyar ke khatir..
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2010, 06:39:13 AM » |
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Good one
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2010, 06:41:17 AM » |
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thanks rajesh ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2010, 06:45:34 AM » |
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bahut Khubsurat likha Manzil ji.
bhot khubb..
aapko miss kiya mene Priya ji
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2010, 06:52:16 AM » |
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thats so nice of u kb ji... i also miss yoindia alot.... kya kare kuch kaam me phas gayi thi.. & a big thanx for liking my effort.... bahut Khubsurat likha Manzil ji.
bhot khubb..
aapko miss kiya mene Priya ji
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saahill
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2010, 06:53:00 AM » |
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nice lines
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2010, 06:54:39 AM » |
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thanx alot saahill ji.... nice lines
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2010, 07:24:32 AM » |
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dosto ko thanx nahi bola jata kb ji... or hum yaha ek dusre ka hausla badhane hi to aate hai na... priya ji aapko thanx bolna tha--- aapne mera bahut hausala badhaya tha..   |
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2010, 07:30:35 AM » |
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barh jaata hai hausla kisi lakhshya ko paane se
ho sath agar doston ka larh jaaye sarey zamaane se
aa jaye surron jab chalak jaye maih yaaro paaimaane se
jab se mila hai sangh apka torh liya naata maihkhaane se
jab dosti ka sath ho our ankhn miley anjaane se
banta hai rishta gehra dosti ko dil se nibhaane se
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2010, 07:39:06 AM » |
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thanx jab dil se bola jaye to bolne or sunnewale ko achha lagta hai yar.
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2010, 07:45:50 AM » |
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oops... ab mujhey kya pata tha ki aap dil se thanx bol rahe ho.... aapka dil itna dheere bolta hai main kya karu thanx jab dil se bola jaye to bolne or sunnewale ko achha lagta hai yar.
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2010, 08:12:30 AM » |
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hahaha---
manzil ji wo gaana to suna hoga aapne
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dheere dheere bol koi sunn na le
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issliye dil bechaa affected ho gaya uss gaane se
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2010, 08:27:32 AM » |
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jyada gaane mat suna keejiye kb ji... it can affect ur heart... as u see.. hahaha---
manzil ji wo gaana to suna hoga aapne
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dheere dheere bol koi sunn na le
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issliye dil bechaa affected ho gaya uss gaane se
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2010, 09:01:52 AM » |
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mai to sufi sunta hu aur wo affect nhi krta na
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on eTI community..
