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meri adhkuli palko pe apne soye khawab jagane aa….
Chal chod ye khayali baate…. Kabhi yun hi mujhse milne aa…
Har baat me mujhse khafa rahta hai kyu jaan-e-wafa…
Tu chod bhi de duniyadari… kabhi dil se dil milane aa…
Hain umr bahut choti.. tere bin hi na guzar jaye kahi…
Hijr ke lamho ko kabhi… khaak me milane aa…..
Be-noor si laage hai…. zindagi thujh bin sanam…
Zindagi ko kabhi…..naye armano se sajane aa…..
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 11:13:02 AM » |
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pata nahi kise bula rahi ho-- lekin mai hi aa gaya  kya khub likha re-- adkhuli palkon par soye khab jagane aa-- mast hai-- bahut bht mast. maza aya *** kuch palon ki khamoshi hai--- baad chuppi tod jaunga jara sa dil ko aur sambhal--- bahut jald milne aunga :)haha *** khus rahiye ji sukriya |
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 11:38:53 AM » |
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hmmm.........
kya baat he priya......badi mast wali poetry ki he .......
shikayat bhi he .........romance bhi he...majburi bhi he.........
sach bahot hi cute post he........
well few line from my side........Kisi Roz Kisi Bahane Aja
Kab Se Rutha Hu Ab To Manane Aja
Na Aye Hotho Pe Hasi To Na Sahi
Kuch Ashk Mere Sath Bahane Aja
Ab Jaam Bhi Hone Lage he Mujpe Beasar
Sanam Tu Apni Najro Se Pilane Aja
Kab Se Bahe Fealye Khada Hu Raho Me
Na Lagana Bhale Gale Se, Tu Bas Chehra Hi Dikhane Aja
Tune Wafa Ki Ya He Tu Bewafa Ye Tu Hi Jane
Kambhakt Is Diwane Ki Mohhabat Aajmane Aja
Bade Hosle Se Utha Hu Me Har Baar Girkar
Fir Kisi Thokar Se Muje aaj Girane Aja
Tuj Sa Humsafar Mere Nasib Me Nahi Shayad
Kuch Der Hi Sahi Dil Ko Bahlane Aja
Tadap Raha Hu Sanam Ke Yaad Me Kab Se
Ee Kuhda Ab Tu Hi Muje Khud Me Samane Aja
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2011, 11:46:08 AM » |
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wowwwwwwwwww..... mg...
aapke reply ke aage meri poetry to feeki pad gyai.....
kya kahu.... tarif ke liye shabd hi nahi mil rahe.....
aap khud hi samajh jao....
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 11:47:47 AM » |
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thank u sooo.... much kb....
bht acchi lines likhi hai....
bada accha likhne lage ho aajkal....
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 11:48:57 AM » |
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zarra afjai ka bht bht shukria parwaaz ji.....
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2011, 11:50:08 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2011, 11:58:46 AM » |
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mg.....
naya thread bana ke ise post kar do....
sach me bht accha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2011, 12:06:55 PM » |
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maine nahi padhi thi na isiliye......
but sach me it's a mindblowing creation.....
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2011, 12:07:58 PM » |
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mast reply Matrix ji.
lajawaab.
aur priya ji---mene to aapse hi seekha hai likhna.
yaad kariye aapka ek post jiska naam tha--Dhoondti hun
shayd. bas wahi se to seekha mene
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2011, 12:28:08 PM » |
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meri adhkuli palko pe apne soye khawab jagane aa….
Chal chod ye khayali baate…. Kabhi yun hi mujhse milne aa…
Har baat me mujhse khafa rahta hai kyu jaan-e-wafa…
Tu chod bhi de duniyadari… kabhi dil se dil milane aa…
Hain umr bahut choti.. tere bin hi na guzar jaye kahi…
Hijr ke lamho ko kabhi… khaak me milane aa…..
Be-noor si laage hai…. zindagi thujh bin sanam…
Zindagi ko kabhi…..naye armano se sajane aa…..
bahut khoob manzil ji |
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2011, 12:55:50 PM » |
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Bahaut bahaut khoob.. Utkarsh jee aur Priya jee..  Dono ko dil se daad.. Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2011, 04:22:28 PM » |
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[/quote] meri adhkuli palko pe apne soye khawab jagane aa….
Chal chod ye khayali baate…. Kabhi yun hi mujhse milne aa…
Har baat me mujhse khafa rahta hai kyu jaan-e-wafa…
Tu chod bhi de duniyadari… kabhi dil se dil milane aa…
Hain umr bahut choti.. tere bin hi na guzar jaye kahi…
Hijr ke lamho ko kabhi… khaak me milane aa…..
Be-noor si laage hai…. zindagi thujh bin sanam…
Zindagi ko kabhi…..naye armano se sajane aa…..
Very Romantic ... Very touching ..... Priye Ji ! dil se daad ! |
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