KhayaloN meN Bhi tum mere ab na aao......................................................By "Aarish"

by Aarish on March 02, 2013, 06:08:43 PM
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Na tum mujhse aise ye daman churhaao,

Khata ho gayee jo mujhe wo bataao,



Agar ye khata hai k chaha hai tumko,

Chalo phir khata ki saza bhi sunaao,


Kabhi sun sako to mere dil ki sunlo,

Kabhi dastaan-e-gham-e-dil sunaao,


Nahi Koi mushkil meri jaan ismeN,

zara khul ke bolo, zara muskuraao,


Meri Jaan le logi ye jaan lo tum,

JabeeN pe na aise ye zulfeN giraao,


Agar be wafai hi karni hai "Aarish,

KhayaloN meN Bhi tum mere ab na aao,




            "Aarish"
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2013, 06:20:01 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2013, 06:42:20 PM »
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waah bohat khoob,..........bohat c daad,........
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2013, 06:49:21 PM »
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wah wah bahut khoob jee Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2013, 06:51:15 PM »
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bahut bahut khub Aarish ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2013, 07:06:53 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh ghazal aarish ji. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2013, 07:51:56 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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BAHUT  KHOOB , AARISH . BAHUT  PYARI  GHAZAL  KAHI  HAI .
KHAAS TAUR  SE  TEESRA  AUR  CHAUTHA  SHER  MUJHE BAHUT
PASAND   AAYA . DHERON  DAAD  .  JEETE   RAHYE  . YUNHI  
LIKHTE  RAHYE . DUAAEIN , HASAN
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2013, 08:51:28 PM »
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Nice!!!

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waaaaaaaaaah 4th sher khaas raha Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2013, 10:59:19 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on March 02, 2013, 06:08:43 PM
Na tum mujhse aise ye daman churhaao,

Khata ho gayee jo mujhe wo bataao,



Agar ye khata hai k chaha hai tumko,

Chalo phir khata ki saza bhi sunaao,


Kabhi sun sako to mere dil ki sunlo,

Kabhi dastaan-e-gham-e-dil sunaao,


Nahi Koi mushkil meri jaan ismeN,

zara khul ke bolo, zara muskuraao,


Meri Jaan le logi ye jaan lo tum,

JabeeN pe na aise ye zulfeN giraao,


Agar be wafai hi karni hai "Aarish,

KhayaloN meN Bhi tum mere ab na aao,




            "Aarish"

Bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash Aarish bhai
bahut bahut mubarakbaad
aap jab bhi likhte hai dil khol kar likhte hai..
Manch par..aur iske saamne..dono fanon me aap maahir hai.
pahle 4 sher..ghazab ke rahe
aur 4th sher ka dusra misra..
badee masoomiyat se ada kiya hai aapne.
khush rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2013, 11:02:48 PM »
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bohot khoob Applause Clapping Smiley

likhte rahe
dheeeroon daad
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2013, 11:30:18 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on March 02, 2013, 06:08:43 PM
Na tum mujhse aise ye daman churhaao,

Khata ho gayee jo mujhe wo bataao,



Agar ye khata hai k chaha hai tumko,

Chalo phir khata ki saza bhi sunaao,


Kabhi sun sako to mere dil ki sunlo,

Kabhi dastaan-e-gham-e-dil sunaao,


Nahi Koi mushkil meri jaan ismeN,

zara khul ke bolo, zara muskuraao,


Meri Jaan le logi ye jaan lo tum,

JabeeN pe na aise ye zulfeN giraao,


Agar be wafai hi karni hai "Aarish,

KhayaloN meN Bhi tum mere ab na aao,




            "Aarish"


nice composition,sir
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2013, 02:50:37 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on March 02, 2013, 06:08:43 PM
Na tum mujhse aise ye daman churhaao,

Khata ho gayee jo mujhe wo bataao,



Agar ye khata hai k chaha hai tumko,

Chalo phir khata ki saza bhi sunaao,


Kabhi sun sako to mere dil ki sunlo,

Kabhi dastaan-e-gham-e-dil sunaao,


Nahi Koi mushkil meri jaan ismeN,

zara khul ke bolo, zara muskuraao,


Meri Jaan le logi ye jaan lo tum,

JabeeN pe na aise ye zulfeN giraao,


Agar be wafai hi karni hai "Aarish,

KhayaloN meN Bhi tum mere ab na aao,




            "Aarish"



Bahut Bahut Khooob Aarish Ji

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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 02, 2013, 06:20:01 PM
waah waah bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai dheron daad
shukriya sir, daad ke liye aur aapke beshqeemti suggestion ke liye
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Quote from: laaiba on March 02, 2013, 06:42:20 PM
waah bohat khoob,..........bohat c daad,........

shukriya laaiba jee
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