khiyaalo ki pari thi,,,,,,,,jeet jainam

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phoolo ki jaan khooshbo se bhari thi,
amber se aayi mere khiyaalo ki pari thi,

dekhte hi usko nazare tiki rahi uspar,
aaker jo woh mare samne khadi thi,

tham lo hath mera manate rahe usey,
woh thori see nadaan,thori zidd se bhari thi,

kardiya izhaar humne pyaar ka usko,
woh thori see heraan,thori soch main padi thi,

bhada diya kadam hamne uski or is kader,
woh pehle ghabrai fir,thori aage bhadi thi,

kiya bataye [jeet],uski mohhobat ka,
izhaar e ishq ki anguthi,mare hath main jadi thi,

               jj saini
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Bahut umda,,,,dheron daad qabool karein Jeet Jee.
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 05, 2014, 03:15:24 AM


jeet jainam Saini saheb,
                      bahut umda kalaam kaha hai, wah waaaaaaaaaaaah


phoolo ki jaan khooshbo se bhari thi,
amber se aayi mere khiyaalo ki pari thi,

dekhte hi usko nazare tiki rahi uspar,
aaker jo woh mare samne khadi thi,

tham lo hath mera manate rahe usey,
woh thori see nadaan,thori zidd se bhari thi,

kardiya izhaar humne pyaar ka usko,
woh thori see heraan,thori soch main padi thi,

bhada diya kadam hamne uski or is kader,
woh pehle ghabrai fir,thori aage bhadi thi,

kiya bataye [jeet],uski mohhobat ka,
izhaar e ishq ki anguthi,mare hath main jadi thi,

               jj saini
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