-----/// Khoobsurat saa pal dekhaa ///----- Hriday

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khoobsurat  saa maine pal dekhaa
khwaab haseen maine  kal dekhaa

kal  titliyon pe  bhi  rang  chadhaa
parindon  ko  karte chahal dekhaa

kal bantaa huwaa mohabbat mein
maine  apnaa  hi taj mahal dekhaa

main  chhoo  lene ko daudaa thaa
jab  udtaa  huwaa aanchal dekhaa

ab bheeg  jaaun  bas baarish mein
maine  ambar  mein baadal dekhaa

un  rang  bhari  teri  aankhon mein
maine  aankhon  kaa kaajal dekhaa

bheege  huwe  se   lab  tere,  jaise
paani  mein   khilaa   kamal dekhaa

kaagaz  kalam  liye   baithun  agar
kuch  bante  nahi   aaj  kal dekhaa

par  jahaan bhi teraa  naam aayaa
to bante  haasil -e- ghazal dekhaa


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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2013, 02:50:37 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 16, 2013, 01:57:10 AM


khoobsurat  saa maine pal dekhaa
khwaab haseen maine  kal dekhaa
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kal  titliyon pe  bhi  rang  chadhaa
parindon  ko  karte chahal dekhaa
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kal bantaa huwaa mohabbat mein
maine  apnaa  hi taj mahal dekhaa
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
waise TAJMAHALek MAQBARA HAI yaani mohabbat pe marne ko tayaar ho
main  chhoo  lene ko daudaa thaa
jab  udtaa  huwaa aanchal dekhaa
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))bachpana nahin gaya
ab bheeg  jaaun  bas baarish mein
maine  ambar  mein baadal dekhaa
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
un  rang  bhari  teri  aankhon mein
maine  aankhon  kaa kaajal dekhaa
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bheege  huwe  se   lab  tere,  jaise
paani  mein   khilaa   kamal dekhaa
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kaagaz  kalam  liye   baithun  agar
kuch  bante  nahi   aaj  kal dekhaa
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par  jahaan bhi teraa  naam aayaa
to bante  haasil -e- ghazal dekhaa
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what a change in your composition hriday now a days .amazing just miracle..!

main to dar gayi ab mujhe kaun padhe ga..............! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2013, 03:03:55 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2013, 03:09:39 AM »
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Thank u so much Sheba ji for such beautiful comments...!!!

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what a change in your composition hriday now a days .amazing just miracle..!

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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2013, 03:11:39 AM »
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thank u , thank u hai ji Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2013, 07:53:15 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2013, 12:48:15 PM »
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thank you sooo much Bhupinder ji....!!!

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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2013, 12:48:49 PM »
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thank you sooo much Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2013, 01:05:09 PM »
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Waaaaaah hriday ji.. khoobsurat sa ehsaas raha aapke is ghazal mein.. behad khoob.. bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh peshkash.. dil se daaad qubool kijiye..

kal bantaa huwaa mohabbat mein
maine  apnaa  hi taj mahal dekhaa

bheege  huwe  se   lab  tere,  jaise
paani  mein   khilaa   kamal dekhaa

par  jahaan bhi teraa  naam aayaa
to bante  haasil -e- ghazal dekhaa
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2013, 01:26:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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Waaaaaah hriday ji.. khoobsurat sa ehsaas raha aapke is ghazal mein.. behad khoob.. bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh peshkash.. dil se daaad qubool kijiye..

kal bantaa huwaa mohabbat mein
maine  apnaa  hi taj mahal dekhaa

bheege  huwe  se   lab  tere,  jaise
paani  mein   khilaa   kamal dekhaa

par  jahaan bhi teraa  naam aayaa
to bante  haasil -e- ghazal dekhaa
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2013, 01:51:13 PM »
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Bahut Khub Hriday Ji


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shihab ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2013, 02:12:25 PM »
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