KHUD KO PAA LIYA MAINE........

by ranjana on May 04, 2006, 02:38:28 AM
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kal raat jaise khud ko paa liya maine........
jab khud ko tere daman se lipta liya maine........
dilo ka dharkana, saanso ka chalna.........
pehli baar mehsus kiya maine........
jaise ek bharpur zindgi ko jee liya maine...........

ek sunahre khawab ki treah tu mujh main samaya raha..........
khud ko dharti, aur tujko akash maan liya maine...........
tere matthe, teri ankho ko chuma kuch is treah ......
tu ek sapna sa tha par sach maan liya maine.........

kal raat khud ko paa liya maine......
jab khud ko tere daman se lipta liya maine...........
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2006, 02:49:06 AM »
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Wah ji Bhut Khoob.... Kya Lines likhi hain ....too Gud ranjana ji ....


Teri Yadon ki mehek se khilli hai har raat meri
Chand ki ho Jaise koi Chandani

Har Pal tera hi deedar maange yeh dil
tere bin Abb ban chuki hain,meri zindagi adhuri ...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2006, 02:55:11 AM »
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Wah ji Bhut Khoob.... Kya Lines likhi hain ....too Gud ranjana ji ....


Teri Yadon ki mehek se khilli hai har raat meri
Chand ki ho Jaise koi Chandani

Har Pal tera hi deedar maange yeh dil
tere bin Abb ban chuki hain,meri zindagi adhuri ...!!!


shukriya desiires ji.........

kam toh aap bhi nahi hai ji ........in kuch lines main hi aap bhi bahut khub kah gaye..........

unki yaado ko seene se laga rakha hai....
apne har dard ko aankho mein chipa rakha hai..
  unka deedar karne ko tarsata hai mera bhi dil........
per unhone kisi aur ke dil ko apna thikana bana rakha hai............

thanks........

ranju
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2006, 03:04:50 AM »
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Sukriya ji 4 appreciating.....

Yaadein Aseem hain Pyaar ki teri
Mitt jayeingi yeh,Jab rukhegi dhadkan meri

Tere naino mein chahe Tasveer ho kisse aur ki
Lekin  Duniya toh jurdi hai Sirf Tujhse hi meri...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2006, 03:19:35 AM »
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Sukriya ji 4 appreciating.....

Yaadein Aseem hain Pyaar ki teri
Mitt jayeingi yeh,Jab rukhegi dhadkan meri

Tere naino mein chahe Tasveer ho kisse aur ki
Lekin  Duniya toh jurdi hai Sirf Tujhse hi meri...!!!


bahut khub .......beautiful.............

dekh ke tera itna pyar .......
mujhe khud pe  gumaan ho aaya hai....
meri dil ki dharakano ne bhi bas  
tera hi naam ka geet gaya hai.............
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2006, 03:28:08 AM »
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wah Ranju ji... bhut achha likha aapne...

Teri Juban Par abb Geet Mera Gungaane lagga hai
E-sanam Tu meri Har Dhadkan mein samaane lagga hai
Madhosh karde mujhe Apni Akhon se peela kar
IS IshQ Khumari ka Nasha JEET par chaa ne lagga hai ...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2006, 04:04:45 AM »
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wah Ranju ji... bhut achha likha aapne...

Teri Juban Par abb Geet Mera Gungaane lagga hai
E-sanam Tu meri Har Dhadkan mein samaane lagga hai
Madhosh karde mujhe Apni Akhon se peela kar
IS IshQ Khumari ka Nasha JEET par chaa ne lagga hai ...!!!

wow ! great......sundar...

tere dil ka har kona ab mera ran basara ho
tere dil ki har dharkan mein ab bas naam mera ho.
raho meri baaho ki paridhi mein aur tut kar mujhko pyar karo.......
apne pyar se tum priytam aaj mera singaar karo.............
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2006, 05:05:49 AM »
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bahut khoob Nice and great starting Ranju and Jeet bahi aapki kata kahen bahut khoob...........
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2006, 05:57:16 AM »
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thanks Vikas .......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2006, 07:26:23 AM »
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paa kar tumko
jaane kaya hua jata hai
dil ruk ruk kar dhadkta hai
labo pe muskan
aankho mai aansu chalak aata hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2006, 08:25:25 AM »
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phoolo ke is angan mein.....
ek tum ho .ek main hun.
aur pyar ka ek pyala....
tere askho ko lo hamne.....
aaj apne adharo se pee dala..........
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2006, 09:15:27 AM »
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nice ranju.....

tere aankho mai jhalkte hai aansu
wo tere payar ki rawani hai
dil mai jo teri dhadkan hai
wo mere payar ki nishani hai......
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2006, 09:35:49 AM »
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nice ranju.....

tere aankho mai jhalkte hai aansu
wo tere payar ki rawani hai
dil mai jo teri dhadkan hai
wo mere payar ki nishani hai......


bahut khub vikas ji.........

tere likhe in shabado ka jaadu mujh pe chalne laga....
sujarj jaise pighala aur taaron mein dhalne laga......
mere undar ka sanataa jaag ke aankhe  malne laga.........
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2006, 09:56:37 AM »
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Thanks Vikas Bhai .. Appne bhi bhut Accha likha...

Aur Ranjana ji .. App toh bhut jabardast likhte ho... :wink:
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2006, 02:08:18 PM »
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shukriya disiires ji ........aapko meri chotti si koshish pasand aayi ....

itne pyar se padne ke liye shukriya
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