khud mai sama lai mujhko:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

aaina

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qateel shifaai sahab ki ek ghazal ka ek misra lai kar kuch kehne ki koshish ki hai umeed karta hun ki aap logo.n ke mayaar par utregi.

ye gard e safar kahin khud mai na sama lai mujhko
mein hun tera tu naseeb apna bana lai mujhko

meri qasmo ko na sar e raah tu ruswa ka raise
tujhse phir mil sakun itna hi ganwalai mujhko

mein to aag, paani aur mitti ka hu.n
kitna aasan hu.n khud jaisa bana lai mujhko

ab ye dooriyaa.n nhi sahi jaati mujhse
kuch jatan kar ke paas apne bulalai mujhko


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javedarshad

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 12:42:35 AM »

kawish achchi hai.

gard ya khakaikhicheezkolikha ja sakta hai

javed


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madhuwesh

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 01:46:04 AM »

Excellent,very nice and beautiful creation Aaina ji. Clapping Smiley


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Roja

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2009, 02:19:46 AM »

Quote from: aaina on June 03, 2009, 12:35:41 AM

qateel shifaai sahab ki ek ghazal ka ek misra lai kar kuch kehne ki koshish ki hai umeed karta hun ki aap logo.n ke mayaar par utregi.

ye gard e khaak kahin khud mai na sama lai mujhko
mein hun tera tu naseeb apna bana lai mujhko

meri qasmo ko na sar e raah tu ruswa ka raise
tujhse phir mil sakun itna hi ganwalai mujhko

mein to aag, paani aur mitti ka hu.n
kitna aasan hu.n khud jaisa bana lai mujhko

ab ye dooriyaa.n nhi sahi jaati mujhse
kuch jatan kar ke paas apne bulalai mujhko

Wonderful...
Superb creation dear Aslam.... Bahut accha likha hai aapne.
Daad hazir hai ji


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sanjaytiwari

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2009, 02:52:39 PM »

Bahoot Khoob Aslam. Great Style.


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poppoetry

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2009, 11:50:30 AM »

bahut bahut khoob aaina ji Applause


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Talat

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2009, 09:15:18 PM »

Har ghazal ki tarah, ye ghazal bhi aapki behad achchi lagi...!

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji


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aaina

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 12:10:51 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on June 03, 2009, 12:42:35 AM

kawish achchi hai.

gard ya khakaikhicheezkolikha ja sakta hai

javed

salam javed sahab thnxxxxx for ur suggetion, shayad mera mafhoom kuch aur tha baharhaal aapne sahi kha to usko durust karne ki koshish ki hai.....you.n hi guide karte rahain, nawaazish


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aaina

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 07:26:06 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 03, 2009, 01:46:04 AM

Excellent,very nice and beautiful creation Aaina ji. Clapping Smiley

thnxxxx so much madhu ji


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aaina

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Re: khud mai sama lai mujhko

«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 07:45:36 AM »

Quote from: Roja on June 03, 2009, 02:19:46 AM

Wonderful...
Superb creation dear Aslam.... Bahut accha likha hai aapne.
Daad hazir hai ji

bhut bhut skhukriya roja


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