khuda se thodi kam

by redwhitegang on June 27, 2006, 07:16:25 AM
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Chahte hein tujhe sab se jada bas khuda se thodi kam
Kya kahe k ham tujh par kitne martein hein sanam
Tujhe pana hein jindagii mein sehna pade jitne bhi gam
Tujhe paane ki liye manzoor hein mujhe har sitam
Aab mere rom rom se bas yahi awaz aati hein
Ke teri har rog ka bas yahi  ek hein marham!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2006, 07:22:18 AM »
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behtreen post RWG ji ...

chahte hain tujhe khud se jayada
mere  toh khuda bhi ho tum

lagga hai IshQ ka tujhse aisa rog
jiski dard-0-dawa ho sirf tum

nahi sahi jaati ek pal bhi doori
kaise  jeeyien tumhare bina abb hum

har saans ke sath  tera naam nikale
meri har dhadkan mein shamil ho tum...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2006, 07:32:20 AM »
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behtreen post RWG ji ...

chahte hain tujhe khud se jayada
mere  toh khuda bhi ho tum

lagga hai IshQ ka tujhse aisa rog
jiski dard-0-dawa ho sirf tum

nahi sahi jaati ek pal bhi doori
kaise  jeeyien tumhare bina abb hum

har saans ke sath  tera naam nikale
meri har dhadkan mein shamil ho tum...!!!

Bohot khub BD ji! kya khub likha hein aap ne bhi :D
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2006, 07:39:51 AM »
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Bohot khub BD ji! kya khub likha hein aap ne bhi :D


sukriya dost.. u can call me JEET :wink:
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2006, 08:03:55 AM »
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Bohot shukriya jeet ji! aur aap mujhe shahid bulka sakte hein :D
hamarii mulakat aapko aur mujhe dono ko mubarak ho!... :D

Yeh dekha hai humne aazmakar,
Dhoka dete hai log aksar kareeb aakar,
Kehti hai duniya par yeh dil nahi maanta
Ke chod jaoge tum bhi ek din apna banakar!
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2006, 08:27:51 AM »
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sukriya Dost ,,, n very well written .. do tarah se nazar aayi shahid aapki post.. so do jawab :wink:

dastoor hai hasseno ka
kahin ek jagah rukti nahi
samjh paye jo inhein
aaisa hunar toh khuda mein bhi nahi
bewaffai agar karein toh
tardpa tardpa jaan le jayein
dil se agar chahein toh
insan bhi khuda se kam nahi...!!!


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samjh sake  jo mujhe
aaisa koi dost mila nahi
di jaan sab ke liye
par mere liye koi ruka nahi
Jeet,Zindagi hai kanton ka safar
isse lekin koi shikwa nahi ...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 27, 2006, 09:39:32 AM »
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sukriya Dost ,,, n very well written .. do tarah se nazar aayi shahid aapki post.. so do jawab :wink:

dastoor hai hasseno ka
kahin ek jagah rukti nahi
samjh paye jo inhein
aaisa hunar toh khuda mein bhi nahi
bewaffai agar karein toh
tardpa tardpa jaan le jayein
dil se agar chahein toh
insan bhi khuda se kam nahi...!!!


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samjh sake  jo mujhe
aaisa koi dost mila nahi
di jaan sab ke liye
par mere liye koi ruka nahi
Jeet,Zindagi hai kanton ka safar
isse lekin koi shikwa nahi ...!!!


masa allah! kya khub kaha aapne Jeet bhai :D

Par lagta hein k aapne har kisi ko rah mein dost banane kii kosis kii hogii...sahii dost to wo heera hein jo muddaton dhudne mein lag jate hein....aur rah mein to waise bohot milte hein..

tum takalluf ko bhii iKhlaas samajhate ho "JEET"
dost hotaa nahiin har haath milaane vaalaa

 :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2006, 09:44:42 AM »
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wah!!! wonderful...........jeet and shahid..........bahut khub,,,,,,,,,
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Anushka
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2006, 12:17:26 PM »
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Wah bahut khub liha hai Shahid and Jeet.... wonderful work!
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: June 27, 2006, 02:18:17 PM »
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sukriya Dost ,,, n very well written .. do tarah se nazar aayi shahid aapki post.. so do jawab :wink:

dastoor hai hasseno ka
kahin ek jagah rukti nahi
samjh paye jo inhein
aaisa hunar toh khuda mein bhi nahi
bewaffai agar karein toh
tardpa tardpa jaan le jayein
dil se agar chahein toh
insan bhi khuda se kam nahi...!!!


---

samjh sake  jo mujhe
aaisa koi dost mila nahi
di jaan sab ke liye
par mere liye koi ruka nahi
Jeet,Zindagi hai kanton ka safar
isse lekin koi shikwa nahi ...!!!


bahoot hi acha likha hai Jeet & RWG ji...

 na kare jo nakhara wo husan nahi hota
na uthye jo nakhara wo ashiq nahi hota
payaar ho dil se, to is jahan mai dost
Rub se bad kar hai phir wo dildaar hota!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: June 27, 2006, 02:31:24 PM »
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behtreen post RWG ji ...

chahte hain tujhe khud se jayada
mere  toh khuda bhi ho tum

lagga hai IshQ ka tujhse aisa rog
jiski dard-0-dawa ho sirf tum

nahi sahi jaati ek pal bhi doori
kaise  jeeyien tumhare bina abb hum

har saans ke sath  tera naam nikale
meri har dhadkan mein shamil ho tum...!!!


wah kaya baat hai, Good one Jeet!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2006, 04:47:10 PM »
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apne dil ko hamne samjhaya hai bahut
hame har pal teri yaado ne sataya hai bahut
tere dil ki dharakno mein mera naam rahe isi  tarah
tujhe apne khuda se bhi jayada hamne chaha hai bahut
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«Reply #12 on: June 27, 2006, 05:17:01 PM »
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masa allah! kya khub kaha aapne Jeet bhai :D

Par lagta hein k aapne har kisi ko rah mein dost banane kii kosis kii hogii...sahii dost to wo heera hein jo muddaton dhudne mein lag jate hein....aur rah mein to waise bohot milte hein..

tum takalluf ko bhii iKhlaas samajhate ho "JEET"
dost hotaa nahiin har haath milaane vaalaa

 :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D  :D


sahi kaha dost... har kissi aapna maan baithta hai dil... nadaan hai,duniyadari nahi samjhta


badaye jo hath, usse dost bana leta hu,
milaaye jo kadam,usse aapna maan leta hu
Jagah nahi bachi, peeth pe jahan zakhm na ho
phir bhi sabko main aapne gaale lagga leta hu...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 27, 2006, 05:18:20 PM »
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bahoot hi acha likha hai Jeet & RWG ji...

 na kare jo nakhara wo husan nahi hota
na uthye jo nakhara wo ashiq nahi hota
payaar ho dil se, to is jahan mai dost
Rub se bad kar hai phir wo dildaar hota!!


Pooja .... humne bhi yahi kaha,

karo nakhre hazaar,ser ankhon par rakehinge
karo apni aadon se war,haste hue seene par leinge
magar Pyaar kiya toh iss mein kabhi bewafai na dena
tutta jo aitbaar,toh duniya se hum muh pher leinge...!!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2006, 05:22:24 PM »
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apne dil ko hamne samjhaya hai bahut
hame har pal teri yaado ne sataya hai bahut
tere dil ki dharakno mein mera naam rahe isi  tarah
tujhe apne khuda se bhi jayada hamne chaha hai bahut


wah Ranjana ji...

chaha hai tumhein,aor chahte raheinge
jalein hain tere IshQ mein,aor jalte raheinge
kabhi saans ke sath,toh kabhi dhadkno ke sung
Abb naam tera har pal hum gungunate raheinge...!!!
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