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Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

by Iqtedar on July 03, 2013, 05:13:33 PM

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Khudara Ab Ke Duaen Khubool Ho Jayen
Meri Taqdeer May Dukh Dard Uske Ho Jayen

Usko Pal Bhar Ki Bhi Takleef Na Ho Ae Maula
Saare Sukh Chaen Mere Naam Uske Ho Jayen

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2013, 05:46:35 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2013, 06:01:52 PM »


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2013, 06:22:11 PM »

Jise aap dono ki waah mil jaye usey aur kya chahiye???
Thanks Dr. Saini sahab aur Siddiqui sahab... Usual Smile


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2013, 06:25:18 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on July 03, 2013, 06:22:11 PM

Jise aap dono ki waah mil jaye usey aur kya chahiye???
Thanks Dr. Saini sahab aur Siddiqui sahab... Usual Smile

वाह-वाह.बहुत खूब


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2013, 06:33:22 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB......... Applause


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2013, 07:30:22 PM »

hmhmhm Aameen.


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2013, 07:39:21 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on July 03, 2013, 05:13:33 PM

Khudara Ab Ke Duaen Khubool Ho Jayen
Meri Taqdeer May Dukh Dard Uske Ho Jayen

Usko Pal Bhar Ki Bhi Takleef Na Ho Ae Maula
Saare Sukh Chaen Mere Naam Uske Ho Jayen

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.

waah waah kya baat hai iqtedar bhai,,,
saab unko de de ke ap kaha jare ho..

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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2013, 09:07:18 PM »

nyc thoughts iqtedaa.r ji,..........


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2013, 10:42:18 PM »

kya dedication hai pyar ke prati bhai..bahut umda peshkash hai.. happy9


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2013, 10:46:29 PM »

Ravi Sagar bhai, Miru bhai, Shihab bhai, Laaiba ji aur Nashwani sahab aap sabka bahot bahot shukriya...

Sahal bhai jab manchaha mil jaata na to apna aap khatam ho jaata - dio to bi nakko tu bi, sab unkaich ho jaata - apna rhaetaich kya bolke!!!


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2013, 11:32:02 PM »

iqtedar saaheb khayal ahcha hai, par mujhe lagaa ki dono hin sher ke doosre line meN agara aap use ulta kar deN to sher ar aaraam se khulega... jaise...

Khudara Ab Ke Duaen Khubool Ho Jayen
Meri Taqdeer May Dukh Dard Uske Ho Jayen

uske dukh dard meri taqdeer meN ho jaayeN

Usko Pal Bhar Ki Bhi Takleef Na Ho Ae Maula
Saare Sukh Chaen Mere Naam Uske Ho Jayen

isme to thoda change karna bahut jaruri hai saaheb, agar padhte waqt maiN mere ke bajaaye naam pe ruk jaata huN to matlab hi adal jata hai...

waise bas ek suggestion hai ye meri taraf se, baaNki agar meri koi baat naganwaar guzre ya kisi baat se takleef pahunche to uske liye maiN tah-e-dil se maafi ka talabgaar rahunga...

Bas aage bhi yuNhi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...


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Re: Khudara Ab Ke Duaen...

«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2013, 03:09:57 PM »

Taish bhai sach kahon to ye comments padh kar mujhe behad acha laga - mujhe pata nahi tha ke meri likhi betuki lines ko bhi koi itni gahraai se padhega - aapke comments sar aankhon par, aur aagey bhi aapki rahnumaai isi tarha milti rahe ye guzarish hai aapse...
Taish bhai bahot bahot shukriya.