Khumaar

by salma786 on May 05, 2009, 08:05:23 AM
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Sadayen dhadkan ki yun hi chalti rahegi,
Tere jane se meri zindegi bhi dhalti rahegi,

Do pal jo sath guzare hai humne,
Sari kaynaat un lamho ko yaad karti rahegi,

Akhon me teri tasveer na hogi,
Mere jism se teri khusboo mehakti rahegi,

Jitna ashq bahega mera teri judaai me,
Juda karne walo ki rooh bhi yun tadapti rahegi,

Bhuj jaye zindegi ki law toofano me Phir bhi,
Ishq ki shama mere dil me jalti rahegi,

Bhale hi patthar aye raaho me mere,
Chuyan se mohabbat ki wo pighalti rahegi,

Bichad ke tujhse mai bikhar jau to gam nahi,
Sitara ban ke Falak me nishaani hamari chamakti rahegi!
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 08:07:08 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Salma! Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2009, 10:30:37 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Salma! Usual Smile

Shukriya dear Usual Smile
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2009, 10:44:00 AM »
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Bahut khoob Salma Ji
khubsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne, Good.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2009, 10:48:39 AM »
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Mashallah bahut khoob Salma ji
bahut hi umda ghazal hai...
Applause Applause Applause
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salma786
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2009, 10:54:18 AM »
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Bohot khoob Salma ji behad acha likhti hain aap.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley                                                                                    dua-e-shab chandni me yun pukara karengi,shabnam saveron ki tishnagi mita.ti rahengi                                                                                                                                dhadkano ka shor rulata hai to kya,khamoshiyan khumaari banke hasati rahengi

Shukriya or apne khoob likha hai Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2009, 11:28:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob Salma Ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2009, 11:56:22 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Hi Khoob Salma.....Beautiful creation...Bohot Bohot Khoob dear ! Yunhi likhte rehna  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2009, 12:32:00 PM »
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Very nice lines salma bohat umda likha hai .... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2009, 01:36:19 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai.. Khumaar-e-Ishq Me aaj Itna Khumaar.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Salma Ji Behad Pyaar Bhara Likha hai aapne.. maine such me aaapki is Poem ko abhi 3 Baar padha hai.. Bahut hi Khubsoorat likha hai aapne..!! Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2009, 01:43:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob Salma Ji
khubsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne, Good.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh ji!
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2009, 01:47:59 PM »
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Mashallah bahut khoob Salma ji
bahut hi umda ghazal hai...
Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Diya ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2009, 02:04:49 PM »
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waah kya baat hai! bahot hee khoobsurat lihka hai!

reply dena chaha, par iss k agay mere qalam sharmagaye...
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2009, 02:17:37 PM »
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Bahut khoob Salma Ji
Thanks Rajesh ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2009, 02:18:53 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Hi Khoob Salma.....Beautiful creation...Bohot Bohot Khoob dear ! Yunhi likhte rehna  icon_thumleft
Thanks Talat sis Usual Smile
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