Khumaar-e-ishq !!

by Rishi on August 24, 2006, 01:54:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 29, 2006, 12:04:53 PM »
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Ilzaam dete hain woh ke hamne unhe sataya hai,
Koi puchhe jaakar unse unhone kitna hamein tadpaya hai,
Sisakte hain raat bharr tanha kya unhone bhi apna yeh haal paaya hai,
Kehte hain le jaayenge aapko aisi hi baaton se mere dil ko behelaaya hai..........

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #16 on: August 29, 2006, 12:07:51 PM »
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Ranju, Rishi, Gesu

Subhan Allah !

Bahut khoob !

Bhai padh kar mazaa aa gaya !

Gesu tum to ab bagair koshish ke likh diya karo  :D

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«Reply #17 on: August 29, 2006, 01:09:49 PM »
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shukriya Rajbir ....Gesu .....Rishi ....behad khubsuart likha hai aap dono ne ....ab ek koshish meri bhi  Usual Smile


yeh jo shaam dheere dheere dhal rahi hai
tere pyaar ki khushboo ismein mehek rahi hai

jaag raha hai hole  se nashilii raat ka jaadu
tere pyaar ki jaadugari mere dil per chal rahi hai

falak per bikahre hain chand sitaare
kahi dur se aati teri sada kisi bansuri si lag rahi hai

kyu mere gesu ab machal ke khul jaana chahate hain tere kandhe per
lo ab tere mere ishq ki dastaan kuch toh aage bad rahi hai !!
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«Reply #18 on: August 29, 2006, 01:12:06 PM »
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theek hai big b aaj bina koshish ke try karte hain.......ranju ji its superb.......
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«Reply #19 on: August 29, 2006, 02:20:20 PM »
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Ishq mein na jaane kaisa saroor sa chhaya hai,
Tumhare hi khayalon ka har pal saaya hai,
Kho diya hai khud ko hamne
Is kadar ae sanam tu mujhmein samaya hai,
Dekhoon jis bhi ore bus tumhe hi paaya hai,
Har jazbaat hai tumse, tumse hi har ehsaas hai,
Tum hi ho woh jise khwaabon mein dekha tha
Aur hakikatt mein paaya hai...........

without koshish!!!!!!!!! :D from gesu........ :D
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«Reply #20 on: August 30, 2006, 04:27:44 AM »
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Ishq mein na jaane kaisa saroor sa chhaya hai,
Tumhare hi khayalon ka har pal saaya hai,
Kho diya hai khud ko hamne
Is kadar ae sanam tu mujhmein samaya hai,
Dekhoon jis bhi ore bus tumhe hi paaya hai,
Har jazbaat hai tumse, tumse hi har ehsaas hai,
Tum hi ho woh jise khwaabon mein dekha tha
Aur hakikatt mein paaya hai...........

without koshish!!!!!!!!! :D from gesu........ :D


wah bahut khub Gesu .........accha likha hai... :D

dil per unke ho pyaar ka nasha sa chhaa gaya
woh mere dil ki dharakno mein sama gaya
kar diya hai usne apne pyaar ka jaadu mujh per
mera sapana haqikatt ban ke saamne aa gaaya!!
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«Reply #21 on: August 30, 2006, 11:38:50 AM »
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shukriya ranju ji aur bahut khoob likha aapne........
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«Reply #22 on: August 30, 2006, 06:05:02 PM »
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Thanx everyone for filling in nd m really sorry that today i couldn't post in all the forums i m currently writing in, nd won't be able to a couple of days more, but i did write a few lines..!!
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dil reh reh ke pooch raha hai mujh se,
kitna tadpayegi wo mujhe intezaar mein..
 
na tum aayi na koi paigaam hi bheja tum ne,
kyun itna sata rahi ho tum hum ko pyaar mein..
 
bas ek mera hi mann pyaasa taras raha hai,
baraste saawan ki is rimjhim phuhaar mein..
 
soone hain baag bagiche, soona sa hai jahaan sara,
tum bin sab begaane hain dilbar mere sansaar mein..!!

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«Reply #23 on: August 30, 2006, 06:54:02 PM »
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Bichre howe kisi ko zamana guzar gaya
is dil ki bey basi ko zamana guzar gaya
dekhe bakhair jis ke na katta tha ek pal
dekhe howe ussi ko zamana guzara gaya.....
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«Reply #24 on: August 31, 2006, 01:11:19 AM »
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Thanx everyone for filling in nd m really sorry that today i couldn't post in all the forums i m currently writing in, nd won't be able to a couple of days more, but i did write a few lines..!!
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dil reh reh ke pooch raha hai mujh se,
kitna tadpayegi wo mujhe intezaar mein..
 
na tum aayi na koi paigaam hi bheja tum ne,
kyun itna sata rahi ho tum hum ko pyaar mein..
 
bas ek mera hi mann pyaasa taras raha hai,
baraste saawan ki is rimjhim phuhaar mein..
 
soone hain baag bagiche, soona sa hai jahaan sara,
tum bin sab begaane hain dilbar mere sansaar mein..!!

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rishiji.....ranju mom...aur rabbi di......really nice written :D:D:D

waqt se poocha humne ke kitna aur intezaar karvayenge app
dil se poocha humne ke kitna aur tadpayenge humhe app
eeh sanam mitha dooh inh doriyooon ko abbh
khuda se poocha humne ke aur kitne imtehaan legenghe app :D:D:D
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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2006, 03:44:03 AM »
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bahut khoob sweet raabii .....raishi and anjani ........


katati nahi hai tere intezaar mein yeh raate
taare gin gin hum karte hain chand se baate

chamakte sittaro se pata tera hamne poocha
yeh hawa ke jhonke bhi ab tera kuch pata nahi bataate

aankho mein basi hai bas ek suart teri
kaano mein gunjati hai bas teri hi meethi baate

yun kab tak hum ko aur tadpaaoge
kab hongi apni fir pyaar bhari mulaqaate !!!
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