Khumaari

by @kaash on May 23, 2009, 10:44:29 AM
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alfaazon ki betaabi hui kalam ki zubaani
mohabbat ki khumaari khyaalon ki rawani


vo lahja muqaddus vo gulafshaa se sitare
khwaab ke tasavvur ki kum kahan meherbaani


kitni shokhi hai husn me mahakti beqaraari
zara sa roobaru bhi hon badh jaye pashemaani


koi talluk nahi na chahe aarzoo koi nata
siyahi me ubharti besabab sada,sapno ki raani


chhoona chahte hain magar jism ka koi hissa nahi
husn pe likhna husn pe na mit.na aashiq ki kahaani


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aaina
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 10:46:00 AM »
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kya baat hai kaash bhut khoob dear very nice ghazal
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 11:18:51 AM »
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alfaazon ki betaabi hui kalam ki zubaani
mohabbat ki khumaari khyaalon ki rawani


vo lahja muqaddus vo gulafshaa se sitare
khwaab ke tasavvur ki kum kahan meherbaani


kitni shokhi hai husn me mahakti beqaraari
zara sa roobaru bhi hon badh jaye pashemaani


koi talluk nahi na chahe aarzoo koi nata
siyahi me ubharti besabab sada,sapno ki raani


chhoona chahte hain magar jism ka koi hissa nahi
husn pe likhna husn pe na mit.na aashiq ki kahaani





woow bahut sunder hai ji. bahit hi khoobsurqati se likha hai aapne ek payar karne wale ke jazabaaton ko.  bahit khoob ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 03:07:47 PM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji.. Beautifuly Written.. Usual Smile
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fatima anam
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 03:30:15 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley
aapne bhaut beautifully likha hai....

sweet imagination!
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2009, 03:44:04 AM »
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alfaazon ki betaabi hui kalam ki zubaani
mohabbat ki khumaari khyaalon ki rawani


vo lahja muqaddus vo gulafshaa se sitare
khwaab ke tasavvur ki kum kahan meherbaani


kitni shokhi hai husn me mahakti beqaraari
zara sa roobaru bhi hon badh jaye pashemaani


koi talluk nahi na chahe aarzoo koi nata
siyahi me ubharti besabab sada,sapno ki raani


chhoona chahte hain magar jism ka koi hissa nahi
husn pe likhna husn pe na mit.na aashiq ki kahaani


@Kaash ji bahut umda likha hai aapne.  Applause
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vitasta
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2009, 03:47:16 AM »
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very beautifully written Applause
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