----Khushboo---

by Vikk on July 13, 2009, 07:10:13 PM
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Vikk
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Phoolon ki khushbu ka hume kya karna,
mere liye teri tasveer mehka karti hai.

Jo girte hain rang jab bhi haathon se,
Bagiya kya jaana, teri tasveer ban jaati hai.
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khushichopra
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2009, 07:41:29 PM »
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very nice
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2009, 12:55:40 AM »
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Very beautiful creation Vikk ji,bahut acha likha aapne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2009, 02:47:30 AM »
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Wah wah...bahut acche  Thumbs UP
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2009, 04:04:09 AM »
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nice lines Vikk ji...

her berang bhi lage sunhara
tere pyar ka kaya jaadu chaya hai

ek pal ko he chahe chua tune mujhe
khushboo sa yah tan-man mehak ayya hai
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Vikk
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2009, 05:11:03 AM »
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Bohat Bohat shukriya ap sabhi ka...
kahi suna tha
(NM)
Jo manchaahe rango se ban jaaye vo Tasveer kehlaaati hai
jo anchaahe rango se ban jaaye use taqdeer kehte hain.
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2009, 05:59:10 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Vikk Bhai.. Lajawab Peshkash Hai.. Applause


Pooja Ji aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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Deepati
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2009, 02:53:28 AM »
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Phoolon ki khushbu ka hume kya karna,
mere liye teri tasveer mehka karti hai.

Jo girte hain rang jab bhi haathon se,
Bagiya kya jaana, teri tasveer ban jaati hai.


Wah Wah Vikk Ji! bahut he khoobsurat likha hai! Applause

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Deepati
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2009, 02:54:27 AM »
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nice lines Vikk ji...

her berang bhi lage sunhara
tere pyar ka kaya jaadu chaya hai

ek pal ko he chahe chua tune mujhe
khushboo sa yah tan-man mehak ayya hai

Beautiful lines, Pooja Ji! Applause
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2009, 04:00:41 PM »
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Wah wah
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