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<>*Khushboo*<> Saanson ki khushbooo wo tere pyaar ki khushboo Mere tan se uth rahi hai tere badan ki khushboo
Aanchal udta hai jab natkhat hawa k jhonke se Har suun failti hai mehakte pyaar ki khushboo
Kitaabon me mere ab bhi basi hui hai saajna Tere diye hue kuch sukhe gulaab ki khushboo
Khwaabon me aake jab laut jati hun tere paas se main Mujhme rehti hai tere sath bitayee raat ki khushboo
Chaahkar bhi nahin rok pati hun main humdum Kasak jo uthaati hai ye teri yaad ki khushboo…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 05:02:53 PM » |
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<>*Khushboo*<> Saanson ki khushbooo wo tere pyaar ki khushboo Mere tan se uth rahi hai tere badan ki khushboo
Aanchal udta hai jab natkhat hawa k jhonke se Har suun failti hai mehakte pyaar ki khushboo
Kitaabon me mere ab bhi basi hui hai saajna Tere diye hue kuch sukhe gulaab ki khushboo
Khwaabon me aake jab laut jati hun tere paas se main Mujhme rehti hai tere sath bitayee raat ki khushboo
Chaahkar bhi nahin rok pati hun main humdum Kasak jo uthaati hai ye teri yaad ki khushboo…!!!
Kasak Ji ! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage hume ... shabdoN ki mehak saansoN meN ghool gai ... bahut accha likha hai aapne ... !
tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !
yunhi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ... !
duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 05:21:51 PM » |
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very good romantic poem........... Lo bula layi mujhe tere ess kalaam ki khshboo ......... Meri saason mai bas gayee ye shabdon ki khushboo Mujhe lubhaa rahi hai aaj tere khayalon ki khushboo Mera aangan mai gunj rahi hai tere kadmon ki khshboo Bhule nahi bhulati tere sparsh ki nashily khushboo Mere ang ang mai bas gayi hai tere ang ki khushboo Kisse kahu kaise kahu kya haal ho gayaa hai mera Mera rom rom kasmasaata hai jab aati hai Teri khushboo
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 05:39:37 PM » |
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wahhhhhhhhhhh humnaam aate hi bomb fenk diya...wo bhi mujhpar hi...bht hi mastam mast likha hai re tumne..maza aagaya padhkar...
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 05:40:14 PM » |
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naresh ji bht bht shukriya aapka k aapne itna pasand kiya aur saraha meri iss koshish ko....yunhi sath dete rahiyega ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2011, 06:25:02 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2011, 06:46:13 PM » |
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"" khusbuon ki bahaar chaa gai yo par pahle Parwaaz ab Kasak ki khusboo
udd rahi kaisi ye azeeb si khusbu mahak raha sabhi ka tanmann
chhai na ghata koi, na aahat kisi boond ki jaane kaise fir bhi Baras rahi chahat ki khusbu "" dekha mene kr dia na uljulul comnt so don mind plz. "" bahut khubsurat poetry Kasak ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2011, 06:57:01 PM » |
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bahut khub kasak ji... bahut khubsurat...
mehek uthi sadayein dil ki phir tum yaad aaye, mehfil me thi kami tum lekar dil e shaad aaye, jab jab teri khushbu bulaati rahi hume Kasak laut aaye hum beshak lekar dil e barbaad aaye... !
Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2011, 09:14:18 PM » |
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BAhut Khub Kasak Ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 03:41:58 AM » |
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Kya Baat Hai Bahut Khub Behna
Shad o Aabad Rahiye...
~Shihab~
thnku thnku shihab bhai.......pasand karne aur sarahne ka... hamesha khush raho muskurate raho aur .sabke dil ko bhaate raho...
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 03:42:16 AM » |
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BAhut Khub Kasak Ji
thnx rishi ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2011, 03:44:37 AM » |
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bahut khub kasak ji... bahut khubsurat...
mehek uthi sadayein dil ki phir tum yaad aaye, mehfil me thi kami tum lekar dil e shaad aaye, jab jab teri khushbu bulaati rahi hume Kasak laut aaye hum beshak lekar dil e barbaad aaye... !
Intezar !
wahhhhh bht hi mast mast lines intezaar ji......thnx for these lines ji....
har shab bas tujhe hi dekhte rahe har aks me tujhe hi talashte rahe tere likhe geeton ko hun intezaar apne labon pe hamesha sajate rahe..!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2011, 03:45:58 AM » |
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"" khusbuon ki bahaar chaa gai yo par pahle Parwaaz ab Kasak ki khusboo
udd rahi kaisi ye azeeb si khusbu mahak raha sabhi ka tanmann
chhai na ghata koi, na aahat kisi boond ki jaane kaise fir bhi Baras rahi chahat ki khusbu "" dekha mene kr dia na uljulul comnt so don mind plz. "" bahut khubsurat poetry Kasak ji
nirala mastana ji aapke ye ulte pulte jawab bhi kitne dilchasp hote hain ye aap nahin jante....always waiting for ur ulte pulte jawab on my post..and this 1 is veryyyyy mast mast ji... thnx ji for such a sweet reply...
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2011, 02:51:11 PM » |
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wowwww..... anu di bht mast likha hai aapne... tooooooooo.... gooooood..
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