Khushi se na mar jaye..!!

by Gyan Prakash on November 22, 2013, 05:25:54 AM
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Teer kahi.n seene ke andar na utar jaye
Na dekho yun..koi khushi se na mar jaye

Na nikala karo yun chandni mein ae sanam
chand ko jalan hoti hai bechara kidhar jaye

Manzilon ki fiqr kise jab raste.n hon hasi.n
Ek darash ko tere sara karwan thahar jaye

samet lo in gesuo.n ko ab bikharne na do
dil bekaboo sa hai na had se guzar jaye

Ho hujoom rindo.n ka aur mehfil ho jawan
Kaun kambhakth laut ke apne ghar jaye..!!


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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2013, 05:47:53 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2013, 08:09:42 AM »
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bahut sunder dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2013, 01:24:22 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooooob , Congrats !
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2013, 01:31:19 PM »
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2013, 02:05:30 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2013, 02:06:20 PM »
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bahut sunder dheron daad

Bahut shukriya Saini Sahab..!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 22, 2013, 02:32:30 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwww... bahut khoooooooob... badi hi achchi peshkash rahi... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: November 22, 2013, 03:31:49 PM »
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Teer kahi.n seene ke andar na utar jaye
Na dekho yun..koi khushi se na mar jaye

Na nikala karo yun chandni mein ae sanam
chand ko jalan hoti hai bechara kidhar jaye

Manzilon ki fiqr kise jab raste.n hon hasi.n
Ek darash icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch ko tere sara karwan thahar jaye

samet lo in gesuo.n ko ab bikharne na do
dil bekaboo sa hai na had se guzar jaye

Ho hujoom rindo.n ka aur mehfil ho jawan
Kaun kambhakth laut ke apne ghar jaye..!!


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Wowwwwwwwwwwww... bahut khoooooooob... badi hi achchi peshkash rahi... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad...

bahut bahut shukriya Aqsh Ji..sath banaye rakhein..!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 22, 2013, 03:32:44 PM »
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bahut shukriya Qalb Ji..!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 22, 2013, 06:09:10 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 22, 2013, 07:15:51 PM »
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Shukriya..!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: November 22, 2013, 08:23:38 PM »
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G P Jee Aadaab...!


Kia baat hai janab badi lambi gairhazeri rahi aapki toH... chaliye aapne khoob wapsi kii iski bahut khushi hui...

Badi khoob kalaam kahi hai janab... behad khoob khayaal rahe, aik umda aur pur asar kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Shayad teesre sher ki dusri line meiN aap " durushya" kahna chahte haiN, jo mis spel hokar darash" ho gaya hai spel correct kar lijiye... Warna humare Qalb Sahaab roz sar khujaate raheNge... tongue3

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...
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