Khushi se na mar jaye..!!

by Gyan Prakash on November 22, 2013, 05:25:54 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 22, 2013, 08:53:34 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on November 22, 2013, 07:49:28 PM
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Thank you Suresh Ji..!!
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«Reply #16 on: November 22, 2013, 09:00:52 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 22, 2013, 08:23:38 PM

G P Jee Aadaab...!


Kia baat hai janab badi lambi gairhazeri rahi aapki toH... chaliye aapne khoob wapsi kii iski bahut khushi hui...

Badi khoob kalaam kahi hai janab... behad khoob khayaal rahe, aik umda aur pur asar kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Shayad teesre sher ki dusri line meiN aap " durushya" kahna chahte haiN, jo mis spel hokar darash" ho gaya hai spel correct kar lijiye... Warna humare Qalb Sahaab roz sar khujaate raheNge... tongue3

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Parwaaz Ji..!!

Hamein tah-e-dil se khushi ki aapko kalaam pasand aayi.

"Darash" ek hindi shabd hai jiska artha hai "deedar". Kshhama kijiyega mujhe "durushya" ka artha pata nahi, aapse hum janana jarur chahenge..!!

sath Banaye rakhein..

Khuda Hafez..!!
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«Reply #17 on: November 23, 2013, 02:18:59 AM »
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Waah !! Rang ras zauq lutf se bhari ghazal par dheron daad Gyan Prakash ji !!!
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«Reply #18 on: November 23, 2013, 02:27:53 AM »
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Quote from: zarraa on November 23, 2013, 02:18:59 AM
Waah !! Rang ras zauq lutf se bhari ghazal par dheron daad Gyan Prakash ji !!!

bahut bahut shukriya Zarraa Ji..!!
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«Reply #19 on: November 23, 2013, 03:40:02 AM »
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Quote from: Gyan Prakash on November 22, 2013, 09:00:52 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Parwaaz Ji..!!

Hamein tah-e-dil se khushi ki aapko kalaam pasand aayi.

"Darash" ek hindi shabd hai jiska artha hai "deedar". Kshhama kijiyega mujhe "durushya" ka artha pata nahi, aapse hum janana jarur chahenge..!!

sath Banaye rakhein..

Khuda Hafez..!!



Aadaab Janab....!

Jee janab drushya ke meaning bhi deedaar hote haiN.. Usual Smile
Haan shayad drushya marathi lafz haiN... aur Daras hindi ...
Kia kareN janab nayi nayi languages sikhane ke chakkar meiN hum khichadi bana baithe hai sab laungage kii.. tongue3

Wel aap sahiN hai janab par Darash nahi daras par..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #20 on: November 23, 2013, 03:46:10 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 23, 2013, 03:40:02 AM

Aadaab Janab....!

Jee janab drushya ke meaning bhi deedaar hote haiN.. Usual Smile
Haan shayad drushya marathi lafz haiN... aur Daras hindi ...
Kia kareN janab nayi nayi languages sikhane ke chakkar meiN hum khichadi bana baithe hai sab laungage kii.. tongue3

Wel aap sahiN hai janab par Darash nahi daras par..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Chaliye..Isi bahane humein ek marathi shabd sikhne mila..waise sach to hai ki humare Shabdkosh mein shabdo.n ki bhari kami hai tongue3

Sath banaye rakhein..

Khuda Hafez..
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«Reply #21 on: November 23, 2013, 04:42:00 AM »
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drushya word hindi mein bi hai aur sanskrit mein b hai Parwaaz beta


gyan Prakash jee aapne bahut accha likha hai.
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«Reply #22 on: November 23, 2013, 08:18:17 AM »
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Kya baat !! wah.
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«Reply #23 on: November 23, 2013, 04:28:11 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on November 23, 2013, 04:42:00 AM
drushya word hindi mein bi hai aur sanskrit mein b hai Parwaaz beta


gyan Prakash jee aapne bahut accha likha hai.



Bahut Shukriya Suman Ji..!!
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«Reply #24 on: November 23, 2013, 04:29:14 PM »
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Quote from: Zaif on November 23, 2013, 08:18:17 AM
Kya baat !! wah.

Thanks a lot..!!
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