Khwaaab PalkoN se churaa lo ~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on August 14, 2013, 06:32:20 PM
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Bahut din(Actually mahine) huye dosto kuchh post kiye huye so aaj aapke samne haazir hun maafi ki guzarish ke sath ek ghazal lekar... Ummeed hai aapko pasand ayegi. gara naa aaye to khamiyaN zaroor bataayeiN..

Khwaab palkoN se churaa lo
Tum mujhe apnaa banaa lo

Tum kaho to maan le ye
Dil ko kuchh aise sambhaalo

Raat aankhoN me guzaarooN
Shaam kuchh aisii banaa lo

Meri baahoN me samaa ke
MaaNg taaroN se sajaa lo

Hamse seekhe ye zamaanaa
Pyaar bas aise nibhaa lo

Meri parchhaayiiN ho tum to
fir jagah apnii sambhaalo


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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2013, 06:39:34 PM »
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bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2013, 06:50:24 PM »
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bahut khoob abhi ji.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2013, 07:06:06 PM »
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just excellent bahut dino ke baad aaye par naayaab peshkash laaye
god bless u aur ye lo tumhaaraa pahlaa rau
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2013, 07:09:22 PM »
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Meri baahoN me samaa ke, MaaNg taaroN se sajaa lo
Hamse seekhe ye zamaanaa, Pyaar bas aise nibhaa lo
 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2013, 07:23:57 PM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 14, 2013, 06:39:34 PM
bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

THanks nishi ji hosla badhane ke liye.. yunhi sath rahiye ...
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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2013, 07:37:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot khoobsoorat rachna hai....
very nice........ Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2013, 07:51:46 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 14, 2013, 06:50:24 PM
bahut khoob abhi ji.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause

MOahd. Tauhid bhai bahut bahut shukriya aapka
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2013, 07:53:02 PM »
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behad khubsurat aur umda qalaam dhero daad ......
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2013, 07:53:55 PM »
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Abhi Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne pahle toH aapki haazri ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa janab ke aapko waqt toH mila... Usual Smile

Bahut achchi kalaam huyi hai waqai behad chhoti bher meiN achche khayaaloN ko baNdha hai aapne...
Aakhri sher toH bus gazab ka raha janab... Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2013, 10:16:45 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 14, 2013, 07:06:06 PM
just excellent bahut dino ke baad aaye par naayaab peshkash laaye
god bless u aur ye lo tumhaaraa pahlaa rau

shukriya sirji bada dar ke post kiya tha maine is bar halanki mujhe pata tha ki koi gadbad nahi hai .. par fir bhi aapse sunna chahta tha..
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2013, 10:17:34 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 14, 2013, 07:09:22 PM
Meri baahoN me samaa ke, MaaNg taaroN se sajaa lo
Hamse seekhe ye zamaanaa, Pyaar bas aise nibhaa lo
 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
shukriya Iqtedar ji..
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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2013, 10:20:50 PM »
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 WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob
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Quote from: soudagar on August 14, 2013, 07:53:02 PM
behad khubsurat aur umda qalaam dhero daad ......

dhanyawaaad saudagar ji..yunhi sath rahiye..
cheers
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
waah ,....bohat c daad,..........
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