Khwaaab PalkoN se churaa lo ~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on August 14, 2013, 06:32:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 15, 2013, 02:11:05 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #16 on: August 15, 2013, 02:17:40 AM »
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zabardasttttttttttttttt dhaansu post abhi......... bht bht bht mast likha hai bilkul "zehar"........... waise MG sahi kehte the tujhe apna takhallus zehar hi rakhna chahiye ......

Khwaab palkoN se churaa lo
Tum mujhe apnaa banaa lo

waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tum kaho to maan le ye
Dil ko kuchh aise sambhaalo

bht kuhuuubbbbb........... Applause Applause

Raat aankhoN me guzaarooN
Shaam kuchh aisii banaa lo

romanticcc ..... bhai kiske liyee....  Winking Winking

Meri baahoN me samaa ke
MaaNg taaroN se sajaa lo

kyun nahi ... ab to maan hi jayegi wo bhii....... Giggle Giggle Giggle

Hamse seekhe ye zamaanaa
Pyaar bas aise nibhaa lo

tumse pyaarrrrrrrr.......  icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

Meri parchhaayiiN ho tum to
fir jagah apnii sambhaalo

best 1 yaarrrraaa.........  notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #17 on: August 15, 2013, 04:48:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: August 15, 2013, 08:44:51 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #19 on: August 15, 2013, 09:32:27 AM »
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lajavab Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: August 16, 2013, 09:22:00 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 14, 2013, 07:53:55 PM

Abhi Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne pahle toH aapki haazri ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa janab ke aapko waqt toH mila... Usual Smile

Bahut achchi kalaam huyi hai waqai behad chhoti bher meiN achche khayaaloN ko baNdha hai aapne...
Aakhri sher toH bus gazab ka raha janab... Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Parwaaz bhaii ...galati ho gayi itne waqt aap sab se door raha ..par socha ki agar likhna hai to poori tarah se perfect likhuN tab likhne ke sahi mayne hoge so khudko thoda waqt diya seekhne ke liye or ab jab kafi kuchh likha chuka hun to ek bar fir aap sab ke saaamne huN..

Daad ke liye dher saar dhanywaad. sath rahiye khush rahiye
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«Reply #21 on: August 16, 2013, 09:24:13 AM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on August 14, 2013, 10:20:50 PM
WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob

bahut shukriya Bhupinder ji.. sath rahiye ...khush rahiye
Quote from: laaiba on August 14, 2013, 10:57:43 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
waah ,....bohat c daad,..........

shukriya Laiba ji aapne waqt apna keemti waqt diya or is post ko pasand kiya
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«Reply #22 on: August 16, 2013, 09:26:57 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on August 15, 2013, 02:11:05 AM
wha wha bhut khub
Rajan ji shukriya saarhne ke liye.. sath rahiye..
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 15, 2013, 04:48:28 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukriya Kapil bhai ... sath rahiye ...khush rahiye


Quote from: prashad on August 15, 2013, 08:44:51 AM
bahut khoob
Shukriya prasad ji ..yunhi sath rahiye ...khush rahiye
 

Quote from: nandbahu on August 15, 2013, 09:32:27 AM
lajavab Applause Applause Applause

shukriya nandbandu ji sarahne ke liye
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«Reply #23 on: August 16, 2013, 09:29:48 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 15, 2013, 02:17:40 AM
zabardasttttttttttttttt dhaansu post abhi......... bht bht bht mast likha hai bilkul "zehar"........... waise MG sahi kehte the tujhe apna takhallus zehar hi rakhna chahiye ......

Khwaab palkoN se churaa lo
Tum mujhe apnaa banaa lo

waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tum kaho to maan le ye
Dil ko kuchh aise sambhaalo

bht kuhuuubbbbb........... Applause Applause

Raat aankhoN me guzaarooN
Shaam kuchh aisii banaa lo

romanticcc ..... bhai kiske liyee....  Winking Winking

Meri baahoN me samaa ke
MaaNg taaroN se sajaa lo

kyun nahi ... ab to maan hi jayegi wo bhii....... Giggle Giggle Giggle

Hamse seekhe ye zamaanaa
Pyaar bas aise nibhaa lo

tumse pyaarrrrrrrr.......  icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

Meri parchhaayiiN ho tum to
fir jagah apnii sambhaalo

best 1 yaarrrraaa.........  notworthy notworthy

Thanks Anu di... par aap jante ho na mai kisi ke liye nhai likhta sirf apne liye likhta hun.. ye sab mere bas ka nahi ..pyaar vyaar se kisi ko kuchh nahi mila.. mai to yakeen bi nahi karta ab isme .. best hai no seriousness bas mastiii hehee
waise aur bhi log hain single Sher Club mei jo mujhe "zeher" ka title de dena chahte hain..

or Utkarsh to jis din mujhe mila pehle khoob sunega... pichhle saal ke bad usse baat hi nahi hui meriii...
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«Reply #24 on: August 16, 2013, 12:22:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
bahut hi umda peshkash abhi ji.. behtareen kalaam se nawaza hai aapne... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #25 on: August 16, 2013, 02:12:53 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 16, 2013, 09:29:48 AM
Thanks Anu di... par aap jante ho na mai kisi ke liye nhai likhta sirf apne liye likhta hun.. ye sab mere bas ka nahi ..pyaar vyaar se kisi ko kuchh nahi mila.. mai to yakeen bi nahi karta ab isme .. best hai no seriousness bas mastiii hehee
waise aur bhi log hain single Sher Club mei jo mujhe "zeher" ka title de dena chahte hain..

or Utkarsh to jis din mujhe mila pehle khoob sunega... pichhle saal ke bad usse baat hi nahi hui meriii...



to rakh lo na ab tum apna naam zehar hi ...

aur utkarsh to tumse sirf sunega main to peetne wali hun unko..... pata nahi kis duniya me gayab ho gaye hain wo
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